《The Birth of the God of Mana》Spoilers*** Want your thoughts on these
Advertisement
Main Character's first method of using magic... other than Balley
Spoiler : I am thinking of having George learn about puppies, and make it so either a. Balley can turn into a puppy form or b. George makes a second living mana creature in the form of a puppy.
This dog is able to lick written/drawn magic circles to make them activate-able at George's will.
This idea is so that George can still use magic, while not being able to do it like others, so he still can have a school arc, because that's where I plan for him to meet his companion, who I have yet to think of who I want it to be. Their can still be a school arc because as I said in the magic chapter, a mage must understand magic circles to be able to actually cast the spell.
If people like this idea, I will have George learn about puppies from a visit to the zoo, and then the dog thing written above will happen, and the dog will lick a magic circle in a fantasy/history/magic book George is reading, and this will lead people to learn that he can create magic talismans with Balley/ Doggie (yes I've already named the dog)
____
Responses to comments
The licking part, It's a dog doing the licking, so it would just take one lick per card, each card, when it gets useful would be the size of a yugioh/Pokemon card. Also the saliva is mana, so as long as the creatures have mana, which (if you read the magic page), as long as the dog exists, it will have mana.
I intend to update this fairly often as this will just hold my ideas so that you the viewers can tell me which ones you like and which you don't like!
Advertisement
- In Serial271 Chapters
The Chalice Quartet
Four strangers are drawn together by a spell from a deitic chalice. One is a wizard, gifted but lonely and in need of adventure and companionship. Another a half-elven sorceress who is desperately searching for her siblings. The third is a giant, cast out from his home and needing guidance in the country he has landed in. And the last, an assassin whose advantages are being stripped from him one at a time. Despite their initial reluctance, the four soon come to realize that they need each other in order to survive, for the chalice holds secrets that need to be discovered and obeyed. *Chapters are published Mondays and Thursdays at midnight on my website, www.forestgreenwriting.com, and here in a more mercurial fashion, though you will always get at least two chapters per week.*
8 116 - In Serial7 Chapters
Sands of Elstirr (Dropped)
"Bodies are built from dust, and as the sand and wind strip the flesh from our bones, to dust we shall return." - Grand Sage Ghod The poets claim that the sands of Elstirr are red from the blood of the countless innocents slain upon them. The mages say that the is a by product of the reaction of excess elements. And the Orks, the ancient and warlike people, the natives of Elstirr claim that the sands are red from the tears of blood wept by their god Gulgirra. But one truth is known, the sands are an eternal and unforgiving place. The true edge of civilisation, they ebb and flow like the tides of the great salt seas to the south. Ever changing, and like the dunes cities rise and fall , and the tales of heroes can be heard like the howling winds across the expanse.
8 122 - In Serial29 Chapters
Always (Steve Harrington X Reader)
"Shh. I got you," I say rewrapping my arms around him, "I got you. You're okay. You have me."He chuckles dryly, "I always do don't I? You're always here for me." I smile softly, "Always,"(Takes place in season 2 and 3)
8 141 - In Serial11 Chapters
Maitbudi
Fermboi was a man of one ideal: make the weak strong. When his rebellion against the king proved futile, he was given another chance at life. This time, he sought to do nothing after realizing the hopelessness of it all. Aventina wanted to do nothing more than to follow her father’s footsteps. On a retaliation raid against her tribe’s enemies, her brothers perished. Spared by a leader of her enemies, she returned home to find herself the chief of her tribe. Bolahulag, half-civilized and half-barbarian, half-lowborn and half-royal. Raised in his mother’s civilized tent in a sea of barbaric shelters, Bolahulag was hesitant to follow his paternal way of life. After a battle between a civilized king and his father, Bolahulag was sent as hostage to learn the economy and military of the nation his father defeated. Derai knew nothing more than being an orphan, but when a merchant took her in, the world she thought impossible soon became a reality. Monghe, stuck in a school exemplifying strength for most of his life, began to understand what he needed to do in order to be strong instead of weak. Story is mostly about nothing. Fermboi does most of the nothing. Aventina does most of the military things. Bolahulag does a balance of economy and military. Derai focuses on economy. Monghe spitfires what it means to be a typical hero. Hopefully this is enough to give a general idea to people who don’t like going blind aside from the work being purportedly “good.” Who am I kidding, my writing is terrible. I hope it improves though.
8 154 - In Serial9 Chapters
My Unending Agony
Dillon Mathews is a Dimensional Being. The only downside of being a Dimensional Being is the fact that you cant truly die. Long before he became the most powerful being, he was just a regular kid... to an extent. Thousands if not millions of years ago Dillon was born and grew up in the Realm of the Gods, but he was very mischievous, and didn't want to follow what his father always done. The Creator Casted him down to Earth in Dimension-126 with now memory and a reset as a baby and a family. On his Twelfth year on Earth, Everything Changed...The Lesson needed to be sped up. Something was coming to destroy every Dimension.
8 140 - In Serial38 Chapters
Axe from North
It's a rebirth story. Markus Ryley is an average 16 year old boy. Who is leading a pretty simple life. That is until the fateful school trip. Where he and most of his classmates died. But the circle of life doesn't stand still. So now the new world awaits them with magic running wild and dragons soaring in the sky. Follow MC through his journey, where he will meet his new enemies and old rivals. P.S. : This is my first novel also English isn't my first language so please don't be harsh. P.P.S: About mature context… There might be a bit of gore (if there is a battle so there got to be at least some blood) and I won't deny some adult material. On HIATUS
8 81
Prev Chap
Next Chap
Chap List
Boy
Girl
