Theme (13/15)

This is extremely tricky because the fewer words thier are, the harder it is to understand. What may have been the author's interpretation over here, the readers may have a completely different interpretation. I think the theme is pretty strong but there is always room for improvement and getting better. I don't think I was able to fully emotionally connect to what you wrote.

Cover (8/10)

The cover is interesting but I don't think it captures all the 6-word parts in the store in one big idea. You want the cover to essentially be what ties everything together. This cover does not fully showcase everything that the book has to offer.

Title (10/10)

The title is extremely effective and I do not see how it could be improved. In my opinion, it is the best it can be.

Detail (12/15)

There could definitely be more descriptions of everything via the word choice. Although you can't use many words, you can change what words you have so that you can best describe what's going on without going over the limit.

Originality (10/10)

I can't say I have seen 6-word poems because I haven't ever seen them. Seeing such an idea was an interesting concept to view.

Writing Skills (13/15)

Overall there is work to be done. I would say in the sentence construction area and figurative language, you should work on those first. There was also your word choice/diction which can be improved.

Grammar (10/10)

The grammar seems good overall, I didn't find any problems. I don't have any opinions on this grouping.

Overall Poetry(12/15)

There is room for improvement but I see what your trying to connect with. It's pretty interesting to view. I look forward to seeing future books from you.

Overall Score: 90 (A-)

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