《My Girlfriend: Death》What can I do next? Continue or drop?
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Wow...just wow. Upon writing this, the prologue has garnered around 270 views. That means around 270 people clicked on this short one shot. Wow... for some that might not seem impressive but when you think about it...270 people. That is still quite the number.
Originally, I intended this as a one shot. Something for quick giggles and that's that. I never really intended for this to be a series or anything. As I never really gave much thought into the story. It was just a neat idea I wanted to try. I didn't think it would be this successful.
The story is a big cliche, taking place in a highschool setting with supernatural elements. In truth, I don't know if I can really continue this or not without a solid foundation to go upon. Already, I can see myself stumbling and falling; trying to write a decent story. I'm very hesitant at the moment regarding the decision.
So that's why I would like to ask the reader for some advice. Any advice or comments would be appreciated.
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