《All World Online》Authors Notice: Kinda important, but not really
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Anyways, this wont be long. Ive realized that I use the MC's name too often when I write, this is because I write, I write one sentence at a time. For example, Ill wake up and while Iam waiting for my breakfast to cook, Ill write one sentence, stop and then go eat my breakfast. Then like an hour later, when Iam sitting down in the subway, Ill write another sentence or two and eventually when I have enough, I just combine all of it together to make the chapter. Obviously this isnt always the case, cuz if it was then my chapters would take forever to come out, but you get what Iam saying. Also, I wanted my writing to be clear for everyone, make sure that the reader knows who is doing what, but in the end, it just makes the sentence sound somewhat stupid and repetitive. Fortunately Ive gone back and edited the previous chapters including the prologue, and Iam sure that you guys, as readers, noticed my overuse of the MC's name because ironaxe had mentioned it in a comment in my first chapter. Anyways I would just like to apologize and say that Ill try harder make sure that the same issue doesnt happen again in the future chapters. Oh and hopefully the next chapter comes out by Wednesday or Thursday. I still need to finalize the pets skills/abilities and etc which takes some time, cuz its gotta make sense. Anyways, see you during the next update :) Also, if I dont use the MC's name often enough from now on, please tell me so that I can adjust it. I am still very new to writing and am definitely willing to take advice from the readers.
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