《Wattpad India Awards 2021》Learn: Setup
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When you look back on some of your favorite stories, you'll often come up with a mind-bending moment that changed how you viewed everything. You thought the story was going one way and then suddenly it went another.
Or perhaps it was the time that everything came together. Finally, you got to see all of your favorite characters show up to defeat evil or the couple kissed, even though you knew all along it was going to happen.
These huge highs are so addicting that writers will want to pack their stories with them, sometimes without putting in the work for each one. Remember when we spoke about increasing tension? How the next goal always needs to be bigger, how the stakes need to keep rising?
Those 'stakes' come from set-ups. You can't have the conflict of the hero's family being in danger if the family was never introduced. You can't have a side character die heroically and expect it to be impactful if the emotional bond was never set up.
Let's talk about all the work that needs to be done in order to earn those moments.
All big moments need to be promised to the audience and they are going to be established in the opening chapters. Is there a villain? They'll need to be defeated. Is your character single and just bumped into a hottie? They're gonna get together.
As the reader, a promise has been made to you: you'll get the answer by the end.
This notion of set-up is present for all parts of a story. It works for the overall narrative, and it also applies to character arcs and even to smaller scenes. Everything you name or focus on in your story is a clue to your reader that something will happen. The more interesting or exciting that thing is, and the more time you spend on it, the more the reader expects something to happen with it.
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This manifests in the rule of Chekhov's Gun:
The principle that states every element in a dramatic work must be relevant. That whatever else we do as writers we must not hold "false promises" out to our readers.
Consciously or not, we're always loading Chekhov's Gun. Every sentence we write is a rifle hung on the wall. Sooner or later it will - and it must - go off. In this scenario, the gun is the set-up, a building block that adds context to your future pay-off.
Again, there are cases of misdirects which are used to make the reader think something is going to happen when something entirely different ends up happening. We'll get into that later.
The topic of set-up can be tricky. The simplest way to go about it is ensuring that your big future plot point doesn't appear out of nowhere, that it has some base and some foreshadowing.
Today, we're going to leave you with the winning stories from the previous editions of Wattpad India Awards. If you haven't read them yet, now's the time to do so!
Happy reading :)
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The Beast of Kulain
Val, a young man betrayed by his loved ones and cast out for being a dall'in, a beast controlled by it's endless hunger. Dall'ins' are remorseless and pitiless, with barely a mind of their own. Cast out and forced to flee from those hunting him, he runs to the Kuran mountain range and attempts to hide. Where will he be taken in this world of blood and iron, when he begins to hear a voice urging him forward to greater heights, what will he do to obtain power immemorial? The story begins in the mountain ranges, and his past is slowly revealed as to how he became what he is. But the question is, if dall'ins' are mindless beasts with no forethought. Then what manner of beast is Val? ---------- First story constructive feedback pls papi cover from book called the kings bastard by Rowena Cory Daniells ty to 91Blodhevn for tellin me
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Heroic Age
When the First beam of light descended upon the earth and gave humans access to the Heroic Altar, a voice appeared in every humans mind across the world. “The realm is in peril and its people need your help, those that choose to step upon the path of the Hero need but enter and let your deeds go down in history” When the world received this message thousand rose to the challenge, and in exchange for facing the terrors of the universe, they were granted fantastical powers and abilities in the form of [Skills]. Years have past since the first Hero took up the cause and the world has never been the same for it. Heroes who were supposed to use their power for the good of the universe have set about abusing them for their own personal greed, whilst others tried to achieve too much, too quickly, and it cost them everything because of it. Now a boy who has had his past hidden from him will discover the truth behind a secret that had been kept from him all of his life, and in exchange… …the world will hate him for it Additional Tag: Taming, Bloodlines Note: I did not create nor do i own the picture that i am currently using for the cover of this book, it is a still image i found on the web shot within a popular netflix movie.
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Saer Servitude
Saer, a hired killer is, up to a very unusual task of protecting a family. Never in his life has Saer used his assassin skills to save someone. But, this time he has to use it for thatif he wants to save his and everyone's lives. Worst part - the family is reluctant to the idea of letting anyone protect them. Instead, they kill cut-throats who try to guard them. Father thinks they are safe inside the house but Saer knows what lies outside. If half of the family gets killed then the apocalypse is imminent. Family foes won't stop till they bring menace to the land. The Great Invasion is nearing...
8 200 - In Serial18 Chapters
The First Realm
Frank Richland sometimes dreams of being a character in one of the video games he plays or the fantasy stories he reads, but he never expected to be come the leader of his own country and the master of a realm. Frank is not given a choice by the mysterious system that kidnaps him during a relaxing walk upon one of the many paths around Austin. The system warns him that other Realm Masters will try to conquer his realm which will kill him. The only path to survival is to build a strong empire, to become a powerful psion, and to grow as quickly as he can.
8 190 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Ninja Of The Family ( A Loud House Ninja Fan Fiction)
Lincoln runs away from home because his sister told the whole town he was bad luck and runs into a ninja master and becomes the next ninja master!
8 99 - In Serial24 Chapters
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