Hello everyone, due to some thinking and a helpful review I have decided my ending for God's door just is not satisfying enough to be called a good ending...So I'm botching the whole thing..well at mostly the later alter part of the epilogue. within a week, I should have the better, going by my standards, ending out. Since like the main character I feel a burning in my chest about it. But seriously thanks for the comments and reviews. I really glad I can max this thing better. Plus I kind of began mulling over the idea of extending this short story into maybe two of them. as I fell the plot would allow my to take the reins and drive it a little farther. I have no set date for the second short story so just hold yourselves while I come up with it.