Hi TofunMiso here, i just saw that our 5 star rating haf dropped down to 3.5 star.T.T and one of the reviews stats that my story has a lot of plot holes and inconsistencies, well this is my first time writing a novel so i guess it can't be help however the reason he stated on the reviews i can explain it cause its all written there on the chapter i guess he must have missed it or not been able to see it. 1st How was Kalm able to pay of 50% of the debt he got carried over from the accident even though they were poor( Answer: In the chapter i wrote that he had to sell of all his belonging including his house to cover 50% of the debt), he also stated that the amount of selling the house will not be able to cover even half of the 844k amount owe, in short he says that no building own by such a poor family could amount up to over 400k,( Answer: That chapter took place in a dystopia future and as always when time passes prices and money will inflat. A car now will cost 10 time the price of that 10 years ago so the amount of 844k owe if u convert it to todays currencey rate it will be many times lower like maybe even 200k and as for how he could afford his dwelling when he is so young, answer= Its a dystopia future, do u think they will care about underage workers? ) So i hope i answered your question Puffywings. All the plothole you stated could have been filled if you had read the chapter more closely. Its like when you're read my chapter 1 you did a speed reading or something. And as for my grammers an spelling this i will apologize but i will correct it soon when i have the time, it has alway been on my agenda to fix all the chapters including the capitalize names. So PuffyWings please don any how go review other peoples work and calling them filled with plotholes when its clearly explained in the chapter if you had read it more carefully. T.T This really dampen my motivation to keep writing the novel.

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On the lifeless body of the mountain charger beast where Nite had bore into moments ago, slight movement could be seen. The slight spasm of its body got stronger until from it's back something burst out. That something was not a chest burster from a certain movie but instead it was a tail-less tiny black shark.

Covered entirely with blood and innards, it let out a ''Sharrrrr!'' as if proclaiming its victory over its enemy.

Kalm: '' Are you ok Nite?'' asked Kalm worriedly

Nite: ''Sha!!sharr shark sasa''(Boss!!, this thing tastes good)

A sense of relief came over Kalm as he ascertain that his buddy was alright, freed from worries exhaustion washed over him as he laid flat down on the grass laughing out loud toward the canopy's silhoutte.

Kalm:'' Its finally over, this has been so exhausting''

Kalm closed his eyes as he listened to the calming sound of munching nearby as he went off to take a short nap. Half an hour later..........

Nite:'' mhmm.............mmmm.......mmmm!''

Kalm:'' Hehehe? let me sleep a while longer, ahhh i'm awake awakee, thats tickles stop it already hahaha''

Opening his eyes, Kalm came upon a persistent Nite constantly nudging his pointed snout on his face. All these while he had been poking on Kalm trying to get him to wake up for some reason whatsoever.

Kalm:'' Stop licking me haha....I'm awake already Nite''

Nite then proceed to get off Kalm's chest before opening its jaw drawing the attention of the half awake boy.''Oh whats that?'' exclaim the puzzled Kalm.

Within Nite's mouth was a unusually transparent ball shaped object. Getting up, he retrieved the object in question to examine it. Upon closer inspection, Kalm could feel a dense concentration of mana within the ball but it was slightly different from the mana found between the heaven and the earth.

Instead it was more chaotic and violence much like the nature of an untamed beast. Unable to uncover more information out of the object, he decided to rely on his eye's ability.

[Forest charger 5th stage Mana condensation]

[Monster core]

Description: The core of the magical creature (Forest charger). Inside it contain the compressed power of the beast when it was alive. Crafting material for magical tools and etc.

Kalm: ''So this is a Monster core''

He remembered that once in the past his Grandpa once mention to him about the relation between practitioners and magical beasts.

The magical beast of this world out numbered the total populations of all human and other races, this causes most of the race to band together forming a soft alliance to counteract against them. Whenever there are a joined attack by magical beast on any of the races, the rest will work together even if they are presently in a conflict with one another.

This was the unspoken rule that every race follows. Fortunately, the magical beast do not have a united front as they fought against each other much more then when they tried to attack the alliances.Though If they were ever to unit under one ruling banner, then humans and the other race will almost be certain to face extinction.

However, the alliance do have their deterrence, they are called practitioners, the vanguard and defenders of all races. They fight off the magical beast who got too close to their domain and gather their materials which were then used forged armors,weapons, magical tools,medicines and many other. They are also the pioneer of the current age...........The Golden Age of Monster hunters.

Back to the present, Kalm raise the Monster core up into the air with the sun shining down on the backdrop, the marble like shine eclipses the sun as its translucency was revealed, inside the core one could see a tiny symbol with the world neutral written in this world's writing. ''So pretty'' mutter Kalm as he admire the monster core, then without notice Nite flew up and knock the core off Kalm's hand, it flys up high into the air before making landfall...........inside Kalm's mouth.