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There have been enough chapters now to ask what people like about the series and what you don't like. One of things I am trying to do is avoid the issue the the series The Gamer has: unable to keep count of skill points earned. Also trying to balance between powerful enough to be fun but also not to strong as to make must fights pointless. Making sure the MC thinks through problems and come up with solutions not just always saved by the plot. For me marking how how a quest is by a letter made it easier to understand how hard it was.
Healing will be hard to balance but I came up with the idea that when people get to a point in terms of how powerful they are there bodies change. Kind of like inside they create super muscle fibers that lower ranked healing is very ineffective. This way theirs a greater reason for primary healers in major armies. There will be no items that store mana or multi it like in wheel of time book series leading to broken MC's and dumb plot reasons they don't just go out and win.
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Robinson Crusoe (Completed)
Robinson Crusoe is a novel by Daniel Defoe, first published on 25 April 1719. The first edition credited the work's protagonist Robinson Crusoe as its author, leading many readers to believe he was a real person and the book a travelogue of true incidents. Epistolary, confessional, and didactic in form, the book is presented as an autobiography of the title character (whose birth name is Robinson Kreutznaer)-a castaway who spends twenty-eight years on a remote tropical desert island near Trinidad, encountering cannibals, captives, and mutineers, before ultimately being rescued.
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**Author's Note** This was my 7th attempt at writing this story. I've worked on the story since 20 years ago but my writing style and skills haven't been satisfactory to me. So after working as a digital content manager for 2 years and after a very long deliberation I've decided to drop this 7th attempt and start on my 8th attempt. This 8th attempt will be the same story but starting from a different point in the timeline of my story. Thank you for your support on this 7th try, it is only due to your reviews and comments that I have the confidence to work hard on my 8th attempt. I started on my 8th attempt with the intention that my 8th attempt will be the final one as I'm a lot more confident and content with my where my writing skills are currently at. Volume 1 In a world filled with magic, war, giants and other awesome races lives Frank. Who being Frank is somewhat of a hermit. He loves to tinker with various contraptions trying to bend the laws of magic to his will. Through his successes he has garnered some attention; unwanted attention. If only that was all there was to it. .... war is coming Volume 2 Frank was born as a normal child, born in a normal family. His father was a scientist and was busy working most days. This is also why Frank was especially excited when his father decided to take an extended holiday to travel to Asia with his family. But their trip turns out to be one from which there is no going back. Writer's notice: I will continue to participate in the NaNoWriMo every November till I finish all that I have planned to write. I expect to have this story finished in 14 years approximately.Update:I was unhappy with how I had first written the first and second volume but am leaving the editing and finishing of those volumes till later and have started on the third one. The chronological order so far is 2-1-3. Might fix that too later.
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The Generation of Miracles were so happy to have their phantom, 'Kuroko Tetsuya'. They would never regret having him on the team, nor him part of their lives. He was precious to them.But, were they really telling the truth to Kuroko? Was it all a lie or the truth? To know what will happen to Kuroko.The adorable, smart, and fragile boy in the story, then read until the end.
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