《Good Evil》Chapter 1 - The power of Evil -
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Chapter 1 - The power of Evil -
I feel drops of cold water falling onto my forehead. Disturbed by the cold sensation, I slowly open my eyes.
I try to remember why I am here but I can't remember, I can't remember anything. I feel empty and lost as I find myself in an unknown place, not knowing who I am. Only darkness is around me but I can clearly see every corner of the room. I try to stand up using my arms to supportmyself, but I can't move well and I fall multiple times, so I use the blades extending from my hair to stand slowly.
The blades are part of me, so I can feel them better than my arms. It seems my hair can stretch and morph into these blades. I can make up to ten of them at once. With their help, I can stand and I start to learn how to move my body.
At first it was hard to stand on two legs, even with the help of the blades, but after five minutes I am capable of walking without their help.
The room around me is 50m wide. I was sleeping in the very center of the room, surrounded by symbols carved into the stone floor. There is no door, no window, no way out, making me feel trapped. The room is empty, there is nothing except a stone table on the wall with something written on it. I start to walk toward that writing as if sucked in by some invisible force. I don't try to resist because I feel like I need to read it.
I can't read what it says, but the meaning appears in my head.
[When the world needs to change, someone with the power to bring that change will appear. He will be Evil and maybe save people, he will be Good and maybe bring despair. No one can tell how he will change the world, but the world needs only to change.]
[...]
Then I am that someone? I throw a powerful fist, breaking the table and the part of the wall the words were written on. I will do what I want and no one will give me orders! Lets find a way out of here. I look around, but there is no way out. Maybe I have to break through the walls? As I gather force in my arm, the symbols on the walls and floor start to glow brighter and brighter, until I can't keep my eyes open anymore. I feel my mind and body falling into the darkness as I lose consciousness. When I start to fade away, the darkness becomes light, and I regain consciousness...
「Loading the libraries...」
「Libraries out-of-date, updating...」
「Update complete.」
「Injecting the libraries...」
Hearing the incomprehensible words, an unbearable pain attacks my body. I feel like my head is being compressed and expanded again and again. Unable to move or cry out, I can only feel an incredible amount of pain as information is forced into my head. It feels like countless needles piercing my mind, and I hear the sound of my own skull cracking and regenerating. The pain attacks my body with more and more force until finally I lose consciousness.
[35%]
[44%]
[70%]
[89%]
[100%]
[Injection completed.]
I wake up with the feeling that a lot of time has passed since the moment I fainted.
Finally the pain has dissipated and I can breathe more easily. I don't understand what happened and I hope it ended there. I can move well now and I understand that I am now capable of reading and speaking in more than one language. Even if I can't test it, I somehow know it. Too bad I destroyed the writing on the wall, but what is done is done. When I start to search for a way out, the annoying voice appears again, directly in my mind.
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[Initializing teleportation sequence.]
[Teleportation will begin in 10 seconds.]
[Autodestruction will begin in 20 seconds.]
[1]
[5]
[10]
Countless lights like stars separate from the walls and floor, wrapping my body in light. I don't feel uncomfortable, but rather , I feel at peace, as if sleeping in a safe, and warm place. It is a feeling I’ve never felt before.
After the last lights wrap over my body, I feel a bit of pressure, as if deep underwater, and the scenery before me changes instantly.
What I see before me are four men and two badly beaten girls. One of the girls has emerald-like hair and eyes. The other girl has silver hair and beautiful yellow eyes. I can understand what is happening. Some bastards are trying to rape two young girls. This is the time to test my communication skills.
[“Heh, you guys are so ugly and smelly, so you can't find a woman? Then raping children is your unique way? Why don't you fuck between yourselves and let the poor girls go?”]
I say while emitting an arrogant aura.
The men are shocked for a moment, but now I can see anger on their faces.
[“hH-help u-us ple-plea…”. .."]
The green- haired girl tries to ask for help but she is stopped by one of the men who was close to her with a heavy kick to the at her stomach.
“[Who are you.?”]
The man who kicked the girl is approachesing me while speaking.
Yes, I need a name. I don't know if I ever had one and I don't care. What was written on that wall before? Ah…
[My name is Evil]
I said with no interest in my voice. The other three men start to laugh as they hear my name. I feel hurt, or maybe not.
The man with an arrogant smile on his face continues walking towards me while speaking and unsheathing his sword.
[I don't know how you got here, but turn back and leave.]
After seeing I am naked, he added.
[Or do you want to have some fun with us? Hahaha.]
I am already angry for the show before me. Now this piece of shit dares to make me angrier..
[Yes, I want to have some fun with you guys.]
I said with a cold smile.
[Then we will have some fun with your headless body!]
He said while licking his lips. I can see his deplorable and dirty soul impressing me with his ugliness.
The other three bastards leave the half dead girls sides and position themselves at my right, left and back while unsheathing their weapons. The 4th man is walking toward me while speaking.
[Hey did you hear m...]
I don't let him finish what he was trying to say and I sent his head flying with one of the blades now extending from my hair. His head hit the wall with such incredible force and speed, it left a painting made of blood. Fragments of flesh, skull, and brain covered the large wall. The headless body, spouting blood, takes another step forward before falling like a marionette whose strings were cut. The fear coming off the other three men was so palpable I could see it. The girls,however, did not emit that same fear. I am really impressed.
[You, w-what the hell did you do?]
The man on my left yells in panic, not understanding what just killed one of his friends. Maybe the speed was too great for him to see the blade coming from my back and hitting with great force,sending his head flying with a cracking sound. Fire appeared in his hand, forming a ball of fire. I'm surprised by what I see, but I understand that he is attacking. I don't let him finish as I send two blades toward him. I don't even let him scream. In less than a second, I have already cut his arms off neatly with one blade, while the other wrapped around his body to throw him toward the man behind me, sending them flying. I just tried to apply a bit more force, but they broke the thick wall, leaving behind limbs and blood. I am a bit surprised how easily they broke. With only my blades, I killed three of the four without moving from the spot.
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The last man has pissed himself, while the girls fainted. Maybe the spectacle was too much, even for them, but I don't understand why something like that can make someone faint. Mah, lets take care of the last one without destroying his equipment, since I need the clothes. Even if I don't remember wearing clothes, I can somehow understand how to put them on and why I have to put them on. I sent one blade to stab him through his head, killing him instantly.
I felt good because I could test my power and now I have something to sell to buy some clothes. I don't want to wear the stinky clothes of those pieces of shit I just killed, someone even pissed himself!
I take the arm of the man who tried to do some flashy thing with fire and I start to take large bites to suppress my hunger. Maybe I could learn to do that flashy trick he did. I see that the green haired girl Is waking up, so I approach her while still taking bites from the arm, but as she looked at me she fainted again. I throw the arm away. It seems I don't learn any skills from eating his flesh, and it don't even taste good raw.
For now, I have to wait for the girls to wake up.
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Chapter 1 - The power of Evil -
I feel drops of cold water falling down on my forehead. Disturbed by the cold sensation I slowly open my eyes.
I try to remember why I am here but I can't remember, I can't remember anything. I feel empty and lost as I find myself in an unknown place, not knowing who I am. Only darkness is around me but I can see well every corner of the room, I try to stand up using my arms to sustain myself but I can't move well and I fall mare than one time, so I use the ten blades extending from my hair to stand slowly.
The blades are part of me so I can feel them better than my arms, whit their help I can stand and I start to learn how to move my body.
At first it was hard to stand on two legs even with the help of the blades, but after five minutes I am capable of walking without their help.
I was sleeping in the very center of the room surrounded by symbols carved in the floor made of stone. There is no door, no window, no way out it make me feeling in trap. The room is empty, there is nothing except a table of stone on the wall with something written on. I start to walk toward that writing as if sucked in by some invisible force, I don't try to resist because I feel like I need to read it.
I can't read what it says but the meaning is appearing in my head.
[When the world need to change someone with the power to bring that change will appear. He will be Evil and maybe save people, he will be Good and maybe bring despair, no one can tell how he will change the world, but, the world need only to change.]
[...]
Then I am that someone? I trow a powerful fist breaking the table and part of the wall it was written on. I want to do what I want to do and none will give me orders. Let's find a way out of here. I look around but there is no way out, maybe I have to break trough the walls. As I gather force in my arm the symbols on the walls and floor start to glow brighter and brighter until I can't keep my eyes open anymore. I feel my mind and body falling into the darkness as I lose my consciousness. When I start to fade away the darkness become light and I regain my consciusness...
[Loading the libraries...]
[Libraries out of date updating...]
[Update complete.]
[Injecting the libraries...]
Hearing incomprehensible words an unbearable pain attack my body and I feel like my head is being compressed and expanded again and again. Unable to move or cry I can only feel the incredible amount of pain and informations forced in my head, I feel countless of needless stabbing my body, and I hear the sound of my bones cracking and regenerating, the pain attack my body with more and more force. Then I lose my consciousness.
[35%]
[44%]
[70%]
[89%]
[100%]
[Injection completed.]
I wake up with the feeling that a lot of time have passed from the moment when I fainted.
Finally the pain dissipated and I can breath. I don't understand what happened and I hope it ended there. I can move well now and I understand that I am now capable to read and speak in more than one language, even if I can't test it, I somehow know it, too bad I destroyed the writing on the wall, but what is done is done. When I start to search for a way out the annoying voice appear again directly in my head.
[Initializing teleportation sequence.]
[Teleportation will begin in 10 seconds.]
[Autodestruction will begin in 20 seconds.]
[1]
[5]
[10]
Countless of lights like stars separate from the walls and floor wrapping my body in light, I don't feel uncomfortable, rather I feel at peace, as if sleeping in a safe and warm place. A feeling I never felt before.
After the last light wrap my body I feel a bit of pressure as if underwater then the scenery before me change instantly.
What I see are four men and two badly beaten girls, one of the girls have emerald like hair and eyes, the other girl have silver hair and beautiful yellow eyes. I can understand what is happening, some bastards are trying to rape two young girls. Is the time to test my communication skills.
[Heh, you guys are so ugly and smelly so you can't find a woman? Then raping childs is your unique way? Why don't you fuck between you and let the poor girls go?]
I say while emitting an arrogant aura.
The men are shocked for a moment but now I can see anger on their face.
[h-help u-us ple-plea...]
The green haired girl try to ask for help but she is stopped by one of the men who were close the her with a heavy kick at her stomach.
[Who are you.]
The men who kicked the girl is approaching me while speaking.
Yes, I need a name, I don't know if I ever had one and I don't care. What was written on that wall before? Ah…
[My name is Evil]
I said with no interest in my voice. The other tre men start to laugh as they hear my name. I feel hurt, or maybe not.
The men whit an arrogant smile on his face keep walking towards me wile speaking and unsheathing his sword.
[I don't know how you get here but turn back and leave.]
After seeing me naked he add.
[Or do you want to have some fun with us? Hahaha.]
I am already angry for the show before me, now that piece of shit dare to make me angrier..
[Yes, I want to have some fun with you guys.]
I said with a cold smile.
[Then we will have some fun with your headless body.]
He said while liking his lips. I can see his deplorable and dirty soul impressing me with his ugliness.
The other tre bastards leaving the half dead girls side positioned themselves at my right, left and back unsheathing their weapons, while the 4th man is walking toward me while speaking.
[Hey did you hear m...]
I don't let him finish what he was trying to say and I sent his head flying with a one of the blades now extending from my hair. The head hit wall with incredible force and speed leaving a painting made of blood, fragment's of flesh and brain covering the large wall. The headless body take another step forward before falling like a marionette whose strings were cut. I can see the smell of fear coming from the other tre men, but not from the girls. I am really impressed.
[You, w-what the hell did you do.]
The men on my left yell in panic not understanding what just killed one of his friends, maybe the speed was to great for him to see the blade coming from mi back hitting with great force and sending his head flying with a cracking sound. Fire appeared in his hand forming a ball of fire. I'm surprised by what I see, but I understand that he is attacking. I don't let him finish as I send two blades toward him, I don't even let him scream, in less than a second I have already cut his arms neatly with one blade while the other wrap his body trowing him toward the men behind me send them flying. I just tried to apply a bit more of force but they broke the thick wall leaving behind limbs and blood. I am a bit surprised how easily they broke, with only my blades I killed tre of the four without moving from the spot.
The last men have pissed himself while the girls fainted. Maybe the spectacle was to much even for them, but I don't understand why something like that can make someone faint. Mah, lets take care of the last one without destroying his equipment because i realized that I am naked, even if I don't remember wearing clothes I can somehow understand how to put and why I have to put them on me. So I just sent one blade to stab trough his head killing him instantly.
I feel good because I could test my power and now I have something to sell and buy some clothes, I don't want to wear the stinky clothes of those piece of shit I just killed, someone even pissed himself.
I take the arm of the men who tried to do some flashy thing with fire and I start to take large bites to suppress my hunger and maybe I could learn to do that flashy trick he did. I see that green haired girl Is waking up so I go towards here while taking bits from the hand, but as she looked at me she fainted again. I throw the arm away, it seems I don't learn any skill eating his flesh and it don't even taste good, is raw.
For now I have to wait for the girls to wake up.
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