《The Tree-Man and His Wife》OK, Opinions needed
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It seemed there are quite a few confusions going on at this point in the novel. BUT I would like to know what is wrong, so I am putting up a small poll to ask what I can do to fix this confusion. At this point, I had left a few things open on purpose, so certain parts are supposed to be confusing up to (hopefully) the next two chapters.
So the options for this poll consist of should I add a summary of the chapter every time, do I need to add who's POV I am doing in the title, do I need to clear things up in the same chapter instead of the next one, and do I need to add more descriptions about what is going on.
If none of these are what is confusing to you guys, it would be incredibly helpful for future chapters for you guys to comment below on this poll so I can make sure to make each chapter the best it can be!
^-^ Hope you guys enjoy it so far though! It's my new favorite to work on, and I am still doing the other two novels of mine, I'm just trying to catch this up a bit first before I update the others. Juggling school and stuff as a graduating senior isn't the easiest but imma do it for you all!
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