《Debanya: Rebirth Of Love》chapter 20
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Continued
Baalveer : if this is the truth then why can't I remember anything.
Shourya : due to my magic spell. But now I will take it back.
Shourya roars and suddenly everything starts roaming in there minds.
Baalveer : now I remember everything clearly . What about you anu.
Ananya : I also remember everything. And now I won't spare that timnasa.
In Bharatnagar in debu's room
Debu's pov
I just remembered everything . And how close I was to my parents and Anu. Ya I use to call her that and she used to call me dabu well historic isn't it. We use to fight , eat , play together now she is a matured person and so am I . Does she still think of me as a friend. I should talk to her. But why am I so nervous calm yourself debu she is your friend.
Subconscious mind : oh really 😏 or more than friend.
Debu : only my friend.
Subconscious mind : ya ya I know just friends type ✌️ isn't it.
Debu : just get lost I am not in a mood to talk to you.
Subconscious mind : ya I totally understand why would you be interested in talking with me when you have your anu isn't it.
Debu : no it's not like that just get lost.
Subconscious mind : yes I am going talk with your anu.
End of pov.
Devki : what happened debu . Iam calling you from last 15 mins and you are sitting there and blushing.
Debu's pov.
I was still thinking about ananya . When suddenly someone shouted in my ears ouch my poor eardrums . And I looked up to see devki aunty throwing teasing looks at me. What why she throwing these looks . And then she told me that I was blushing from last 15 mins . (🤣) Wth. And then I understood why she was throwing those looks.
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Devkiji : what happened debu seems like you have find my bahu.
No it's not true. Huh why is everyone behind me .
Debu : nothing such devkiji.
Devkiji : yes I totally believe you.
Note the sarcasm.
Debu : seriously devkiji I am not in such things.
Devkiji : I can understand today's generation hides things from elders. Accha leave it I was here to inform you that someone has came to meet you .
Now who's there here I am already irritated. Let's see.
Hey guys.
Now who is here to meet debu . What do you all think. And made debu's emotions clear .this was debu's pov next will be ananya's . Are you all okay with pov as it makes characters emotions clear. Well I was seriously enjoyed writing today's part. Did you all enjoyed reading.
Thanks for reading 😊
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