《Evolution God. Weakest to strongest.》Jaus already broke limits!?
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Jaus, Our ape hero, is currently on he outskirts of the village with his
mother Ka'Par. Ka'par told him that his father died while being on a
food trip.
Jaus is already being put to training to get him to non-core rank 25.
He is currently rank 0 because he hasn't done any proper training.
He
is currently punching a tree. The tree... Isn't going to hold on much
longer. It's already weak. Jaus's punches are terrifying in the eyes of
his mother.
Ka'par: "Jaus... How strong.. Are you?"
Jaus: "I think.. Strong enough?"
Ka'par: "Not a good answer!"
Jaus: "I don't know mother!"
Ka'par: "Resume training!"
Jaus is already the size of a teen silverback gorilla. Even though he was just born yesterday...
Jaus (to himself): Non-elemental apes grow fast... Don't they...
Jaus practiced for a week afture that. He punched trees. Punched rocks. Punched other apes.
Before he was even 2 weeks old he was already at non-core rank 25.
It was an impossible feat for even the strongest beast. His mother was impressed.
The reason behind his growth? Simple! God's gift!
God gave him fast growth!
When
he went to sleep he felt weird... When he woke up he felt he was in a
cocoon... What he didn't know was... He was evolving! This was unusual
for non-elementals! He was going to evolve into an elemental ape! He was
going to grow stonger!
His mother wandered in and saw him evolving. She took him to the tribe's most sacred place.
"The Ape God's Eye" is what they named it. An eye of an gorrilla was carved into a rock.
When he finished evolving... He found out it was a rare evolution.
He evolved into a new species.
"The Divine Gorilla" is what he named it.
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He had pure white hair, golden eyes. He was 3x bigger than a regular non-elemental.
He had the "Divine" element. He could use every element what he has seen once.
When he was challenged to a fight with the chief of the ape tribe... He crushed him with one finger. Litteraly. One. FINGER.
He decided to leave the tribe. He looked into his core rank again.
He
was a non-core rank 100... He only needed to meditate ONCE for ONE
minute to become a core beast. He wanted to become human so he sat down
on the floor, right under the eye of the Ape God. And meditated. 10
seconds passed. Quiet. 20 seconds passed. Still quiet. 30 seconds
passed. Quiet. 40 seconds passed. Quiet. 50 seconds. Quiet. 60 seconds..
Not quiet. The energy from Jaus was overflowing. He broke through the
bottleneck and became a cored beast.
Steam came from out of nowhere and created a sort of "scarf" around him. It went under his armpits and up above his head.
His entire existence was basically screaming "DIVINE"
He wanted to transform into human form so he put a lot of energy into that...
3 minutes passed... He turned into a human.
He
was medium height. 1 meter 90 centimeters. He had white hair down to
his waist. He had muscles all over his body. He looked... Dazzling. He
quickly hid his... Private parts... With his hair and requested some
clothing. The apes told him they had none. He turned back into his beast
form and said goodbye to everyone before leaving.
Jaus.. Was
adventuring towards the port. There was one port what connected the two
continents. Humans and Beasts got a long... Good and very badly.
Depended on the species.
Who will Jaus meet? Will Jaus grow
stronger than the king of beasts? Who is the king of beasts even? What
will the human world offer to Jaus? These questions will be answered
next time!
Creator's note - Please review this one too! Gives me
confidence on both my works. Comment flaws you find so I can try to
patch them up! I'm a new author so I need some help getting on both my
feet and standing upright.
This is truly a harsh world. Not as harsh as Jaus's world though.
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