《Void God Emperor》Suggestions ,critics,mistakes and helps
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Hey Guys,I decided to create a thread for the readers to suggest and critic me !
Well some people are saying that I don't know how to write or the story is good and so bla bla bla.
I want to hear you guys tell me what to do.
Well as I have told some people I don't write for money ,but I write to experience the emotion of writing and have fun writing .
Many popular authors have started from nothing to everything.
I have read many novels like :Stellar Transformation,Panlong ,I Shall the Heaven,True Martial World,Xian Ni and so.
And these ideas of mine come purely from these xianxia novels .
As you know xianxia means immortal hero.
But...you can't leave a well without help can you ? ^.^
Thus from today until the day I die (Just Joking) everyday I shall read anything that is wrote here.
You also can write small stories, if you want that is .
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The Acts of Androkles
Elevator pitch: '300' meets 'Lone Wolf and Cub'. A retired veteran has to keep some orphans from being eaten by horrible monsters. This fiction contains the professionally-published novel Obstacles as well as the ongoing sequels. Back Cover Copy:Androkles, son of Paramonos, spent twenty-five years in the world’s greatest army trying to earn enough money to buy back his good name. He’s battle-scarred, weary, and heartbroken after decades of watching dear friends die, but he survived. He’s ready to retire and be welcomed as a hero, finally able to see the reward he sacrificed so much to achieve. There’s only one problem: his wife just fled civilization with all his hard-won savings. Now he must pursue her north, through desperate bandits, ravening beasts, and worse. But after he rescues a pair of orphans from starvation, he is faced with his most difficult challenge yet: a question that goes to the very heart of honor. The consequences might be deeper than he realizes, and it’s not just his life on the line… Updates: Irregular but Ongoing Book title in the chapter heading. If you like what you're reading, please consider purchasing a copy of the published novel Obstacles: books2read.com/u/mleazq
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Sunchasers
As Arthur opens his eyes, he finds himself in an unknown place, smack-dab in the middle of nowhere, without anything to help him survive save for a set of pyjamas and little knowledge of outdoors survival. Follow his steps as he tries to figure out where he is, and what will become of him. Sunchasers is a Fantasy novel with a sprinkle of lightweight sort of LitRPG (i.e. without Classes or Stats). While the first ten or so chapters of Book I are about Arthur's lonesome survival, the rest of the story focuses more on exploration and the protagonist will come in contact with other people quite often. The novel is being written in British English and using the metrics system. (I do not own the Cover) Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy this journey! I have a Discord Server, Join Here!
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MONSTER MMORPG : MAYHEM ONLINE
Flynn Grey was a college dropout and a guy trying to make ends meet from odd jobs. He started playing the world's best fully immersive VRMMO game, Mayhem, in hopes of making a fortune from it. Months passed without any success, and as he lost hope, a knife in-game turned his life around. Obtaining a hidden class and a monster race, he defeats his past and paves his way into becoming a true Legend in both worlds....//DreamNote//The story features a monster in-game protagonist. His race would change around chapters 20-30. The story's pacing would depend on the arcs, but I'll try to keep it at the fast-mediums. This story WILL have a harem, although the romance won't start early, and it will be slow as building characters is necessary for romance.
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Nightmare
Can you kill a god? The thought is crazy. Impossible. No one in their right mind would even think of it. Until it happens. Nightmare is gone from the world. His powers have been transferred over to someone else. Will this person be up to the challenge and take the mantle of Nightmare?
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The Dungeon King
Travelling through the void, escaping Earth's destruction, I carry within me, a hope for humanity. Landing in the wilderness, I have two missions, survive and complete my mission. Will I be King or Pauper? No, I will become the King! Alex is a survivor, that escaped from a ruined earth. He was given a mission by the gods, carrying the hope of his friends and companions to a new world. However when he arrives, he finds himself on the verge of death, in a new land. He is quickly put to the test, he has to learn how to fight, struggle resist with all his might against strong foes and tribulations besetting him from all directions. And he has to keep in the back of his mind, the mission he was entrusted with. Join him on this adventure where he discovers a new world full of wonder and whimsy, danger and oppurtunity. Join him as he drags himself from nothing to fighting against the entire world. Note: The story starts out quite light-heartedly to allow myself to ease readers into the story, allowing me to world-build and put the system in place first. Hopefully after that, I will be able to mix both light-hearted fair with a gritty undertone to tell a good story
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Never Gonna Leave You
The trio of Indian Cricket who brought a shine and pride to the game and made everyone fall in love with that. More than the game the thing which was admired by everyone was their bonding. The bond they shared was unbreakable or that's what everyone thought! A Mahi-Rohit-Virat (MahiRoRat/MahiRoVi) story! Happy Reading!
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