《Ghoul Rising by(Tailspindark)》Chapter 4: Fierce Survival (edited)
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Chapter 4: Fierce
My hand entered through its open mouth breaking off its front teeth and traveling down into the back of its throat. My middle talon with the longest length poked through the flesh in the back of its esophagus and appeared out on the other side of its neck.
Gurgh
The creature gaged wretchedly its body leaning forward while some of its teeth dug into the back of my hand. Blood and saliva mixed together splattering out in violent arches.
Quickly I retracted my hand from its mouth, and slapped its face leaving deep gouges in its cheek while pushing it aside into another incoming white creature.
Shriek
From my front another creature lunged at me with claws out, and mouth wide open, looking to either claw or bite me with its spiky teeth.
Pushing myself off the wall with my back, I rushed forward ducking my head into its chest and shoving it backwards into a group of creatures.
Upon its fall, they all fell over into a pile and began too madly bite and claw at each other while still on the ground.
Back at my side the one I slapped away earlier approached me again. The hole in its cheeks had almost completely closed, and it looked furious.
Shhhhriiieeek
It screamed and grabbed me from the side wrapping my body into a bear hug. As I struggled to get free from its grasp, it wrapped its arms unnaturally across my back and interlocked its claws and fingers. Opening its mouth widely it chomps down onto my neck.
From my mouth escaped a sound different from my usual shrieks. It repeatedly chomped down on my neck and blood flowed down my body as I tried to force it away from me.
With my talons, I started to continuously stab into its stomach, but it didn't want to let go of me. Instead it continued to bite down fiercely on my neck.
Pierce pierce pierce pierce pierce
I stab into it abdomen several times, rocking its body backwards with each strike. Its blood began to form a pool below our feet.
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Screeeeee
A cry of pain escape its throat as multiple hole appeared in its belly. I stabbed faster rupturing it internal organ.
Chomp
To my left side another creature crawling on the ground decided to take a bite out of my leg. Pain coursed through my mind, infuriating me. I opened my mouth wide and slanted my head to the side biting into the neck of the one wrapped around my body. channeling my pain to enforce more power into my bite.
I rigorously ripped the flesh from its neck. Spitting it out continuously, yet still tasting it salty metallic flavour in my mouth.
I wish I could say it tasted bad, but the flavour was quite intersting. And I began to drool from hunger.
Screeee screee
It removed its mouth from my neck and it tried to jump away from my body. Instead I grabbed its hand with my right arm, and clawed into its half chewed away neck with my opposite talons.
Holding it close unwilling to let it run away and heal itself. I stab through it open neck wound in repetition.
Squelch squelch squelch squelch
Shriek
My talons made terrible wet noises as they dug into the depths of it neck, but for some reason it still wouldn't die. Half its neck was gone but it wouldn't die.
Sssshriieeeeek
I screamed and with all my strength I smashed my claw into the side of it head. It head detached from it body and was sent flying through the air. Finally, its body slumped on the ground at my feet., but I had no time to admire my work, instead Ignoring the body, I turned my furious gaze to the one gnawing at my ankle.
Bash
My leg came down atop its bald head, caving the side of its skull in on itself.
Bash bash bash
I curve stomped its face for good measure. I looked at the two bodies at my feet wearily, hoping that they wouldn't get up again.
they didn't move an inch. That was good, like zombies it seemed like their heads were the weak points.
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Shriek shriek
Shriek
Before I could celebrate my discovery, three of them ran towards me. I looked at the headless body in front of me and kick it forward.
Two of the creatures ran into the body and lost balance, they began to fall forward… Not letting the opportunity vanish I took the chance and made a semi fist punching it into one of their skulls. The skull cap cracked inwardly like a ceramic tile, both his and my momentum working together to give him a quicker death. Unfortunately thanks to the exchange I broke two fingers in my hand, and was a little too late to block the other two. The two arrived at my left and right side respectively biting into my shoulder and neck.
I screamed in fury and pain. Ignoring the one latched to my shoulder. I leaned to the right and rammed into the corner with the other creature. As the wall smashed against its back, it let out a scream and removed its fangs from my neck.
Because my hands were restrained in range of motion. I continued to lean back and forth repeatedly ramming it into the wall like a football player.
Ram
It's shoulder broke, and its arm went limp.
Ram
It stumbled backward against the wall.
Ram
The back of it head smashed against the wall.
Ram Ram Ram
It head smashed against the wall repeatedly till its bloody Brain matter began to leak.
Shriek
The one on my left struck out, and clawed against my temple, hot blood splashed down my face and I began to feel fear.
...
It started flaying its arms around wildly. And its movement created distorted layered images of its body.
It was like his body was splitting apart and re-joining itself rapidly. Or he was moving so fast that a part of his soul was having a hard time keeping up.
This was that distorted step skill. I didn't get to read what it did earlier, but the name, fits the image.
Moving faster and erratically its hands came closer and closer to my skull. It slashed and a wound appeared on my forehead. I retreat backwards till my back hit the wall.
Shrieeeeek
It's talon came straight down towards the top of my head 'distorted step' I shouted in my mind hoping the skill would respond unlike the status window.
Swish
I could suddenly see through the erratic movements of his arm. I swayed my head away from its incoming claw.
It missed me, just barely and the fingers of its hand broke against the wall.
Screeeee
It yelled in misery.
Ssshriek
I yelled with urgency as my hand raised and stab through its eye. Before it could react to the pain I reached around its head with my other hand, and held it in place as I dug through its eye socket. It struggled adamantly slashing it hands across my body and neck, however I still dug deeper and deeper swiveling my talon into it socket, in a trance of rage I fully uprooted its eye and dug into its brain.
...
I was breathing harshly. I was beginning to run out of steam. I looked around and saw several groups fighting against each other. No one was approaching me yet.
Looking at the corpses on the ground. I reached down and began to pile them in front of me as both obstacles and deterrents to my foes. I watched as the creatures killed each other around me remaining silent.
I had to regain my strength, the adrenaline wasn't going to help me anymore. Gazing upon the carnage I noticed there were still many creatures fighting. Soon they would come for me again. I don't care who comes, I will survive.
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here's a early one for people who hate cliffhangers.
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