《Dragon Ball Magic》Not a chapter : story needs a re-write
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Hi guys (and gals) ! I just wanted to let you know, instead of just disappearing on you, that I'm going to stop writing this story for a while. It's been brought to my attention that it lacks some things to make it a good story (Thanks Mastersgtjames for your review, by the way !) and I myself realized that I didn't actually truly thought this story through... I generally just let the words take me when I write. But it can be boring for the readers, confusing etc...
So I decided to take some time to reflect on that and try to come up with a more interesting story... Now, for the re-write, I have a question for you guys ! Do you want just 1 MC, 1 MC + Importants characters or a story with several potential MCs ? Also, please comment if you want me to change the name of Avo.
Thanks for reading until now and here's hoping you'll read my stories down the road !
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