《The garden of Eden》Chapter 4 attribute
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Both me and my gramps got all the way to the back of the line. I looked around and saw that there was another line but all the kids in that line where in really flashy clothes. I only wore a plain black shirt and white shorts. They where probably kids from noble families that have come to check if they have magic. There where people in white robe checking that no one cut in line.
Edwin[gramps who are the people in white robes?]
Berg[ those are the people from the magic academy they are here to recruit anyone who has magic.]
I see so those are magicians I continued to look at them for a while. There where many kids crying because they did not have any magic. When ever a noble kid came out of the building with a sad expression their families would hide their faces in shame.Then all of a sudden I heard a loud voice.
Noble kid [ why the hell are you commoners here you guys are wasting everyone's time. You guys should leave because all of you are trash right dad!]
Kid's dad[ of course my son they are all trash.
Both father and son are full of shit.
It was his turn to go into the building he turn to look at his dad.
Noble kid [ I'm going to get a powerful attribute and go to the magic academy.]
Ten minutes later he came out of the building while crying
Kid's dad[ you have shame me and the whole family how dare you not have magic damn after everything I wasted on you.]
They both left and I was trying not to laugh at the two. We waited another five minutes and then it was my turn. We walk in to the building there was a large hallway we walked until we reached a large room. We went inside and there was an old man he had a large beard and his head was bald he unlike everyone in the room wore a purple robe.
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There where five people in total not counting me or gramps. The room was huge and there was a small table with a cristal ball on top.
Old man [ when you touch the cristal ball it will shine into the color of your attribute, but if you have no magic then it will not shine at all.]
The attributes and there color are as follow
Fire-red
Water-blue
Earth-brown
Wind-green
Lightning-yellow
Light-white
Darkness-black
I stepped in front of the cristal ball and touched it nothing happen for a second but then it began to shine. It was two colors half of the cristal was yellow while the other was black. That meant I had the lightning and darkness attribute. There was a big commotion in the room everyone had their eyes on me it made me feel uncomfortable.
Old man [ the darkness attribute!!! The last time anyone had it was more than two thousand years ago I never thought I would see anyone who could use it.]
I guess what pochi said was true about only a hand full have gotten this attribute.
Old man [boy please come and join my school You won't have to pay for anything all of your classes will be cover and you could sleep in the dorms what do you say!]
i will get stronger if I go to his school and everything will be cover so there's no reason to decline his offer I look at my gramps for approvel he nods that it is ok.
Edwin[ ok I accept but are you sure that I won't pay for school?]
Old man [ of course I am the principal of the school my name is Abraham Springfield.]
That took me by surprise I never expected the principal of the academy to be here himself.
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Abraham[ you could enter school once you are eight years old. So we will wait for you for two years ok boy.]
So I won't start school right away.
Abraham[ oh right before you go could I know your name boy.]
Edwin[ Edwin Drago ]
I proudly told him my name After that me and my gramps left the building I was happy at what I got as my attributes.
Edwin[ hey gramps could you teach me how to use the sword please.
Berg [ of course I will teach you ,wait till we tell your mom and grandma of what happened today they won't believe it.]
We got home late and it was already dark.when we told my mom and grandma they where proud my mom kissed me in the cheek and we all went into are rooms pretty late.
(Abraham pov)
I came to the city of yomos so I could recruit young kid who have potential there where only a few who had magic.then a boy came he had a black shirt white shorts but what really got my attention where his dark blue hair and red eyes. I had never seen or heard of anyone with red eyes in my entire life. He went to the cristal ball and when he touched it the ball glowed two colors yellow and black everyone in the room was shock because the darkness attribute had not been seen in two thousand years. I must get this boy into my school after he and his grandfather left I was happy.I want to see what kind of path he will choose.
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