《D-Tripper》a question for the reader and status confirmation
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Hey guys, I find some break from the busy exam day and manage to have a time to write a little. And actually I want to ask about your (all of the reader if you can/want to respond) opinion about my fiction.
1. I feel like the character development in my fiction is a bit slow. Any of you guys think so too?
2. If yes, is the character development progress is okay in your opinion? Do you want it to be faster or it's okay?
3. If no, well... the same question as above. Do you want it to be slower or it's alright?
4. Any of you felt like there's too many unknown mysteries in my fiction? (well about this one, I plan to make some sort of revelation in the stories in the next arc)
Anyway, please respond if you can or want to. I want to improve this story better.
On another note, I will start to update probably around 3rd of July or after that. And please don't be disappointed because of the slow update later, I'm a slow writer and still searching for any ideas to write into this fiction >.<
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