《The Thread Bearer》Chapter 23: A Clear Cut Offering
Advertisement
"Next!" A voice called through an opaque doorway
I had been standing in a line for more than three hours. After passing through the gates of Dulcrois, we were stopped for immediate processing by the constabularies. Berthold assured us it would be fine, telling the guards we were part of his group. But my hesitancy only grew when they chose to separate all three of us.
"Next!" The man repeated, growing impatient.
"Of course, sorry!" I shouted back.
I entered a room lined with immaculately carved marble as I passed through the threshold. A short man with a tidied appearance and fair skin sat on the far side of the room. I approached his desk but was stopped before I could get any closer.
"Ah ah." He corrected, gesturing to the center of the room. "On the cross, please."
A cross was engraved and gilded in the center of the pristine marble floor. Inside this design lay countless patterns, fractals, and spirals emanating from the center. These designs extended to the farthest corners of the cross. I didn't need Broke to know that this definitely had some serious magic behind it.
I hesitantly entered the border of the cross and stepped into the center.
That man is using the Mythic Skill: Appraisal on you.
The man behind the desk continued writing into a ledger before him, checking boxes and filling multiple pages. After several minutes of this, the man finally looked up at me and shut the book loudly on the desk.
"So, Mersault Star." The man started. "What is your offering to Dulcrois?"
"Well, my friend Bert explained that you all would want to see my skills and maybe run some tests. Then I'd be able to enter the city, right?"
"Maybe, that depends on what you can do. I'd love a demonstration."
"Oh! Right." I replied, digging through the contents of my bag for any kind of fabric or loose materials. "Do you have any children?"
"Yes, a daughter. Why do you ask?"
Advertisement
I showed the man several pieces of cloth and wooden dowels loosely piled in my hands. Then, focused on their properties, reforming and shaping these materials until they resembled the form of a princess clad in teal.
"Not a bribe, I promise," I said, gesturing to the doll. "May I?"
The man nodded as I walked the doll over to him, setting it on his overly sized marble desk. As I approached, I watched him fidget with a broach on his chest engraved with the symbol of a nine-pointed star.
"Do I need to go back on the cross, or?"
"No, that won't be needed." He replied, reopening his ledger and immediately working on filling the next page. "You may move on to the next room. Wait for the others you came with."
Before I walked away, I could see the words 'training,' 'useful,' and 'close attention.' I exited confidently, feeling it was an exam I had just aced.
Nev took a while but was the next one released after me. They joined me in a large waiting room similarly styled to the testing room but furnished much differently. Instead of a single oversized desk, chairs and couches filled the room. At capacity, it looked as if it could seat a hundred people comfortably though now only about twenty occupied it.
A buffet-style offering lined one of the marble walls, though I wasn't interested in eating. My nerves had the better of me, fearing that my companions would be allowed entry but not myself, or vice-versa. I assumed this was how more popular people felt back in high school waiting on college acceptance letters. Another reason I didn't feel like touching any of the food presented. Something about their presentation felt off. The food looked immaculate but stayed that way even after being handled and sitting for multiple hours. It reminded me of food people would film in my last life for commercials, covered in shoe polish, motor oil, and paints to give off the aesthetic of being delicious. But the actual taste was far from it.
Advertisement
"You okay?" Nev asked, watching my laser focus on the spread halfway across the room.
"Yeah, I'm fine. The guy I spoke with just psyched me out a little."
"Tell me about it." Nev sprawled on a couch, getting comfortable. "When the woman I spoke with saw my husk, she all but started drooling in front of me. Then went back to acting all prim and proper. Something about the energy of this place... I just hope the whole city isn't like this."
"Tell me about it. Hopefully, Berthold is having an easier time with this than we are."
Almost in response, Berthold entered the room we waited in, and his appearance undoubtedly answered my question. He looked far paler than usual with bags under his eyes he didn't have only three hours before.
"Woah, are you okay?" Nev asked, standing up from their relaxed state.
"Oh yeah! I'm great." Berthold replied, lifting up a clenched hand with two thumbs sticking up.
"What did they do to you?"
"Oh, you know, same old same old." Berthold threw himself onto the couch. "Questions, answers, a little bit of blood magic. No big deal."
"Lauer, Raist, Star. We're ready for you."
Nev and I walked on while Berthold dragged his feet behind us.
"You come to us today in an attempt to gain access to our city. That is correct?"
"Yes, my Sun." Berthold projected from behind us.
His skin was still pale, but his voice did not waver. Several beads of sweat ran down his face, though his focus was entirely on something else.
"And your offering?" Another cloaked figure shouted down from the balcony above.
The same marble flooring found itself even in this room, but the setting was vastly different. No windows allowed natural light to illuminate this space. Only nine loges layered into the farthest walls had torches fixed to the opening of their boxes. Whoever stood inside was cloaked with a veil of darkness, obscuring any features.
"I must be honest with your Suns; I have attempted to enter the city of Dulcrois once before. But, by your radiant vision, I was rejected and allowed another chance for entry."
The dimly lit opera boxes said nothing in response. Nev and I shared a look of confusion.
"I had offered myself before to be utilized to my fullest potential in exchange for access to your perfect city. Now, I offer the city this instead of one life of service." He upturned his bag allowing its contents to haphazardly spill onto the floor.
"One copy of Belinel's Unfamiliar Species, first edition. Haggas and the Silver Dawn. And if a different kind of reading is your fancy, I have Eufearia: A Collection of Horrific Exotic Prints."
He cleaned the books into a neat stack, stuffing the remaining goods into his bag. "And one more thing."
"Go on." A Sun replied.
"Instead of one, two servants for your golden city. The man can transmute at will, consuming very little energy." He pointed at Nev. "The other one can control and communicate plants, no casting or artifacts required."
"Berthold, what are you saying?" I asked.
"I should've killed you when we first met." Nev spat out.
"Very well." One of the Suns called out. "If there are no other objections."
"Wait!"
"Yeah, I've definitely got an objection right here," Nev called out.
"Then it has been decided." A different Sun called down. "Berthold Lauer will join our society and gain all the rights of Dulcrois citizenship."
"We'll need to restrain the other two for processing and transportation." The rightmost Sun called down.
As I began to backstep toward the door we entered, my limbs locked in place. I tried to shout out to Nev, but my throat closed, and lips refused to move.
You are currently being held by the Exotic Skill: Constrain Space.
Advertisement
- In Serial34 Chapters
Old Riding Author Lunatic Asylum
Just off the A19, in the dark, incomprehensible lands known as Yorkshire, there lies a town. A town where shadow-silent alleys glint with the secret hunger of knives. Where blood soaks the chipboard window shutters of forsaken terraces stretching off into the night. Where the smog-choked air rattles with the depraved laughter echoing out from clubs that can only generously be described as post-apocalyptic. Well, that’s Middlesbrough. But down the A19 a bit (an impossibly long way down, actually) there lies another town: Raughnen, in the ancient, forgotten Old Riding. It is an equal match in muggery and thuggery alike. It also has magic spells and pointy wizard hats. And now, across the miles and across all sensibilities, a pretty nasty power (a magic one) calls out for its pretty nasty counterpart (a decidedly unmagic one): a proper sound Boro lad. Nothing good can come of it. This is a collection of one novella and four connected short stories: I. A Yorkshire Summoning II. Old Riding Day Trip (the novella) III. Heaven is a Parmo IV. Death on the 66 V. Death on the 257 In total, this comprises 34 chapters totalling around 35,000 words, so try not to worry. It will be over relatively quickly. There are three more short stories with more tenuous links to the core collection: Rush, Paper Round and Scenario 79: Sausage Fingers, all of which can be found in my collection Short Records of Misadventure. Reading these may allow you to make more sense of certain parts of the story, if any sense is to be made at all. NOTE: There are instances of prejudice and discrimination within these stories, including elements of sexism and ageism, which are purely the thoughts and actions of the characters involved and which certainly do not reflect my own views on these matters. ANOTHER NOTE; A WARNING, PERHAPS: This can get a bit weird. In less than 150 pages, we have four viewpoints, first and third person narratives, and a completely disjointed plot with lots of gaps, dead ends and no real resolution. Also ZERO lunatic asylums. It's all a bit odd. If that sort of thing isn't your cup of tea, which it most likely isn't, it might be best to move on now.
8 190 - In Serial17 Chapters
A Tower Of Dreams
In a world recovering from the devastation brought by a great plague, a girl with more issues than sense is muddling her way through life. Until she unwittingly sets her foot into a tangled mess of problems that will change her life forever. Disclaimer: Characters, organizations, and objects depicted are fictional. The author will not take responsibility for the loss of any sanity or causation of mental trauma, physical injuries, nightmares, existential crisis, or spontaneous combustion of ducks resulting from reading this work.
8 187 - In Serial9 Chapters
IT'S NOT ABOUT DESTINY
This is a story like you've never read before. A story about emotions, idiocy and revenge. This is IT'S NOT ABOUT DESTINY.
8 204 - In Serial40 Chapters
Wait… Why is this a Skill? [Dropped]
Author's Note: Now, I just lost my motivation for writing this. Feel free to read until the last available chapter. I might come back to writing, but it will be another fiction. ========================= During school, Endou Kouta and the whole school were summoned to another world. With the cliché line, “Please save this world from the demon lord!” He and his classmates were given skills to strengthen themselves. However, Kouta, who was labeled “King of the School”, was given no skills. He was shunned by the royals but not by his classmates. His classmates then helped him train during their stay at the castle. During an expedition to subjugate a monster, Kouta was killed… not. Instead, he was given a skill he never thought he would have. This is the adventure of a closet online gamer in another world.
8 176 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Next Madara (not being written)
The long awaited return is here the story has returned and is hopefully everything people have hoped for.For people who don't know which is probably most of you this was once a story with nearly two hundred thousand reads I deleted those chapters because they sucked and now I'm writing it again but better
8 180 - In Serial25 Chapters
Haurutsuki: Beautiful Snow
Heir to a Hidden Mist Clan, Miyuki finds herself in the middle of a war. When meeting a young Kakashi Hatake, both of them change forever. But is it for the better?
8 118

