This is my first time writing fanfic, please give me feedback

also this is an alternative universe Larry Stylinson fanfic!

*I just wanted to add a few disclaimers*

• I'm just writing this for fun, in no way am I trying to disrespect Louis or Harry

• sensitive topics tw//conversion therapy

• I want to apologize for the way that I wrote Jay and Eleanor in this story. They are just characters and have nothing to do with the real life people. Thank you :)

enjoy;)

I MADE A TRAILER :)

• it's obviously not exactly like the story... but it's pretty close :)

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