《My Girlfriend: Death》What can I do next? Continue or drop?
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Wow...just wow. Upon writing this, the prologue has garnered around 270 views. That means around 270 people clicked on this short one shot. Wow... for some that might not seem impressive but when you think about it...270 people. That is still quite the number.
Originally, I intended this as a one shot. Something for quick giggles and that's that. I never really intended for this to be a series or anything. As I never really gave much thought into the story. It was just a neat idea I wanted to try. I didn't think it would be this successful.
The story is a big cliche, taking place in a highschool setting with supernatural elements. In truth, I don't know if I can really continue this or not without a solid foundation to go upon. Already, I can see myself stumbling and falling; trying to write a decent story. I'm very hesitant at the moment regarding the decision.
So that's why I would like to ask the reader for some advice. Any advice or comments would be appreciated.
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He Has Changed
[MIGHT HAVE SLOW UPDATES]I'm not the fun and sarcastic Sebastian you all remember anymore...What happened to Sebastian after Abby left? Why did he turn into this cold, mean, arrogant man?Abby Madden: The rich, wealthy self made millionaire. She's one of the top models in the world, beyond gorgeous. She has companies begging, at their knees for her to walk their runway. Everyone knows her name, people love her, want to be her. But do they know what happens right when she steps off that runway? What is hidden away behind her perfect smile? Sebastian Morales: He's the cold mafia leader, he kills anything that comes in his way and he does it without remorse. He has people running from his shadow, people fear even his name. Only shows the bit of emotion to his family. He's surrounded by a scary, cold aura. His blue eyes dull and ice cold. But he wasn't always like this...What happened to Sebastian that he forced himself to change? Quote: "I'll fist your hair around my hand and fuck you from the back so hard you'll beg for me to stop is what I'll do" he grits as his fingers around my neck tighten the slightest and his knee rubs harder against my wet core. Before I could say anything he brings me closer until our lips are an inch apart. "So, look at another man and I'll fuck you so hard you won't be able to walk straight for fucking weeks" he says quietly as his hands pull on the string of my dress letting it fall down before he lets go of me and walks out of the room leaving me in shock.
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A Flower in Death's Embrace
Gloxinia made a promise. As the Spirit of the Lake, her one and only dear friend had asked her to enjoy the youth and high school life she never got to enjoy. But, being basically like a newborn baby, nothing was going right for Gloxinia. On top of that, the Angel of Death she met before also entered the same school. How would Gloxinia's 'youth' turn out to be? Cover Illustration by Mren141 (Twitter)Title Design by dinusaurr (IG)
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One Shots Compilation
A compilation of different one shots. Suggestions are taken. Comment them of inbox me.
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Mason's Impossible Prey | ✔️
|#1 in Werewolf|"You're my prey. And when my prey runs away from me, I chase them."*Tiana's life made a drastic turnPushing her into a place she calls hellA place that screams death and chaos And a place making her the preyMason found a stubborn girl walking into his packMaking him cover the scars of his past Making him confused and different And making things even more impossible.__________________Current cover by: @happilylonely-Banners on every chapter by: @supernovass @PrincessMoonlightx
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Hurts So Good
• Elysian Leonidas •I was assigned to do a task. Sheild her from all the monsters lurking outside. It was a simple task. And I knew I would succeed but the moment she gazed at me with those warmth-filled eyes, the warmth I didn't deserve, I knew I was fucked up.• Farren Elizabeth Calathan •He was dark and scary, he was just here to protect me, nothing less, nothing more. He guarded me against all the harm and watched over me but I think my heart needed more guarding against his burning soul. After all, I was a moth and he was a flame and I couldn't help being attracted to him, only to burn in the end.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"There's a difference. If this continues, I will have to replace you."My blood boiled and I growled. "You take her away from me and I will forget we even share the same blood."His eyes narrowed further. "Are you forgetting your purpose here? She's your client, Elysian, nothing else.""She is my fucking wife! Don't call her my client ever again."
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Healing
"It's okay Sophie, I'm not going to hurt you sweetheart" Josh whispers in my ear as he holds me to his chest stroking my hair. I wish I could get over this annoying nervousness surrounding Josh's job. I've been with him a month. I should be used to seeing him in scrubs when he picks me up on the way home from work. But I just cant do it.Sophie is a pretty quiet freshmen at Penn State studying to be a criminologist. One morning she literally runs into Josh Miller, a hot doctor stood outside her dorm building. Will his gentle nature and soft touches help her overcome her nervousness surrounding the medical field or will she be scared forever and push the kind doctor away?
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