《Broken System》Transfer Student
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Fuah.. That was a nice sleep. Well let's get dressed and head off to school. When I walk past the mirror I see a handsome looking dude and was confused. That's me? When did I get so handsome? Ah wait my Charm. Well Let's look at my status.
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:20(15000 xp to lvl up)
-Health:340/340(0.32 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 275/275(0.32 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:103
-Speed:63
-Dexterity:63
-Vitality:42
-Endurance:38
-Wisdom:42
-Intelligence:46
-Charm:20
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"11'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal,High Heal,Earth Magic,Water Magic,Ice Magic,Inventory,Teleportation Magic,WaterBall,Water Wall,Fire Spear,Fire Wall,Water Arrow,Earth Wall,Earth Spikes,Earth Arrow,Lightning Arrow,Ice Wall,Ice Path,Ice Blizzard,Cure Disease,Martial Arts(Advanced),Hand To Hand,Spear Mastery,Gun Mastery,Darkness Magic,Dark Arrow,Dark Spear,Shadow Control,Sneak,Shadow Ride,Invisibility, Lightning Hurricane
-Stat Points: 21
-Credits: 18900
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
Hmm my charm is only at 20 even after all these level ups. Is it the max?
Charm - Host's appearance makes many girls drool and even some men. Maximum Charm is 20.
Well.. That's a pretty accurate description and so it maxes at 20. Interesting. Well let's take a look at what all the other stats do, never did that.
Strength - How much damage Host can deal out. Maxes at 1000
Speed - How fast Host can move. Maxes at 1000
Dexterity - How fast Host can swing his weapons and fists and the accuracy. Maxes at 1000
Vitality - Increases host natural health regen. Maxes at 1000
Endurance - Damage Host takes is lowered the higher the stat is. Maxes at 1000
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Wisdom - How much the Host can remember and reduces spell cost. Maxes at 1000
Intelligence - How smart the Host is and how fast brain works and make spell damage higher. Maxes at 1000.
So my Intelligence and Wisdom are a lot more useful higher for my magic. Well let's add 10 to Wisdom and 11 to Intelligence.
On the way to School
"He's so handsome!"(Girl 1)
"Who is he? He's wearing our school uniform! Is he a new student?(Girl 2)
"Damn we have another handsome guy at our school boys"(Guy 1)
"DAMMIT *Sob*"(Guy 2-5)
Wow they think I am a transfer student again, Well not that surprising. Also I sorta feel bad for the guys.. Nah screw them.
Jack's class
"Quiet down everyone. We have a transfer student today. Come introduce yourself."(Teacher)
"Hello, My name is David. Nice to meet you all.*Smile* "(David)
"KYAA"(Girls)
Well did not expect that coming. This dude is as handsome as me with my Charm at 20. All the girls will freak out whenever he smiles again haha. This is gonna be a bit fun now.
"Alright David. You can sit in the back beside Jack."(Teacher)
"Yes teacher."(David)
After he sits down he turns to talk to me.
"Hello, My name is David. Nice to meet you."(David)
"Hey. My name is Jack, Nice to meet you aswell."(Me)
"Hey do you know what page we are on for the class? I wasn't told earlier on."(David)
"Oh yea, We are on uhh.. Page 374."(Me)
"Thanks."(David)
45 minutes later
"Hey Jack. Want to eat lunch with me?*Smile* "(David)
After the girls stopped swarming David he came to invite me to lunch.
"Sure, Let's head to the Cafeteria.*Smile* "(Me)
"KYAAAA"(Girls)
Oh man school is going to be so much more fun with this guy. Two handsome guys together smiling and making all the girls crazy and watching boys curse us. This will be so much better of a school year.
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"What do you recommend eating, Jack?(David)
"Hmmm, You should buy a Salad with Fish or a Hamburger. Both are good."(Me)
"Hmm, Well let's get the Salad and Fish. Might aswell eat healthier."(David)
"Yea i'll get that aswell."(Me)
After we pay for our food we walk to a free table and sit down to eat. That's when we notice everyone is looking at us every now and then. David also notices and points it out.
"Huh, Why is everybody looking at us so much?"(David)
"Well, Probably because whenever you smile it's handsome as heck."(Me)
"Is that so? I'm just smiling normally."(David)
"...You do realize you are basically the most handsome person at this school right?"(Me)
"Really? I thought you were."(David)
"I might be good looking but I am basically a cold person, Don't really smile much or anything like you."(Me)
"You should smile more then, We can be the idols of the school haha."(David)
"Don't even joke about that man, If someone heard you it would probably happen."(Me)
"You think? It might be interesting though."(David)
"Yea it will be interesting seeing you surrounded by girls constantly.*Grin* "(Me)
"Haha.. You better help me if that happens. Like seriously. Help me if it does."(David)
"Hahaha, We will see my friend, We will see."(Me)
1 hour later
After we ate lunch and lunch break ended me and David headed to our next class. It was literally a repeat of what happened first period.
David got surrounded by girls and some boys were there but were getting pushed around by the girls. It was funny as hell when he looked at me for help.
"Hahaha I warned you David."(Me)
"Come on man! You could of helped me out atleast."(David)
"And what? Be dragged in that with you? I'll pass on that my comrade, May you be blessed with fortune of war.(Me)
"Ugh.. I'll get you for this, Jack!"(David)
"I welcome you attempt. * Smirk* "(Me)
After that the teacher came in and we started the boring english class, Which i am somehow good at now thanks to my increased stats. David looks like a dead fish right now. I guess i should help me later haha.
School Gate
"See you tomorrow, David."(Me)
"Yeah, You better help me with my English then man, that's what you owe me now."(David)
"Haha, Don't worry. I'll get you second place in English on the midterms."(Me)
"Whos first place going to be?"(David)
"Me. Obviously. *Smug smile* "(Me)
"Good luck. Cya then"(David)
"Yup. Later"(Me)
In the Dungeon
BOOM
Ding - Host has killed Hybridx10. Plus 1000 Xp,500 Credits.
Man I am clearing this so much faster now that I increased my Int and Wis. I guess it really does help with Magic.I'm already at the 14th floor now. I'll be able to fight the next boss tomorrow I guess.
BOOM
Ding - Hos has killed Hybridx30. Plus 3000 Xp, 1500 Credits.
Well now this floor is cleared. Let's head back home to sleep.
Davids House
"Jack seems like me, Someone with Magic. I could feel mana all over him.. I wonder if it's just natural or hes able to use magic. I hope he can use magic, I need someone like me around...."(David)
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