《Mana Odyssey》Chapter 169:First meeting(unedited)
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23 November 2088(Saturday )
"fuh,i am tired."(Forvish)
as i sit on group watching three headed horse which captured and put in cage.still capturing this is too hard not to mention this creature ran fast as hell.suddenly me cheek feel cold ,then i check it ,it was cold drink bought by lumiere
"Forvish,are you tired?"(Lumiere)
"pretty much,thanks for drinking by the way."(Forvish)
i take the cold soft drink and drink it.she then sit beside me while drink juice.we are no sitting waiting for the school to take it.there is still hours or so before they come here.
"why you wear eye patch on your left eyes?aren't you hair color change and your style change already enough?"(Lumiere)
"for training lune says.she wants me to focus only my right side that's why she close my left side."(Forvish)
Though it doesn't change much but it is also good accessory to hide my identify from them.
"I see,Forvish will you come to meeting tomorrow?officially it is a meeting,but is more like introduction to each other.i worried if they found out about you."(Lumiere)
"Don't worry ,i will solve it somehow,beside i am vice leader for a while right?"(Forvish)
i was appointed as vice leader,everyone didn't recognize me at first but when they heard it was Lumiere appointment they still accept it.if i take day off ,it will be bad for lumiere reputation.
"Forvish,at the tournament will you use your mana?"(Lumiere)
"No,if i do that then lune life's won't go well.i don't want lune treated bad because of what i have done."(Forvish)
Akumu form becomes a great sword,i don't know why but it feel familiar...rather i know how to use it.if my twin swords skill is because Luna then why i feel familiar with great swords.Lumiere smack my back.auw..
"Don't feel so bad about it,if you don't use it don't know what will happen to me,just be proud of it.instead of putting sad face all day."(Lumiere)
Proud?why i should be proud of it?Then Lumiere pulled my cheek.
"Just smile!!Your sad face is really ugly you know!!"(Lumiere)
"yeah.."(Forvish)
after we joke for a moment the school attendant arrive and we return home,i spend my day train use gunblade.tomorrow i doubt it will ends well some of them should notice me,if that happen then a figth will break out without doubt .
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"Dad,auntie call you!!it is dinner time."(Lune)
Lune call wakes from deep thinking.
"Ah,sorry ,lune let's eat."(Forvish)
"Nn!!"(Lune)
after dinner we sleep,lune doesn't want to part me so sleep while hugging this child really..as i pat her gently so she wouldn't wake up.because lune sleep earlier then me i use it to read manga.after that i go to sleep.
?????? Realm..
"Forvish,how you long you gonna be naive?Why you don't use me?This world doesn't treat you kindly everyone treat you as monster why you should care for it?!!"(Akumu)
this is already become my second habit,Akumu always saying this.
"Akumu,why you keep saying that?"(Forvish)
"Isn't it clear?because your kindness was paid by blood!!!!Don't forget even if you save someone live no matter how you right you are!!!!To this world you are monster!!!"(Akumu)
Akumu
"As long you don't change my life will be at risk!!why you must risk life for an outsider like lune and noir!!!!!"(Akumu)
i already know that..your life is linked with my life.still lune and noire..compared to akumu...they are too human like...no they are human..just what am i?why human become mana?Such a thing still a mystery.Outsider...what does he mean?
"Akumu.."(Forvish)
"It is no use to talk with you,if you on verge of death then i will force my way out!!"(Akumu)
then he vanish from my sight.still his reason is plausible,but then what am i?
24 November 2088
Meeting room.
We are waiting for my previous school to come back to this meeting room,i sit beside Lumiere and one girl beside me.
"Shin,don't be nervous just stand up with pride."(Lumiere)
Lumiere is really good with this to think she never slipped even once when a people was nearby.a tight lipped girl.still the headmaster ...is really weak willed.
"they are coming."(Lumiere)
as soon as they opened door the group which consist everyone except jessica and Alice.
"Sorry for the wait,my name is Aulia edwaltz,nice to meet you."(Aulia)
Aulia nee-san.so you are the representatives i guess it's normal She has won once ...
"Nice to meet you ,my name is Lumiere Ellen i am the leader here and Shin Blade as Vice leader."(Lumiere)
she introduced me,i stand and bow then sit.after that iris raise her right hands then ask us question.
"Before that would you mind put out your disguise?Shin-kun."(Iris)
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i forgot her eyes could see mana flow,of course she know that i put in disguise.but she doesn't notice me yet.
"Pardon.Shin put disguises because he was afraid to be seen different from common people,would you refrain asking him to do that?"(Lumiere)
"could you prove him that he won't betray us?what if he is spy?"(Iris)
She wants me to show my real self that much .it will be bad...what should i do?
"Empress,i agree with her please let Shin show his real self."(Girl 1)
"Lin!"(Lumiere)
I see her name is lin,i will remember.now i already prepared this much..i put burn make up on eyes that hidden by eyepatch give burn mark and use colored lens.
my eye color now is blue and green.i show them that.
"Like you see ,i just plan to hide my burn mark all over my body.if you want to see then i won't mind."(Forvish)
"Please forgive for my rudeness."(Iris)
iris finally back down,all of their expression still show they don't believe me,maybe i should change my face too.Also only lumiere and Lin will discussing i will only watch.Ken then raise his hand.
"Please allow me to duel with him,i want to know your school power.'(Ken)
"Duel accepted,please allow me guide you to the arena."(Lin)
"Lin,don't act by yourself!!"(Lumiere)
"I am sorry empress,i know shin grades are good but he never once shown his mana nor enter combat in my eyes.please allow me to see his power with my own eyes."(Lin)
i know her feeling well,but to think she help them,what a bad luck.
"Sure,but i am sorry if killed you."(Forvish)
it is only act..i will never kill him.
"i am not that weak forvish,are you mocking me?"(Ken)
next time i will change my face entirely.i will ignore your word for now.i took to lightly of them.
"We have a miss understanding,my name is shin blade,not forvish please remember that."(Forvish)
ignoring his next word i walk to the arena,everyone tried to talk me but i don't say anything .sorry i can't return ...even i want to..
when we arrived at the arena i wear glove at my left hand ,it is lent by school for capturing the three headed horse.it can create a shield and impact .handy enough.
"Is three minutes enough?"(Forvish)
instead answering me he only stare at me.
"you say you aren't forvish,but why you won't summon your mana?"(Ken)
I know,that's why i don't plan to fight today,but you force it ,i won't hold back.we make a distance 20 meter in arena.. then the referee
"There is no need for me to summon mana.to fight guys at your level."(Forvish)
I don't plan to hold back,and lune had already told me everything in case we fight.
"Are you ready?"(Lin)
the countdown begin.
"3,2,1."(Lin)
"GO!!!"(Lin)
narrator POV.
Lin after that talk to Lumiere,she plan to watch him just what make the empress interested in him.
"Empress why he only standing?"(Lin)
"Lin,you are still to inexperienced.he isn't plan to drag the battle he plan to finish the battle.oh one more thing,he is already defeated me one on one.just watch and you will understand."(Lumiere)
Ken try claw him to check his speed.because he is faster than him,as it went to cut his head.forvish dissapear then appear beside him with gunblade point on his head.
"Explosive burst."(Forvish)
An bullet shoot to his head ,it hit his head then it explodes.he barely defend it with his shadow..but his face was burned...doesn't let go this chance forvish try to slash him.he defend the gunblade with both of his claw,if forvish use twin blade now then he would lose.Ken tried to use his shadow to attack but the gunblade begin to wrapped in flame but it doesn't attack ken.it wrapped in gunblade made an aura,no another layer of edge.it easily bypass his claw before he could dodge,he already sliced in two.Ken immediately passed out.
"Is it over?"(Forvish)
Lune told him,that he lack something decisive ,firepower example,his range his attack area already covered.that's why he create his original skill,Explosive burst is a skill that shot a super heated bullet it can easily pierced middle tier defend spell and if it stopped it will explode.by doing that the enemy are forced to use defense spell with a large area protection.the second one Flame edge,instead judgement blade that increase range it boost sharpness instead.the flame edge is from keen edge and judgement blade,but it wrapped in super hot flames so it can slice more easily.the keen edge ability to increase sharpness is also added.then A light was shot beside my head.
"Forvish,return or i will force you."(Aulia)
It was you isn't it.
"I don't like to say the same thing over and over again ,i am not forvish.but if you insist then i will teach you some manner."(Forvish)
I also want to test,my other original moves for gunblade.
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