《The garden of Eden》Chapter 8 dumbor
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Our wagon got at the back of the line.we waited for a while until it was our turn we paid four copper coins. It is two copper coins per person a soldier checked our belongings and when he finished he gave our things back. When we passed the the wall I saw the Capitol of Eternia, Eternia city for the first time.
The wagon moved through the city there where many people around this was even more people than when I went to the city of yomos to check my attributes two years ago.
Merchant [ Edwin this is where we go our separate ways]
Edwin [ ok]
I got out of the wagon and began to stretch my arms and legs.
Edwin [ thank you for everything ]
Merchant[ you are welcome and good luck in school.]
After that he left me there in the middle of the road. I began to look around there where many stores they sold armory and food . Now that I think about it I don't know where the magic academy is located. I keep walking around and when I walked by an alley I hear people arguing. There where three men and a dwarf.
Man[hey dumbor I heard that you could make great weapons.]
Man 2[ yea why don't you make one for us and nothing bad will happen ]
Man 3 [ yeah hehehehe]
Dumbor[ shut up I won't make any weapons for fools like you ! ]
All three of the men had faces red with anger at dumbor for what he just said.
Man [ why you bastard I'm going to kill you you stupid dwarf.]
He took out a rusty sword and pointed at the dwarf name dumbor. I jumped in front of the dwarf to protect him.
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Man[ what the hell do you want little girl you want to play the hero or something.]
This bastard did he just call me a girl I'm going to kick his ass! I jumped at the man and punched him in the face.
Man 2 and 3[ you bitch]
They took out small knives and tried to stab me but I jumped and manage to dodge them I landed behind one of the man and since are heights where different I punched him in his crotch
Man 2 [ aaaaaaaaa]
He fell to the ground screaming and his eyes full of tears the other man tried to cover his crotch but I kicked him faster and he fell like the other.
Edwin [ that's what you get for calling me a bitch]
dumbor who was standing there the whole time came closer to me. He was a short stocky man with a big beard and brown hair
Dumbor[ thanks for helping me there little girl.]
Edwin [ I'm a guy ok]
Dumbor was shocked to hear that I was actually a boy is it that hard to believe that I'm a boy.
Dumbor [seriously I have never seen such a feminine looking guy.]
Edwin[ I see oh yeah why where those guys bothering]
Dumbor [ about that why don't you come to my shop where we could talk.]
Edwin[ ok]
We came out of the alley and walked through the big streets of the city. We walked until we reached a small shop it looked like a weapon store this is probably Dumbor's shop. We went inside and there where no weapons we sat in a small table.
Dumbor [ yeah they wanted me to make weapons for them they somehow found out that I was once a famous blacksmith .
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Edwin [ seriously you where famous then why do you have a small shop now.]
He did not say anything for a second
Dumbor [ many people where jealous of me and my talent so when they got a chance they banished me from my home the mountains of urk.]
I kind of feel guilty for making him remember something so painful.
Dumbor [ don't worry about it it was a long time ago hahahahaha.]
Edwin [ this is a blacksmith shop right?]
Dumbor[ yeah why do you ask]
Edwin [ well there's no weapons around so I was just wondering.]
Dumbor [ I only make weapons for people who I like]
Edwin [ I see]
Dumbor. [ do you want me to make you a weapon.]
Edwin [ well I do want a weapon since I will start school tomorrow.
Dumbor [ are you entering the magic academy.]
Edwin[ yea ]
Dumbor [ I see then I will make you a weapon so you could show it off in front of everyone.]
Edwin[ really you will.]
Dumbor [ yea you just have to tell me what weapon you want me to make.]
Edwin[ ok thanks]
After that I tell him that I wanted a katana because I always wanted to use one in my old world. But apparently he had never heard of a katana so I had to tell him how the katana looks.
Dumbor[ the sword will be done in one week ok.]
Edwin[ ok thanks oh yeah I have not given you my full name yet it's Edwin Drago.]
Dumbor [ I'm dumbor I threw my last name away.
We shook hands this guy will be a great help in the future. I then ask dumbor for directions to the a academy and then go my way it's already late afternoon. I walk for a while and the city started to change the closer I got the shops where more elegant and the people where all dressed in better clothes. I then got to the gates of the academy they where huge but not as big as the ones around the city.
I get closer to the gate and one of the guards comes closer to me.
Guard[ what do you want]
Edwin [ I'm going to be attending this school.]
Guard[do you have the paper.]
I give him my papers and he lets me go in. he tells me to go straight to the building ahead I walk toward it I entered the building there's a woman she has a white robe like the ones I saw two years ago I walk to her.
Lady[ what's your name ]
Edwin[ it's Edwin Drago]
Lady[ ok your name is here you should head to the boys dorms and leave your stuff. Each person has a roommate so you won't get a room for yourself. The new student introduction will be held tomorrow in the auditorium.]
I head to the dorms I guess I'm going to meet my roommate right now.
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