《Martial World》Chapter 4 - Awakening The Spirit
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Guys I am removing the low mid and high god realm to make it God realm and then True god realm and remove the Divine Realm and the tyrant realm making it these realms + origin realm out and the hell realm
Body Refining realm King Realm Emperor Realm
Spirit Realm Saint Realm Immortal Realm
Truth Realm Mystical Realm Deity Realm
God Realm True God Realm
Those changes were done simply because of some suggestions because the realm were to much starting from Body Refining and then spirit realm then truth realm then king realm then emperor realm saint realm immortal realm mystical realm deity realm then The God realm and the true god realm I might add another realm but for the moment this is all the changes
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Changes are done by the Author that means me by your suggestions . :)
Two more years passed . Today it has the spirit awakening day where all the noble's who were four --five years would join there.
Long Wang knew that and didn't forcefully released his spirit just for that because what would they think then ? Maybe hundreds of assassin would come to kill me or even thousands ! No day would be spend cultivating without fear although now he has at the sixth layer of the body refining realm cultivator what would happen when they would learn that ? Not thousands but almost one million assassins would try to kill me for the reward who people would set .
Long Wang first would need to group up with his cousins and his family and grandpa to go .
Long Wang has now on deep thought's he thought of when he has on his first life child
...............
"Don't stop cultivating or do you prefer being beaten ?"
"Don't stop you still have ten hours to cultivate !".
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"Here eat some cultivating food".
"Oh WHY ARE YOU SLACKING OF !"
His family would always make him experience pain and let him cultivate twenty hours a day he couldn't even meet his friend's just to become a powerful person but he doesn't give a damn about power .What power ? Why do I need power without a reason ? To protect my clan ? To protect the person who makes me experience hell ? He had always been like a puppet .
But on this world he has free he had a good family they would help him ,love him ,talk to him, they would never push him to much he has free! Truly free ! So he would protect them forever he owed them his life .
Long Wang waited almost one hour before the got ready .He has dressed with a small robe who nobles wear. He saw some person's .One a girl who has four .She had black hair and they were long and blue eyes she has beautiful her beauty could make a kingdom fight for her probably . Long Wang had seen a lot of beautiful girls but she has one of the most beautiful's he had seen.
The other has a boy the same age as her four.He had yellow hair which were a bit long and brown eyes he has handsome .
"What's your name ?"Said the boy with a smile.
" My name Long ,Long Wang what's yours ?"
"Long Shou and her name is Long Hua "
Long Wang saw a carriage and opened the door together with the two who were probably twin's and sat.
Less than one hour passed and they exited the carriage and entered the building who looked like a castle . Inside there were many child's and grow ups he walked towards our family and sat.Ten minutes later a priest with a long beard came put a some kind of orb and said towards us.
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"Please come toward's here I shall awaken your spirits ".
A child moved towards the priest.
"Just put your hands on the orb and unleash some aura". Said the priest.
The child put his hand and a yellow color light has seen on the orb.
"The Soul Phoenix a Top class spirit" Said the priest.
Everyone there of course without me got surprised that boy has the young master of the Phoenix Sect and a soul of phoenix only the patriarch had that .
Spirits are divined on
Low Spirit
Mid Spirit
Half High Spirit
High Spirit
Top Spirit
Super Spirit
Divine Spirit
God Spirit
True God Spirit
Nameless Spirit
of course there are people without spirits to but they have a lot of disadvantage .
After people of going and returning only two were girls and they both had half high spirit.
Now another girl walked towards the orb and put her hands on the orb
"God Spirit Lighting Dragon God" The pries has shocked but not only him but everybody even Long Wang.
after one minute of surprised face's it has Long Wang Turn.
"Unknown ! Unknown ! Unknown ! UNKNOWN RACE OR SPECIE SHOULD NOT EXIST ! NOT OF THIS PLACE NOT EVIL GOD NOT EVIL NOT GOOD NOT NEUTRAL UNKNOWN ! BOOOM"
The Orb exploded the priest has simply not moving anymore .
"...."
Not even Nameless Spirit's do that .
Long Wang knew that he had a powerful spirit but didn't investigate .
He returned to his place he saw many faces even the person who has proud of his top spirit felt shocked even the girl who had god spirit !
His grandpa simply smiled and didn't said anything.Long Wang could feel that his grandfather has a immortal realm cultivator and has just hiding his cultivation . If he had revealed his cultivation he could conquer the kingdom and some other kingdom's probably.
He knew that the king has just a saint realm of the second layer cultivator and has almost one hundred years old if counting on his old world but here he has sixty and considering all those realms he could considered a true genius who appear's once on a one million year but he will soon be counted as a trash after Long Wang becomes a immortal at his age on this world you can marry at twenty years old but people prefer to marry when they are forty to sixty or even eighty so the king's children's are as young as Long Wang while his grandfather has probably three or two hundred years old.
A immortal realm cultivator can live for eternity who know's how old is he even though he guessed almost right .
But for some reasons his grandfather never made a move .
Long Wang returned to his room and fell asleep after cultivating on secret some minutes.
Here you go guys this chapter has more than 3000 characters :)
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