《Those You Don't Notice》Not Dropping!
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Author: Hey guys.... Sorry to say this, but under the suggestion of my father and roommate. I have decided to pause or other wise known as go on a hiatus for this story.
Reason being:
1. Pace is all over the place, apparently.
2.No set story line.
3.Characters leaving much to be desired.
These are just the main three points they emphasized. Therefore under their suggestion I am going to take a small break to try and make up a clear set story. That should fix the story line and help with pacing. I will be leaving the characters as the personalities they are currently. Meaning now that she is more dere to him it will stay. I will not be rewriting the whole thing. I will just be acting as if Arc 1 of my story is now complete.
After 2-3 weeks of making a story line. I plan on also making a Sakura PoV to test that out. I will also try making a story- line for a mini series to test and work on my coding skills. Making windows and stats stuffs. Grr... Maybe I am stacking to much on myself I don't know hopefully I won't burn myself out of story making.
Any who Thank you all so much for reading. I will probably be back on this story in 1-2 months time. I will be back and stronger than ever when that time comes. (hopefully) ^_^
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