《The destiny》The beginning
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The black smoke absorbed us while we were about to enter the cafe. There was darkness for next 10 seconds in my eyes, I couldn't see anything. The next thing I saw were not a single but a million of collection of stars, revolving around me, I was feeling them near me but I also felt like they were far away from us , I can't describe my feelings.
(Now the thing from the point of view from Sushil.)
After everything that took place there was darkness for me for the last 20 seconds, after my vision came back , I saw my to the left was my best friend eren, I was to the right there was a extremely beautiful girl, her skin was farely white, slim body, beautiful lips, I could even say that I fall for at the first sight. It was love at the first sight, I saw to the very right side there was a man beside us who was identical to her. A voice reached me saying, " Good evening everyone,I, Isaac netro, the angel of universe tandem is know requesting you to please save the world of ours, which is in the grave danger of that man, Iskaman suktor also know as raskh , the man whose evil desire, led to the end of many lives, not only on our planet but also of your very life as well".The girl beside me said, so are you trying to say that we are dead".he replied "Yes, indeed, you all are dead by now. The cafe which you were trying to visit was non other that the device of that dangerous man, who will someday end our entire universe and not only of ours but alos of your universe. But you are not fully dead, there's a way to regain your body and send you back to your planet /world., but the way is not a very easy one it will take may effort and sacrifice to achieve it. The choice is in your hand to take the Chance or let your life end now."we all were completely shocked to hear that, it was a very dangerous decision whether to take our chance or let die us. We all said yes in the heat of the moment. The man Isaac netro said, "I'm the angel of tandem universe, by the wish of the God you will all be send to that world and the fate will guide you towards your goal, there will be a cult of mine, find that cult, they will prove useful allies in the upcoming battle against that man raskh.I am giving you powers which will surely help in your near future,the journey awaited by you will surely turn the world upside down, so by then farewe-. Wait a minute I replied. He said to me,"Now What happended"I replied you didn't say anything why we are the only one chosen for this are there more like us or only we will go there and why are you giving your power to us? He said, "well then farewell" . And we were teleported from that place
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[RANDOM PRIVATE CHATBOX]Topic: Rumors tell of a player that actually managed to conquer at least half of Invictus, the Knight of Mercy. Any thoughts on this?Guest1624 - """"FAKE!"""Guest3758 - """"Shut up! It's true I heard he even turned down all that territory and honor"""Guest3692 - """" I got word that he doesn't kill players, not even PKers"""Guest1624 - """"What a load of BULL!"""Guest6814 - """" I'm more worried about the Shadow that kills whoever crosses him, I mean does he even know about it, or does he order it to do all the killing?"""Guest5206 - """"Whatever, just make sure he joins our guild, he could be our greatest asset or even our biggest obstacle, if he even refuses, tag him and KOS we don't need any more competitors"""All in chat - """"Understood""""
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"Montana, come here." He nodded his head toward the door, leaving out of the room. Staying silent as Ms. Carol looked at me, I kissed the back of Josiah's hand before leaving out of the room. As I walked out, Messiah stood there looking at me in disgust while I closed the door. "What are you doing that shit for?" "Huh?" I said since I had nothing else to say, just trying to stall time to get my words together."Why are you stripping, Monty?"Sighing, I decided that I wasn't going to lie like I'd originally planned to do after listening to Chocolate's stupid advice. "Money." I spoke simply and he scoffed as I looked down."Why not just ask Josiah for money instead doing hoe shit?" "First of all, It's not doing hoe shit. I don't have sex with anyone. I just dance. And I don't want to ask him for any money. It's not his job to take care of me.""So stripping..." He trailed off with a laugh."..stripping was the last resort? Instead of putting your pride aside?" Saying nothing, I just looked at him with pleading eyes."Please don't tell him, Messiah." I could already tell by the look on his face that he was going to tell him."I ain't gon' tell him.." Thank God. I thought. "..you are." "What?!" I shrieked. "No. I'm not.""You are." He spoke in a demanding tone."Please. You know how he is." I expressed"And you know how he is too but you made that bed." "Messiah, he's going to kill me." I begged."I know." He shook his head, walking away from me."Better figure it out. You got until the end of the day to tell him or I will." He mumbled before walking back into the room.
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