《The Origins Of The Races [Español!]》Reflexión de autor.
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Hola aquí en el mundo de internet me llamo Armon por armonía y como la armonía me lo impone hay momentos donde se tiene que estar calmado y reflexionar, así que he decido hacer esto, ¿Hay alguna razón para leerlo si todavía no lo dropeaste? Diría que no pero dire unas cosas importantes, otras cosas interesantes y algunas estupideces, ah y claro el agradecimiento, siempre hay que agradecer.
Primero ha hablar de la novela en general, siempre me preocupa el tiempo, no se como me va a dar la vida para escribir todo lo que pienso, ya casi termina el año y como mucho llego a empezar el cuarto mito, que ni siquiera es cerca de la mitad del volumen 1. Segundo problema, ya van dos chicas seguidas y vienen otras dos... no es muy variado que digamos, tampoco ayuda que las próximas dos sean puras en el concepto del amor, bueno no tienen más de comun por ahora que eso y que son mujeres. Pero ahí está el problema ¿Cuatro mujeres seguidas? lo siento pero es mucho pero igual lo dejaré así, en mi justificación totalmente válida es que uso mucho estereotipos de las razas para elegir tanto tradiciones, modos de comportar de la raza en general, el genero del protagonista y algunos pensamientos de el y más, árbol del mundo, obviamente mujer, la diosa del amor, no será cupido, los siguiente no lo diré pero estarán de acuerdo que debían ser mujer. Ahora no se que haré con el 5 para que sea hombre, todavía no decidí su raza aunque tengo algunas ideas.
Segundo ha hablar de los cambios en estos 50 capítulos. Como habrán notado hubo cambios abruptos y no puedo prometer que no lo habrán de nuevo, primero cambie bastante la perspectiva de tercera persona a una con más de primera persona, creo que estoy más acostumbrado con ella pero igual aparecerá más la tercera persona cuando es mejor, segundo hubo un cambio de horario en Royal Road pero ya estamos normal, esas vacaciones a mi me fueron mal. Tercero ahora estoy con el spam por enojarme con los ladrones, si hay desvergonzados yo también me haré desvergonzado. Cuarto estoy empezando en TMO poner el título centrado y en negrita solo por estética. Quinto gracias a todos he notado que hubo más apoyo, estos últimos días he visto como apareció en la última página de popular en TMO cosa que no pasó más de una vez antes y ahora la puedo ver por lo menos una vez a la semana, eso me demuestra que leen mi novela, que vale la pena todas las horas, muchas gracias.
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Tercero el tercer mito se esta por acabar, no queda más de 30 y lo digo porque siempre me paso, no creo que supere los 20 pero lo hará, ya solo queda atar clavos y no dejarlos sueltos. Me costó un poco agarrarle el ritmo pero ya lo agarre, creo que sirvió mucho para aprender y me gusta. En este mito he notado mi avance y como sigo siendo malo, cuando hay muchos personajes no puedo hacerlo natural, siempre se me enfoca en algunos y los otros parece que no están, pero he notado que aumento el numero de personajes que puedo hacer participar en una conversación y que cada uno participen lo suficiente como para que parezca natural.
Ultimo: Gracias por siempre apoyarme, espero que sigan leyendo hasta que termine toda la novela.
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