《Undead Girls: A different change》Chapter 5: Dead if you do, gone if you don't
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A quick author's note: Guys I really need help with my writing, so please post some suggestions on where you think the story should go, if my grammar needs improving, or even whatever you can think of. Also, I started a new fiction called The noob who started as a mob and was eaten. So please enjoy the following chapter, and post your comments.
Chapter 5: Dead if you do, gone if you don't
Worried about who the unknown voice might belong to, T made a decision. "I have to lead mom and sis away from here so we can find out who the survivor might be." Gesturing to C, T tried to convey her plan.
"so she want me to lead the other two outside. T must want to check on that voice, and is concern how her family will react to the person behind the door." C
Being a quick study C started banging alongside the wall in the living room. Getting the other's attention C then kept banging while moving to the door leading outside. Mother and sister started lurching towards C as T moved away from them.
T started moving towards the bedroom door, think how she could communicate to the person. Since T and C seemed to be only able to make animal sounds this might be a problem. "oh well, I'm sure to come up with something that will work." T thought to herself.
Watching C, T was thankful for a friend who was able to catch on to her plan. C opened the door leading outside and paused. Something was wrong outside.
C seemed agitated by the sight. She started gesturing for T to come here. Odd noises seemed to be coming from behind the front door. A loud bang punctuated the growing sense of unease.
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"Hopefully the unknown person can wait. This seems like a bad situation might be starting." T began to head towards C and mom with sister. The loud bang repeated itself as T came over to C.
A view from hell greeted them as the girls gazed onto the city for the first time. other corpses were attacking neighbors and citizens as they tried to run away. Fires burned in homes, yards, and parked vehicles. A teddy bear dropped on the ground seemed to gaze back as if frozen in terror.
Smoke filling the sky, only terror seemed to be present. The sounds of people being eaten. Scream of the doomed punctuating the fear inducing sights. Bloody pools covering the sidewalks and streets.
Watching the unreal situation in front of them, T and C caught sight of an older man with a gun. (Bang, Bang, Bang!) came out from the pistol as he shot into the mob of corpses. The older man didn't seem to mind hitting some of the victims.
"Ggrrrooowwwlll!!!" an unexpected sound greeted all them. A monster rose up from the pile of shot undead. It looked almost human but slightly larger. Skinny, boney flesh covered the nightmare. Several shot wounds closed up as it began to move.
Gaining speed the Ghoul started to close in on the man. (Bang, Bang Bang!) went the pistol shaking in his hands. Shrugging of the shots it seemed to get only quicker as the man screamed in terror. Now within only a few feet the ghoul jumped at him. Faster than T or C could keep sight it hit the old man and tore into him.
"We need a better plan..." T
"Thank the creator I didn't lead them out just now..." C
Mom and sister slack eyed at the door, "Uuuuhhhhnnn"
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Now knowing that it was not safe to leave, T gathered C and mom with sis to lead them back to the bathroom area. C closed the door behind them as the undead group moved forward to a safer spot. The silence from the previous shots and scream was an ominous overtone.
The distance covered, T open the door next to the bath room. Looking in reminded her that T had a younger brother. Bright pictures. small piles of clothes, and boy's toys were scattered haphazardly in the room. An almost faded bed sat it the corner, contents still disturbed from the morning it happened.
Not seeing her brother anywhere in the room, T determined it was safe to leave her family in here. with C gently nudging them T helped her mom into the bed. "please just sit here and I'll think of something." T though urgently.
Almost as if a higher power was saying "okay, but just this once." nothing went wrong. Both mother and daughter seemed to relax in the room. The pile of clothes were ruffled be sister as if she was checking them.
Feeling like thing might go smoothly for once, the girls left the room. AS they closed the door, her mother almost seemed to wave at them as if saying "Good luck". Knowing what to do next they head back across the house to the other bed room door.
As they got closer, a voice came out from behind the door again. "What was that loud banging and screaming from? Is it safe for me to come out of here?" It sounded like a slightly older teenager to C.
Quickly coming up with a plan, T went back into the living room. She had noticed a piece of paper in the kitchen next to the sofa earlier. "Maybe if I try to write really slow I might be able to talk to her."
With paper and a pen in tow, T head back to C and the mysterious person behind the door. Both of them nodded their head affirmative. T grabbed the doorknob and began to open the door.
An unexpected sight greeted them. An almost older version of T sat on a bed with a towel covering her hair and a bathrobe on. She seemed slightly afraid of T and C.
Making up her mind, T put the paper on the wall and wrote crudely upon it. (H e l l o). T's writing teach would be rolling in her grave on how badly wrote the message was.
Still uncertain the girl moved of the bed. "Sister, what are you?"
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