《The Unforgiving World》Chapter 1
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I don't know if its everything I wanted the first chapter to be but I have great vision of where I want this to go.
Chapter 1 The screwed up start
"Arghhhh my eyes what the hell happened?" I said in agony, I hear many voices speaking all at once, some of it sounded like Russian, Japanese or Korean, and a unison of voices saying something fast and what sounded like German mixed with Italian, it almost sounded alien.
then I hear a deep voice say calmly "Don't move around too much you will hurt yourself, just wait until your vision comes back, you don't want to be like me I think I tripped over the Japanese kid while I couldn't see... although I could have tripped over the Russian girl."
"W-where are we?" I asked.
"I'm not sure but these people speaking in unison haven't stopped talking for about 4 minutes, I bet their throats are dry as hell." ???
"Did you say there is a Japanese kid and a Russian girl? so there are 4 of us here in total?" I asked hurriedly as I was curious.
"No, there's another girl fidgeting around with a scared look on her face, just sitting there listening or something. I don't think she can see either because she keeps rubbing her eyes... but damn these girls are hot." ???
As the two men talked the resonating unison of voices slowly silenced and began to breathe heavily.
The voice of a woman around 25 started to speak alone in a whispered tone.
"So what's your name, I'm Gabriel... my friends call me Gabe, or they would if I had any." I said Jokingly
"Oh right I never introduced myself, my bad I guess I was just caught by surprise at what is going on right now." ???
The woman that sounded 25 who was whispering was slowly getting louder the more she spoke which started to become a heavy tone
"... You still didn't introduce yourself... and who is the one speaking is she the girl who was just sitting alone looking panicked?" I said annoyed
"Oh right, my names Paul Martinez, I'm 27 and no she isn't the woman looking panicked she is some super hot woman in a priestess outfit... she's revealing a lot of skin in that outfit... damn she is fine too" Paul said
"My visions clearing, you didn't see my glasses anywhere did you? I didn't feel them on my face or the ground around me." I said curiously
"I don't see them anywhere around you... oh wait I see what's left of them, the Russian girl must have crushed them with her fine ass, sorry bro." Paul
"You're fucking with me right???" I panicked and raised my voice
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"Nope, she really has a great ass, I was wondering why she made a small scream when you appeared, she must've crushed them at least 5 seconds after you appeared here." Paul
"Damnit I am so fucked, where are we anyways? " I calmed myself down
"looks like the inside of a church." Paul
"Do you know what religion?" I asked
"No, it all seems pretty archaic, from like the Medieval ages, there is an image of a demon that looks like smoke with a white sword in its chest..." Paul
My vision had cleared up and there I saw a black man with a pretty big build he was pretty muscular with a crew cut, he was most likely the man I had been talking with.
Next sitting on the floor was a busty woman that looked over 20 with white skin but it had a tint as if she spent days in the sun but hadn't gotten a sunburn, her hair was dark brown that barely reached her neck and she was looking away from me so I didn't get to see her face. With her sitting down looking away she looked close to 160 cm, her hair covered her ears and barely reached the bottom of her neck, and Paul was right her ass looked amazing.
Next was a 12 or 13 year old kid frowning curled up in a ball, he had to be at least 140 cm with short black hair and really skinny.
Lastly there was a girl with a clear frown on her face, it was apparent even though I had blurry vision she had a decent body but her boobs were significantly smaller than the Russians but they still had a nice shape. She had short black hair, that reached past her neck and had a blue shine coming from her eyes.
Lastly we have a girl who was in a really revealing priestess outfit it was almost as if she was shining, the sleeves were cut up but let her thin shoulders and elbows peek through. She had a wide oval hole in the red and white top where her cleavage was as if to let the watermelons breathe but there was a shiny gold sparkle that I could see sitting on top of the watermelons. Her top of the priestess outfit stopped right above her belly button and her bottom of the outfit started right below where her hips were so her very attractive hips were clearly visible. Her red and white dress came down right below her shins almost touching the ground but the dress didn't. What came into view at the bottom of her blurry figure were some very beautiful feet covered by stylish brown traditional sandals.
She was definitely the one talking in a loud heavy tone, It was only now that I realized that it wasn't LIKE she was shining, SHE WAS SHINING.
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"MISTROVI DII ROSIX UWAAA TALLIII ALLLLOYYY!!!!!!!!" ???
The last words she spoke shook the building with great strength, it was incredibly terrifying and I backed away with remarkable speed until I hit something and turned around, I had backed into a wall with nowhere left to go.
I looked at the Priestess and noticed that the brightness that made her shine was expanding from her in all directions, it took no less than 6 seconds for the bright light to extend to the whole room and envelope everything in white light.
When the light vanished 3 seconds later the priestess no longer shined and she seemed out of breath... everything that occurred since I appeared here had to have been somewhere between 10 and 15 minutes though I wasn't completely sure as my phone wouldn't even turn on and I didn't bring a watch with me... not to mention I wouldn't know accurately as I couldn't see when I first appeared here as everything was black.
"Oh great heroes, I thank you for coming in our time of need, it brings me great pain to announce the news of your predecessors and the failure to destroy the dark forces as well as their predecessors who failed before them, and so on.
I think we have prepared this summoning ritual over 150 times, I hope you shall be strong enough to end the darkness this time, and fast enough to defend us against the dark forces of those vile Angels who threaten our existence." ???(Priestess)
"HEY! YOU COULD SPEAK JAPANESE THE WHOLE TIME!?!?!?, this whole time I thought you were speaking some other language but you were just messing with me!" The young Japanese boy shouted with anger and annoyance.
"What are you talking about little boy, that was clearly Russian and now you say she spoke Japanese while you speak Russian to her? that doesn't make any sense." The busty Russian woman responds to the little boys shout.
Everyone started talking trying to figure out what happened, about how everyone can understand each other but nobody wanted to mention the bright light that enveloped us. I guess we were going to pretend like it didn't happen... I noticed something odd though the girl who was sitting on the floor with a worried face earlier, still remained there looking around in a panic however she never spoke a word.
"My great heroes, please cease the talking and let me explain, I just cast a strong translation magic so everyone here is able to understand each other by sharing our knowledge, we all did it subconsciously and as such we all know each other's languages but we perceive it as our own language."
"Who are you, where are we, and what do you want with us!?" I shouted loudly as I didn't want to play games and needed to understand what had happened.
"My apologies, I seem to have forgotten my manners, My name is "Yui Kounavi," I am the High Priestess in our Capital city Azol of Aztar, and we summoned you from your world to ours."
"So... you kidnapped us?" ???
"WE ARE SO SORRY, but we need help and the people from your world are incomparably stronger than the people in our world."
"Hey so you kidnap us and ask us to fight for you and you expect us to just do it? what do we get out of risking our lives for you?" I asked
"How about holding onto your honor and pride as a man? Not to mention your human decency? This onee-san just pleaded for help and you're going to ask for rewards?" The young boy says to me.
"Okay first off kid you are way too young to sound so old, and way too young to actually be fighting." Paul responded to the kid.
"Can we all relax and introduce ourselves to each other and this slutty priestess?" the busty girl with the great ass responded
"Hahahaha slutty priestess, Geez that was cold just because she shows a bit too much skin... My names Gabriel Novak, I'm 20, and I don't want to be here."
"I'm Paul Martinez, 27, I was sleeping with my platoon and now I'm in a church surrounded by cultists... when I get back home I'm going to be labeled as a fucking deserter, this fucking blows."
The girl with the amazing body and nice ass responds with.
"Oh you were in the military? My dad was in the military as well... my name is Anastasia Annikov."
"m-my name is S-s-shiro Yamoto, I will do my best to stop the darkness that you spoke of."
Lastly the girl who was sitting down with a worried face got up and bowed to everyone and then started throwing up signs with her hands.
"Oh no shit she was so worried when she got here, she couldn't see and couldn't hear so she was completely out of place, what a poor thing." Paul said
"Okay so we all introduced ourselves can the priestess please explain in more detail who were supposed to fight and why." I said thinking about what she said earlier.
"WAIT, w-wait a second she said we're supposed to fight angels right? What the hell I don't want to fight angels, pissing off God doesn't seem like a good idea at all!"
And so I start my adventure with blurry vision and 4 comrades who would be my brothers and sisters in arms.
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