1. What kind of perspective should i use?

A. 1st person

B. 3rd person

2. Do you want me to keep using their name at the ends of dialogue?

A. Front (e.g) [kyo] “what’s the purpose of this survey?”

B. Back (e.g) “i’m done” [Leiko]

C. Rather than using bracket, use (e.g) “.......why should i become the example?” says Yuki

3. What kind of grammar should i use if i use 3rd person

a. Present “Ume! Fill this survey!” Says Nashi, while Ume tries to run away

b. Past “Akamine! Don’t run away and fill this Survey” Said Nashi, while he grabbed her collar

4. What do you expect when you read the first chapter and title from this novel?

(E.g) Light hearted comedy style novel or badass action scenes style novel

Thanks for the input!!

Hey kamiya-san there’s a quest! Find a proofreader “reward 100.000exp, 0 money” [Riku]

...Akamine, i plan to make a discord. well i’m not making it yet, but i will [Nashi]