《Re: Dystopia (Completed)》Not A Chapter but still kind of important.
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Ok, so this is not a chapter. Just me asking you guys some questions and looking for help and answers and such.
1.
Do you like the story so far?
2.
Should I change something?
3.
Is my story semi-original (kind of original) or is it just full of clichés and things what seem ripped off from major LN's.
Those are my top three questions so I answer those truthfully.
Also, could somebody write a detailed Review about this LN so I can see my flaws and try to fix them in future chapters. (I am not ordering you, just asking.) And I will take critisism happily. (unlike before...)
This is just a plea from me, the author. These questions have been flying around my mind for a long time and now I decided to ask you readers. I also noticed that we are spot #236 (or something like that) in the top weekly! I hope we can get that spot higher up into the top 50's someday.
Thank you if you write a review or answer my questions or both! I am really troubled by those questions and the lack of information I get from the viewers if they like it or not. I wish for you guys to enjoy this novel as much as I enjoy thinking up ideas and writing it.
Also... One extra question.
Do you like the Overpowered MC thing or not? Should I introduce people who just smash the MC into the ground or should I keep him as the peak of every being in Dystopia?
I hope you answer and I am excitedly waiting for those answers and reviews. Upcourse you are not required to do them because it is just me asking you so I can fix my flaws. And I also know that I have messed up Upcourse and Ofcourse and what and that a lot in my novels and books and such.
-Sincerely,
The Author,
Katsune.
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