《Journey》Chapter 9
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Well apparently I failed miserably in my first attempt of the “water element” skill
I hope it was at least somewhat funny for the readers…
But funny aside, I still need to figure out a proper way of activation.
For now I have some ideas in mind but I´m kinda anxious
What if none of them work?
Nope, no no, these thoughts are the least I need at the moment.
Try out first, worry later
Well, my second idea is a little more, what should I call it even?
Say different
If brute-forcing doesn´t work I simply need a different approach
So, let´s go with science!
I mean think about it
If the skill won´t activate on its own, then it has to have some kind of condition
And I have the hunch the condition is connected to my image of the skill, or in other words how the process of making water works
Because even though I´m working with magic here, in the end I want to create water
Now, on a primary level everything is just composed of atoms and molecules right?
For water it´s H2O, so let´s imagine the particles interact with each other to become water
It may seem a little farfetched, but if it works it works right?
“Let´s give it a shot” I say filled with hope but also anxiety as I shut my eyes
I envision a vast white space, where spherical particles wander around aimlessly
Two smaller white globes, hydrogen
And one larger, red one, oxygen
They approach each other
Then, they fuse into a formation of three, connecting with something similar to sticks
This process repeats, again and again
hundreds, thousands, millions of times
I “zoom out” of the white space, farther and farther
The millions of particles eventually become what we perceive as water, and this very water flows out of my hand
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“Wow wow what!” Is what comes out of my mouth as I see what comes out of my hand
“[Water creation] has been learned.”
My heart is almost flying out of my chest right now
I barely finished imagining and it immediately…
After some ten seconds I manage to set my thoughts straight again
By now the stream of water has stopped, a small puddle was made beneath the boulder I´m sitting on.
It´s magic
Magic really exists
And I am able to use it
And I also got a new skill
And I can make water whenever I want now
And, And!
I´m probably grinning like an idiot right now…
I try to make some more water but I can´t focus at all
I take some deep and long breaths to calm my excitement.
“Okay, I´m calm now” I lie to myself
How in the world could anyone stay calm after something like that?
I stand up and walk around excitedly
After about five minutes and a few hundred repetitions of “Oh my god I can use magic let´s go!!” pass my excitement finally falls a little.
Then I remember that I have forgotten something important
I still haven´t checked the water for its drinkability
I put both of my hands together and envision the whole process of creating water once again.
This time I slightly rush the chemical process, but it still works
I fill up my hands and just when it´s about to overflow, I stop
Neat
Then I ask appraisal to do its job
“Distilled water. Due to lack of minerals it would be dangerous to consume”
Wait, no way, are you joking?
Everything was going so well and now that?
Give me back my good time!
“Why? Why does it lack minerals?” I shout out frustrated
Of course, deep down I already accepted it
I literally made “water” without any additions. Of course it would be distilled
But I´m still pissed, so let me rant a little…
Wait
An electric feel runs through my head and a bulb is lit
Didn´t I have the [Mineral Control] skill?
It´s a farfetched idea, again, but can´t I just create the lacking minerals?
Hastily I open my status.
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