《Me and my 12 brothers. YES....12 brothers!》Me and my 12 brothers. YES....12 brothers!- chapter one
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Their suppose to be indentical twins in the story....but oh well....it's just to give you an idea of what they look like :) :P :)x
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Edited 4/8/14 (briefly)
Edited 2/02/15 (fully)
* Okay it may be edited, HOWEVER It's not edited to perfection, there may still be a few mistakes but at least it's a little better..I hope :)
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CHAPTER 1
I rummage through my draws frowning trying to find my bloody phone. I've searched through my entire room and this is the last place. Where is it?!
I stop pause suddenly, my eyes narrowing before I slam the draw shut and spin around on my heels.
"EVAN!" I yell storming out my room down the hall towards his and kick the door open with not even bothering to knock.
"Evan...-!" A girl's voice moans cutting off at my dramatic entrance.
My eyes widen to see two people on the bed under the covers. One being my older brother Evan.
"URR gross Evan. LOCK YOUR DAMN DOOR!" I yell and turn to go but pause by the door "Oh and GIVE MY BLOODY PHONE BACK!" I shout slamming the door shut.
You would think that would have scared me, seeing my own brother and some girl doing that, but frankly, I've walked in on him and a girl countless of times before.
I hear muffled moaning again and sprint away from his door. So gross. I do not need to hear that.
I cuss at him in my head plotting my revenge and go back to my room, only to bump into a little someone who's sat on the floor, silent tears running down his face.
I stop immediately and crouch down to his level.
"Tom, sweetie. What's wrong?" I ask softly to my 4 year old brother, Thomas.
He sniffs and looks up at me with his baby blue eyes that are now watery. His lip trembles and I scoop him up off the floor balancing him on my hip as he buries his head into my neck wrapping his arms around it too.
"Joe....took...my...truck" He said between sobs.
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I rub his back holding him close "Aw...it's Ok. We'll go get it back, ok?" I tell him making my way towards the devils room. Yep he is truly a devil at only age 6.
I get to the closed door and open it up to see the mess that is the room belonging to Joe and Jack, two troublesome twins who are my brothers.
"Joe, give Tom his truck back." I sigh as I see them both sat on the floor playing with Tom's red fire engine truck.
Joe looks up innocently and smiles "Why?"
I sigh getting annoyed "Because you made Tom upset." I say and Tom sniffs.
"But he let us use it" Jack his double wines
"N-no.....No...I not" Tom sobs
"Shhh" I sooth him and look at the two sat on the floor.
"Look...give Tom his truck back and I'll...and I'll...give you extra pancakes tomorrow." I bribe and their faces light up.
"Deal!" They both say together and Joe stands up handing the truck back to me.
I smile at him taking it and holding it to Tom, "Here Tom...go play." I say placing him back on the floor he grins grabs the truck and runs of, gosh what a little pickle.
"KIDS....Come down here please!" Mom shouts from downstairs "NOW!"
I groan and head towards the stairs hearing many other footsteps heading in the same direction, my brothers.
I trudge down the stairs to the living room followed by my brothers to see my mom sat on her chair waiting for all us to come in.
My older brothers charged past me filling up some of the couches and the younger ones filling up the other ones and I find myself blinking a little in surprised at how suddenly all eleven of them are crowding in this room.
Oh yes. Eleven. Eleven crazy brothers that currently live in this house with me. Overall there's actually twelve of them. Twelve. Charles, Aston, Blake, Chris, Evan, Seth, Leon, Lee, Cory, Joe, Jack and finally Tom.
I glare at them "Well thanks for leaving me some room." I say sarcastically "You're so lovely."
"Naww...well, you snooze you lose." Evan, my sixteen year old brother who is a total douche, but I still love him. He smirks and I roll my eyes at him.
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"Aw, no. Come sit here Lex." Chris, only seventeen and is practically an older version of Evan, with having his player ways with girls. He smiles brightly patting his legs.
I roll my eyes again but go over to him anyway and sit down onto Chris's lap, with a little more excess force than needed.
"Oooh..gosh! I think you should cut down on the cake." Chris groans mockingly and I smirk leaning back on him, giving him a face full of my blonde hair and he splutters it out.
"Ew...hair..." Chris wiggles behind my head and I smirk shaking my head in his face again.
Suddenly two arms grab me from the side pulling me off Chris's lap onto another one and the arms wrap around my waist pulling me back into them.
"My lexi" Blake, my eighteen year old brother who I feel takes on his big brother role very seriously. He speaks from behind me pulling me tight against him.
I cough out a laugh "I'm not a possession."
"Yeah but you are my favourite sister." Blake says from behind me.
I snort "Blake...I'm your ONLY sister"
Before he can say anything mom cuts us off "Alright, quiet!" She says, not looking angry but frustrated that we haven't quietened down.
We all stop talking and face mom waiting for her to say something as to why she got us all down here.
"Okay....well....um...." Mom says not meeting any of our eyes and I get a sinking feeling in my stomach.
"Mom spit it out" Ashton, the oldest brother who is living in this house and is pretty shy.
"I'vegotanewjobandweremoving" Mom blabbers to quickly none of us catch it
"Huh?"
She takes a deep breath "I've got offered a new job....and we're moving" She says more clearly and slowly.
My eyes widen and I'm pretty sure the others have too....Moving?! What?!
"Where?" Evan blurts out.
"South Carolina." Mom says waiting for our reactions. Our eyes wide and mouths hanging open.
Moving!? To South Carolina?! We live in Washington. We'll be moving basically across the whole country! Is she crazy?!
"What?!" Me and the others that are old enough to understand yell.
Mom flinches slightly at the loud nose she was expecting "I know it's a long way from here, but it's a great opportunity for me...for you guys." She explains "I'll earn more, we'll live in a bigger, better house...you'll get good education..." She says but get cuts off from Ashton.
"What's the job?" He asks calmly.
Mom's face lights up "A manger of the firm set in South Carolina" She smiles "It earns a hell of a lot more money....and they've even set us up a big enough house for double the size of our family to fit in.." She smiles wider at it and I feel my face fall slightly.
Mom deserves this job. It's better than what she has, we can't stand in the way of it. It's her dream to become a manager.
"When we leaving?" Blake asks behind me
Mom's face falls now and gulps "Tomorrow." She whispers but we all hear and explode again
"WHAT?!" We shriek
Mom takes a deep breath "I know, I'm sorry. But I only got news of it the other day and had to make a decision then and there." She tries to explain while I'm fuming
Moving is bad enough....but TODAY!?
I don't really have friends here, my brothers scare them away, but that doesn't mean I still want to leave.
Washington's my home. I've grown up here. Lived here all my life.
Dad's buried here.
That got a lump to rise in my throat. No we can't leave. We can't leave dad.
I stood up from Blake's lap watching mom.
"I'm sorry it's short notice, but this is really a big opportunity...I've got to take it." She says watching us all.
I frown "No" is all I say before I run out the living room up the stairs to my room slamming the door shut behind me sinking to the floor.
I know mom needs this job, she wants this job. But I'm not leaving dad. Where would I go if I wanted to see him? Nowhere...that's where.
I'm not leaving him!
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Edited 4/8/14 (breifly)
Edited 02/02/15
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