《Mana Odyssey》chapter 133:Everyone reactions!
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Hospital-Private Room
"So...She is your mana, but isn't mana impossible to take human form?"(Shiroyuki)
"Dad is special!! Even thought Lune is still mana Lune still human !!"(Lune)
As Shiroyuki understand's she gave her a nod. She suddenly summon's her mana.
"Myryui."(Shiroyuki)
"Yes mama?"(Myryui)
A litte snake that has a wyvern wing and a small wing under it's bigger wings. It's tail is like a trident and it has red eyes.
"It gained intelligence?"(Forvish)
"Yes, but she is shy so she doesn't want to show herself in front of anyone else."(Shiroyuki)
"Papa...'(Myryui)
Why she called me papa, I am not married to Shiroyuki yet.
"He is my dad not yours!!"(Lune)
She sulked a little bit. Looks like she doesn't want to lose her papa. She is still a child, so I understand that.
"No!!! He is Myryuis papa!! She is Mama's Husband!!!"(Myryui)
It becomes a child fight..
"Myryui knows papa better than you!!! I know him more than you!!!"(Myryui)
"Then what is Dad's favorite food?"(Lune)
"Salad made by mom!!!"(Myryui)
"Wrong!!! Dad favorite food is BBQ!!"(Lune)
"Wuahhh!! Mama!! Onee-chan is a meanie!!!!"(Myryui)
The snake is crying....It is really odd to see a snake crying like this. Then she jump's to Shiroyuki's lap
"Don't cry. Don't cry."(Shiroyuki)
"You too Lune, don't bully her too much."(Forvish)
"Noo!!!Dad is Lune's!!"(Lune)
She sulked....
"Lune don't sulk like that. It worry's Forvish"(Shiroyuki)
"Yes..White Haired mom"(Lune)
Fuh, then I ask Shiroyuki, as i can't find my swords anywhere.
"Shiroyuki, where are my swords."(Forvish)
"Jessica took it for futher analysis. Because the dark energy that came from it. You had mana exhaustion and a fever."(Shiroyuki)
"It doesn't come from the swords. It come's from dad.."(Lune)
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"Eh?"(Shiroyuki)
"It is dad's ability, though it is only 20% of dad's true power."(Lune)
".. ..Eh?? Really? So it is your ability?"(Shiroyuki)
"Yep. With me around dad doesn't need blood again to activate, it will cost his mana instead. But if he wants to he can use his blood."(Lune)
"Why does it need blood?"(Shiroyuki)
"Ask the sword, don't ask me. The swords are the one's who act as a catalyst."(Lune)
.....What an answer.
"Anyway Lune, behave yourselves when everyone come."(Forvish)
"???????Aren't I behaving myself?"(Lune)
"Nope, not even a bit(Forvish)
"I agree."(Shiroyuki)
"...Ugh."(Lune)
"Dad and mom is mad at you!!!! hihi."(Myryui)
"Noooo!!"(Lune)
...Her eyes become teary......Then she asks me.
"Dad.....You aren't mad right?"(Lune)
"A little?"(Forvish)
Let's tease her.
"Dad, don't mad at me, I will be a good child!!"(Lune)
"Wewewe!! Dad is mad!! hahha."(Myryui)
"Don't laugh at someone else's suffering, it is a bad habit."(Shiroyuki)
"kay.."(Myryui)
.....After a minute every one arrived, but when they see Lune...
"Who is she?"(Everyone)
"My name is Lune, I am father's daughter. Please take care of me."(Lune)
She say's it while bowing to everyone. Every one's froze.....And I feel a dark aura and a snowstorm. It is combined!!! A Blizzard.
".....Hoo......You dare cheat on us for some random girl huh??"(Riese)
"Nee-san..Will teach you......A lot of manner's to you."(Aulia)
"......Master to think you fall so low."(Lisa)
"...Forvish...I am dissapointed in you."(Alice)
"Shall I cut your's Forvish kun?"(Jessica)
"Stupid Nii-chan!!"(Miyuri)
"Eak!!!"(Forvish)
They are smiling, but I am really afraid of them...
"Don't bully my dad...."(Lune)
Immediately a dark energy circle surrounds her. I must stop her.
"....Stop it, Lune!!!"(Forvish)
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"If dad says so, because all of moms here are an idiot. There is no way "People" like that who is very dense can cheat. "(Lune)
"Yeah, he is too dense there is no way that happen and why would you run here?"(Ken)
Ken appears look like it is only him who doesn't rush. He must believe that I will be fine.
"Eh??"(Everyone)
"Everyone please listen to Forvish's explanation's."(Shiroyuki)
Fuh, thank you. If you didn't do that I think it would be a bloodbath. Now I need to explain to them except about Noire.
After the explanations.
"And that is it everyone did you hear me?"(Forvish)
........They are all playing with Lune, except Jessica, lisa, and Alice. I just noticed my parents aren't here.
Ha...
"Where is Celin?"(Forvish)
"Still sleeping."(Lisa)
"Fuh, you really are suprising Forvish."(Jessica)
"But thank god you are safe."(Alice)
"Forvish, sorry we are late, we needed to do some transfer procedure's."(Helia)
"Ho, whose child is that?"(Leon)
I will explain it again, now I took Lune and make her sit beside me and not let anyone play with her.
After second explanation's
"Now do you understand?"(Forvish)
"How come you have a human's mana?i never heard such a things."(Helia)
"No, it isn't important..How can you summon your mana?"(Leon)
"Using a mana stone Shiroyuki gave me."(Forvish)
"Such a thing is impossible!!! Your mom say's there is only one stone that can awaken your mana."(Leon)
He show's a mana stone with a pure quality, but it has white-red color. That isn't important.
"Dad, you meet mom?"(Forvish)
"Before I explain, please don't hate your mom truly."(Leon)
"Such things are lie's...Grandma really wanted to kill dad. If pervert grandpa is like this, then I can't trust pervert grandpa."(Lune)
"Lune!!"(Forvish)
"Dad, maybe you can't see that...But it is clearly have curse on it. Grandma maybe want to control you dad."(Lune)
"There is no way!!! would never do that!!"(Helia)
"Forvish, it must be a mistake there is no way she would do that."(Leon)
"...Grandpa and Grandma are tricky. In the end the curse must be to kill Dad. If not thanks to mom who saved dad and give dad a S rank mana stone, I believed dad would be killed."(Lune)
"Lune.."(Shiroyuki)
"Dad, I agree with Lune. My real parents..no, they are liar's."(Forvish)
"Forvish. If you really think than kyle will really kill you!!"(Leon)
"It is because dad and mom are here, in the end they are afraid they will be your enemies. That's all!!"(Forvish)
"Forvish. Claire will never do that!"(Leon)
"SHE TRIED TO KILL ME!!! You who know nothing about the real her, just shut up!!"(Forvish)
"Forvish!!!"(Leon)
He punch me.
"Your mom truly love's you!! She is crying!! She is crying when she know she need's to kill you."(Leon)
"ALLL OF THAT THINGS IS A LIE!!!!!!! I will never believe such a lie."(Forvish)
"Vish,It is true!!"(Leon)
"No matter what you say, I will never believe in them ever!!"(Forvish)
"Vish!!! Are you planning to take revenge?"(Leon)
"I don't intend to, if they don't bother me again I will never. But i if they come at me. Then i will kill them."(Forvish)
"They are your-"(Leon)
"Now they aren't!! They are my enemy!!"(Forvish)
"Dad don't waste your breathe. Because he doesn't know her true color's that is why he is protecting her.."(Lune)
"Believe in me Forvish!! Believe in your mom just this once."(Leon)
He say's it as he tried to give the mana stone.
"Lune..Destroy it."(Forvish)
Immediately a dark energy appear and eat it.
".......You cut all of your ties with your real mom!!"(Leon)
"Then let it happen. I don't care about them. They are just trash!!.(Forvish)
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