《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》the realisation
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After 1 and half hour...Neil reached home. he was all exhausted.shweta had opened thew door.
Shweta hugged h tightly..Neil hugged her back.
Shweta: hey Tillu...how was Ur trip..?
Neil: good mom..I'm so tired.i will talk to u tomorrow
Shweta: thek a beta... take rest
Neil went to his room and sleeps.
Shweta thinks something is wrong.
Prakash: Shweta ji..kya soch Rahi ho??
Shweta:Kuch nahi ji..Tillu bahut pareshan lag Raha he!!
Prakash:Shweta ji...vo journey Kiya na thoda tired ho sakta he...
Shweta: hmm...meh mrng bath Karti Hu uskey sath...
Prakash:hmm.
After 8hrs of Neil's reach...trio also reached home
Mrng
Neela opened the door.
Riya hugged her mom excited.but avni went directly into her room.
Neela: what happened to her??
Riya: she is exhausted maaa.
Neel: ok tum bhi jao aur rest karlo.
Riya: hmmm..
She also goes to her room and takes rest.
Khanna's mansion.
Shweta goes to Neil's room.
She knocks the door but will not answer.she pushes the door..it will get open.
Shweta: Tillu..
Neil: ha maa..boloo
Shweta: kya huva..
He sleeps on her laps.
Neil: Kuch nahi huva...baas toda tired huu..
Shweta/: mere Anke meh dekhar bolo kya huva...
Neil looks into her eyes..tries to say but tears roll down in his eyes.
This is the 1st time Shweta seeing him like this..
Shweta: tillu...Rona math...kya huva..bolooo...
Neil explains everything to her mom with pain.tears roll in Shweta's eyes by seeing his pain.
Shweta consoles him
Shweta: till tum fikhar math Karna..Avni ko tumhara pyar jararu samajthi he...
Neil hums and sleeps on her lap..she caresses his hair.
After sometime she slowly keeps his head on pillow and prepare some breakfast for him.
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When she returns back Neil gets fresh and come.
She feeds him with her hands.
Neil: ok maa.meh police station jatha Hu..
Shweta: but u need to take rest..
Neil: no ma...if I'm busy in work..I will not remember her okay..
Shweta: ok Tillu take care..and she kisses on her forehead.
Neil hugs her and goes to Police station.
At evening.
Neela goes to Avni's room
She knocks the door.
Avni: come in...
Neela opens the door and sees Avni drawing something.
Neela: Avni beta
Avni: ha maa boloo..
Neela: u didn't sleep
Avni: no ma..I didn't get sleep.
Neela: kyu..kya huva??
Avni : ntg ma ..all good.
Neela rises Avni's chin..and looks it her eyes.
Neela: something is wrong kya huva??
Avni hugs her mom and explains about Neil proposal
Neela(excitedly): Neil tujhe propose Kiya..tum okay Bola naa
Avni: no..maa
Neela: what.?? Kyu beta??
Avni: maa..I thought him as my best friend...maa...I couldn't believe that he proposed me.
Neela: don't u like Neil??
Avni: I like him mom...but I didn't see him in that way.but from the beginning he had feelings and he acted as a friend.
Neela: Avni...he has been like a best friend..he didn't act...
Avni: but ma...he has feelings on me..how can he be my friend??
Neela: did u ever felt that he had a feelings on u..or did he misbehave with um
Avni: no ma I didn't felt..he never behaved like that.
Neela: then?? What's problem beta.?? He want u to his life partner..
Avni:but ma...
Neela: Avni..he loved u...u seen him as best friend...in this what's his mistake...he didn't want to loose his friendship so I didn't tell u before
Avni: y ma u and Ali supporting him
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Neela: Avni beta..listen properly
..we are not supporting..we are just saying to think in his way.. understand his situation.but one thing we can't bring u the better man than him
Ashish: Ur mom is 200% right
Avni hugs him...
Avni:When did u come papa??
Ashish: from the beginning of Ur story I'm am here.
Avni: but papa..u r also saying mom is right
Ashish: Avni beta listen to me properly...we will not force u to love him or like him accept him..it's totally up to u...it's Ur life Ur decision...but we will guide u to take that right position Neil is very good guy and we can see how much he loves u in his eyes...so don't misunderstand him and take wrong decision..don't miss him..
Neela: ha just once think... decision is urz...
Avni nodes and hugs her parents.
Neela: take Ur time.
Ashish and neela goes out.
Avni thinks about it..she thinks what her parents said and also waitress...she recollects all the words Neil said to her...his silly game.m.she remembers everything tears roll down on her eyes..
""Sorry Neil..I'm such a dumb...I just thought in only 1 way that u r my best friend..but I not even tried to understand Ur feelings..""
she also remembers his words when she went to his home.she recollects all the memories since the day they met.a small smiles lands on her lips..
Ma said correct..I can never find a better person than u.....love u Neil...Im really sorry..
I need to tell this to mom n dad.
She happily runs into their room
Ashish: Avni..!!
Avni hugs him happily..
Avni: u r right ma n papa..he is the best...I'm gonna tell me.
Neela: u took good decision beta.go call him.
Avni(excitedly): no not in call..I'm gonna say him directly in his birthday... surprise
Ashish and neela smiles at her.
Dayavanthi: kya bolthi ho..kis ko bolthi ho...kiska birthday???
Avni: dadhi..vo...she blushes
Ashish explains everything to dayavanthi.
Daya hugs Avni.
Daya: meh aur harleen bhi vahi socha tha..bahut acha decision beta..
And kisses her on forehead.avni feels very happy and excited.
Riya listens everything and hugs Avni .
Riya: I'm so happy dhi..i wil help u in surprise party.
Avni: hmm...first I will inform it to Ali..he will feel very happy.
Avni callz to Ali..
Avni says her decision.
Ali: I'm happy Avni...Neil is very lucky..I'm in for Ur surprise.
Avni: no...I'm the luckiest..
Ali: hmm
Avni: okay yar..I'm very happy..I'm getting sleep..now I can sleep properly.
Avni goes to her room.
Where as Neil comes to home.
Neil: Avni why r u dng this to me..once I will try to apologize her..hmmm...
He msgs Avni I'm sorry Avni 😑
Avni reads this msg..I'm sorry Neil..why r so good to me..but no I won't reply him now..I'm gonna give him surprise.
Neil waits for her reply..but as she didn't reply after reading..he throws his phone on bed and sleeps.
Hey guys... finally done with other chapter...I hope u all enjoyed it...thanks for u support.
Thank you
Take care
Lots of love
Vidhya
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