《Don't know why ( Rewriting)(Editing)》Breaking Down
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Holding the photographs of his lover and his brother, under the sheets naked, Jay let the feeling of betrayal sink in. It is his marriage today with the love of his life who didn't come, what came instead was these proof of her cheating, with his cousin's brother. His mobile pinged and he opened just to let his first tear fall.....it was a video of her, Aanya sleeping on Mayan with just a sheet over them. He closed the video and stared at the holy fire, now simmering. His family was enraged but saving their family reputation was a priority so they plead with Myra, Aanya's sister to marry Jay. Jay was hurt. His family didn't care how hurt he was, rather they cared about their reputation. He shifted his gaze to Myra, also his childhood friend who has been there for him every time he felt low and today again, she was here. But this was about her life and he won't let her sacrifice it for him or their family. So shaking his head side to side, he silently told her not to do it, but the reply made him break down. 'Just for the last time she said. And she has been saying that for the past 100 sacrifices she has done for others...for him. He looks at her and she smiles a bit and before they know, they are married.
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Four days into the marriage and it hasn't been any less awkward for Maira and Jay. Though they are childhood friends the fact that Jay is in love with now his wife's sister, makes it very awkward and a little bit disgusting to Jay. It feels so wrong to him and his heart breaks for his wife thinking that she knows that fact.
It's 10 pm now and he is heading for the couch, where he has been sleeping since their 1st night. They mutually decided to switch turns to sleep on, though initially Maira proposed sharing the king-size bed but Jay denied it because sleeping on the same bed felt very wrong to him.
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Lying in their respective places, they tried to sleep before Jay's words caught Maira's attention.
'Why did you agree? I denied it but you didn't....you chose to marry someone who doesn't love you or rather...loves your sister... That's so fucked up.'
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Of course, it's blue! That's his favorite color, she knows that.
' You are too good for this family...for me.' Jay mumbled, his eyes closed and that's why he missed the raw emotion that flashed through her eyes.
Fear.
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Room No. 067
Aanya rubbed her eyes groaning at the pain her body was going through, waking up to sit on the bed that she realized isn't hers. Where is she??Looking around, her eyes widened taking in the sight of a man....shirtless and with black joggers lying next to her. The Fuck !! How did she get here?? She went to the makeup studio for...GOD!! Jay....her wedding!!
Aanya got off the bed and realised she was in her underwear.... Tears gathered in her eyes thinking of the worse but she quickly scanned the room and found her anarkali she wore on her way to the beauty parlour, put them on and moved to the other side, shaking the man up only to be surprised when the man rose up his face burried in the pillow..... Wasn't he the driver of the cab she took?
___________To be continued___________
First chapter is up hoes!!!See ya soon...And PLEASE !!! Just take care of yourself 😑
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