《Broken System》Uh,That's a Dungeon..
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Jack wakes up and looks at the time which is currently 6:30 AM on Sunday.'So I have to go back to school tomorrow. Well let's check out the new missions i guess.'
- Missions - Wash The Dishes:5 Credits, 25 XP, UNKNOWN, UNKNOWN.
'Uh.. I can only see one mission and the other 2 are unknown? System? What you doing man' Jack looks at the missions confusedly but can't figure it out so he just goes to wash the dishes.
10 minutes later
Ding - Host Has Completed Wash The Dishes Mission:Obtained 5 Credits, 25 XP
Ding - Host Has Leveled Up:Gained 10 Hp, 10 Mp, 1 Of Each Stat,5 Stat Points,5 Credits
Ding - Host Has Gained Access To Enter Beginner Level Undead Dungeon.
'Dungeon? Is it like those dungeons with monsters and bosses every few levels? Wait since I got that doesn't that mean that i can level up faster? Well let's look at my status.'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:3(400 xp to lvl up)
-Health:70/70(0.7 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 30/30(0.7 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:10
-Speed:5
-Dexterity:5
-Vitality:8
-Endurance:7
-Wisdom:9
-Intelligence:8
-Charm:-8
-Weight:252.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List:N/A
-Stat Points:5
-Credits:63
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Looks like there is a dungeon tab now, Let's look at it.'
- Dungeons - Beginner Level Undead Dungeon - Can Enter, Unknown,Unknown,Unknown,Unknown
'Oookay so I can only see and enter the Beginner dungeon huh,Well let's enter it...WAIT i nearly entered a DUNGEON without anything that could help me holy, Let's see what i can buy in the shop that could help..
- Item Shop -
- Weapons Only - Sword:45 Credits,Spear:50 Credits,Knife:7 Credits,Military Knife:20 Credits,Five Seven Pistol: 60 Credits.
'Okay not much but there is stuff I can use, Let's buy a Sword I guess.'Jack purchases the Sword and it falls infront of him, It's a normal looking Iron Sword, Nothing special about it.'Okay, Let's enter the Dungeon now'
Ding - Host Is Entering Dungeon 3...2...1... Welcome To The Dungeon Host!
Jack looks around and he is in a small room that is blocked off with a door, He assumes it is where the monsters are so he opens it and peeks out.'Holy that's a lot of zombies and skeletons and damn it stinks.'jack holds his sword and stabs it at the head of the closest zombie to him, Cutting it off cleanly.
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Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:25 XP, 10 Credits.
Ding - Host Has Killed His First Monster:Obtained 50 XP, 30 Credits.
'Oh my god that's a lot of xp and credits! Just normal zombies give me 10 credits, I even got a first kill bonus haha let's go kill some more.'Jack cuts the heads off 3 more zombies then backs up to his small room dragging 3 more with him and kills them one by one.
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie: Gained 25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:Gained 25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:Gained 25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:Gained 25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:Gained 25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:Gained 25 XP,10 Credits.
'Wow that's a lot of stuff huh,Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:3(175 xp to lvl up)
-Health:70/70(0.7 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 30/30(0.7 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:10
-Speed:5
-Dexterity:5
-Vitality:8
-Endurance:7
-Wisdom:9
-Intelligence:8
-Charm:-8
-Weight:252.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List:N/A
-Stat Points:5
-Credits:118
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Damn i have over 100 credits and I am close to leveling up again! Guess it's time to farm haha'
5 Hours Later
Ding - Host Has Slain Skeleton:25 XP,10 Credits
Ding - Host Has Leveled Up: Gained 10 Hp,10 Mp,1 Of Each Stat,5 Stat Points,5 Credits.
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:5(1600 xp to lvl up)
-Health:90/90(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 50/50(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:12
-Speed:7
-Dexterity:7
-Vitality:10
-Endurance:9
-Wisdom:11
-Intelligence:10
-Charm:-6
-Weight:252.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List:N/A
-Stat Points:15
-Credits:360
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Haha I have so many credits! I leveled up a few times aswell! Well, It's time to head to back my room.'
Ding - Host Is Being Transfered Back To His Room, Please Don't Move. 3....2....1...
Welcome Back Host.
Jack looks at himself, He is covered in zombie blood and guts and smells horrible so he decides to take a shower to clean it off.'Now let's look at what i can buy with my credits.'
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- Shop -
- Item Shop - Shirt: 5 Credits, Pants:5 Credits,jacket:10 Credits,Socks:3 Credits,Underwear:5 Credits,Knife:7 Credits,Fingerless Gloves:7 Credits, Military Knife:20 Credits,Military Gloves:15 Credits, Five Seven Pistol:55 Credits, 5x7.28mm Ammo: 10 Credits per Clip,Sword:45 Credits,Spear:45 Credits,Health Potion:15 Credits,Mana Potion:15 Credits, Antidote:30 Credits...
- Skill Shop - Martial Arts(Beginner): 25 Credits, Martial Arts(Intermediate): 50 Credits, Martial Arts(Advanced): 75 Credits, Sword Mastery:30 Credits, Knife Mastery:25 Credits,Spear Mastery:30 Credits, Gun Mastery:40 Credits,Hand to Hand Mastery:35 Credits, Mana Control:50 Credits, Mana Manipulation:55 Credits, Mana Arrow:20 Credits, Fire Magic:60 Credits,Water Magic:60 Credits,Earth Magic: 60 Credits,Wind Magic:60 Credits, Lightning Magic:65 Credits,Ice Magic:50 Credits,Healing Magic:70 Credits,Teleportation Magic:150 Credits,Inventory:250 Credits, Fireball:20 Credits, Fire Spear:25 Credits, Fire Wall:25 Credits,Waterball:20 Credits, Water Arrow:25 Credits,Water Wall:30 Credits,Wind Cutter:25 Credits, Wind Wall;25 Credits,Wind Arrow:20 Credits,Earth wall:20 Credits,Earth Spikes:35 Credits,Earth Arrow:25 Credits,Lightning Arrow:20 Credits, Lightning Spear:35 Credits,Lightning Maelstorm:90 Credits,Ice Arrow:20 Credits,Ice wall:30 Credits,Ice Path:20 credits,Ice Blizzard:80 Credits,Heal:35 Credits,High Heal:50 Credits, Area Heal:120 Credits,Cure Disease:75 Credits,Mana Regeneration:80 Credits,Health Regenation:80 Credits, Increased Smell:10 Credits, Increased Hearing:10 Credits, Increased Taste:10 Credits, Increased Touch:10 Credits,Increased Sight:10 Credits.
- Misc Shop - $100 - 10 Credits, $1000:100 Credits,$10000:1000 Credits,Travel To World Of Host Choice:25000 Credits.
'Credits'
- Credits:360
'Okay, Let's by mana control and mana manipulation.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Mana Control,Minus 50 Credits. 310 Credits Remaining.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Mana Manipulation, Minus 55 Credits. 255 Credits Remaining.
'Okay let's try to manipulate mana outside my body for now.'Jack trys to manipulate Mana outside his body and his body can be seen having a somewhat blue hymn to it.'So this is how it feels to use mana, Let's try and make it into shapes with Mana Control.' Jack makes his mana turn into shapes like a table,a ball,an arrow and so on and it goes smoothly.'Wow just by having mana control I can turn my mana into anything i want 100% of the time, That's awesome! Oh yeah i still have 255 credits, Let's buy Fire magic and a spell for it to make it easier in the dungeon.'
Ding - Host Has Purchased Fire Magic,Minus 60 Credits. 195 Remaining.
Ding - Host Has Purchased FireBall,Minus 20 Credits. 175 Remaining.
'Now I need a new Sword since my current one is basically broken. I might aswell buy the Sword Mastery aswell to make it easier to use my sword.'
Ding - Host Has Purchased Sword,Minus 45 Credits. 130 Remaining.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Sword Mastery,Minus 30 Credits. 100 Remaining.
'Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:5(1600 xp to lvl up)
-Health:90/90(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 50/50(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:12
-Speed:7
-Dexterity:7
-Vitality:10
-Endurance:9
-Wisdom:11
-Intelligence:10
-Charm:-6
-Weight:252.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation,Fire Magic, FireBall,Sword Mastery.
-Stat Points:15
-Credits:100
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Oh yeah, I still have my Stat Points. Hmm.. Put 3 into Weight, 3 into Strength, 3 into Speed,3 Into Dexterity, and 3 into Intelligence.
Ding - Host Has Put 3 Points Into Weight, Lost 60 Weight.
Ding - Host Has Put 3 Points Into Strength, 15 Total
Ding - Host Has Put 3 Points Into Speed, 10 Total
Ding - Host Has Put 3 Points Into Dexterity,10 Total
Ding - Host Has Put 3 Points Into Intelligence,13 Total.
'Alright, I feel a crap ton stronger and a bit smarter, I also feel so much better now that my body is skinny! My weight is only 192.6 now, I can do a lot more with my body now. Well let's go to sleep and then get ready for school tomorrow.'
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