《I Never Wanted This! (Yandere Serial Killer x Reader)》Final Note
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First book over (well, it's technically a short story but still). I thought it would be fun to write facts about the story so here you go.
1. The reader was supposed to be an OC.
2. I did not have a plan for the story (I tried to have one, but I was not able to make a good one and I just gave up).
3. Lulu was supposed to be the killer.
4. I built a whole concept about clubs that I did not use because I knew the story would be short and I did not want to waste too much time away from the main event.
5. Liam's name was a struggle. It went from Light to Utsu to some weird Japanese names to the final one.
I do not think this story is bad for a first try, but there is a lot of room for improvement. So now, I would really want your thoughts about this story. What you liked, what you dislike, how you liked the characters, EVERYTHING!!!
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please.
I would like to thank everyone for sticking around and making this journey more fun.
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