《Superficial Story》Chapter 15 - Goddess Mia
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I’m at a big gate with numerous inscriptions and murals on it.
This is the entrance to Goddess Mia’s place.
Her own dominion.
I guess the souls of dragons, vampires and other sentient monsters come here after they die. Since they don’t follow the common rules of Morals and so on.
So fucking unfair.
They should go to my place.
Let’s talk to her.
Who knows.
If everything goes right…
…
Maybe I should try talking to Sophia first?
…
Nah.
She hasn’t been here since the beginning.
I want someone who can give me more info. And this one here would be it.
Let’s go.
[Notice]: You are about to enter a [Neutral God]’s domain. This domain is not on your sphere of influence. Divine power restrictions DO apply.
Divine power restrictions? What the fuck?
[Answer]: Divine power restrictions apply once a god enters another god’s of same or higher authority realm. Neutral gods are considered of equal authority to all other gods, except the God Emperor. Those restrictions are as follows.
He.
Basically I’m immortal and all-powerful on my own realm, but on another god’s realm I can be harmed and de-empowered as if I was on the physical plane.
I also have limited usage of karma points, needing to overwrite the god’s authority over his realm in order to use them here.
Dangerous, but fuck it.
My immortality isn’t affected by this, besides, I can always run away, right?
[Answer]: Interference. Denied. The act of leaving another god’s realm can be denied temporally with the use of karma points.
Tsc.
And how easy can she do it?
[Answer]: Interference. Denied. Restricted mobility costs 1 billion karma points, standard price.
Fuck it.
I want to talk to this bitch, I will talk to this bitch.
How long can she keep it up?
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[Answer]: Interference. Denied. The effect’s standard time is one minute.
She can’t do jack shit in this time. Let’s enter.
[Mia] - To think you would come to my realm on your own accord. How very stupid of you.
[Notice] - Harmful interference is being projected on your existence. Would you like to overwrite it? Cost: 50 billion and 1 Karma Points of any nature.
He.
As if I had 50-fucking-billion karma with me.
[Notice] - You have been subjected to harmful interference.
Power limitation is on course.
Special powers are being taken away.
Denied. [Pantheon] interference in effect. Immortality cannot be taken.
Divinity Transference is starting.
Denied. [Pantheon] interference in effect. Divinity cannot be transferred.
Emotional limitation is on course.
Bravery is being taken away.
Impulsiveness is being taken away.
Cunningness is being taken away.
Joy is being taken away.
Happiness is being taken away.
Love is being taken away.
Willpower is being taken away.
Desire to act is being taken away.
Resistance to obedience and servitude is being taken away.
Emotional Input is on place.
Despair is being allocated.
Pain is being allocated.
Shame is being allocated.
Humiliation is being allocated.
Bodly form is being dissolved.
Violation is being allocated.
Desire to give up is being allocated.
Eternal servitude is being allocated.
Denied by Divinity Equality Principle.
Partial servitude is being allocated.
Denied by God’s position as King of Evil Gods.
Subservience is being allocated.
Denied by God’s position as King of Evil Gods.
Desire to serve is being allocated.
Motion and Movement limitations are being allocated.
Interference finished.
31 billion karma points have been used on applying the effects above.
19 billion karma points will be used to extend the limitation’s duration.
The imprisoned god is of King class.
Imprisonment lasts 1 minute extra for every billion karma points used on time extension.
Expected duration of the effects: 0 millenia, 0 years, 0 months, 0 days, 0 hours, 20 minutes, 0 seconds.
Well… shit.
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