《avniel one shots》ek dil ek jaan
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There r some changes
1.avni is a wedding planner.she won't run a orphanage.
2.its only 5 yrs after tht incident n Mowgli is just 4 yrs old n sunheri takes care of him.
3.mishti as sayesha studies in a boarding skl.so she won't be seen.
4.no kk drama, Neil is not any body double or bodyguard he is just an rj.he dnt come out of his room much.he mostly wants to be in their room.whole room is filled with avni's n their photos.on one wall there is a very big photo of avni.he will sit in front of tht spending most of his tym(I included dis bcz after 10 yrs leap in d shw I didn't even find a single pic of avni on walls in whole Khanna mansion.)
5.mithali lvs Neil n hates avni nw as Neil still lvs her.she wants to confess her feelings but couldn't bcz nw a day's Neil avoids her.
6.neil knows tht mithali has feelings fr him so he avoids her!!!
Here we go....
It was a fyn day.."mumma Mera bag Kahan Hai???"it was Mowgli who is getting ready fr skl...
Sunheri:beta Mummy call me busy hai.ye lo Tera bag.
M:ok di bye bye...
S:bye....with that Mowgli leaves n sunheri goes to avni who is on call.
A:ok I ll be there in d evening dnt worry sir.ur wedding day will be a most memorable day in ur life.i promise.she cuts d call.
A: sunheri aj Mowgli ko pick up karne me jaaungi.client ane Wala Hai.wedding discuss karni Hai.
S:kiska???
A:ram chandran,rj!!!
Sunheri sees her silently fr few mins!!all d 5 yrs came in front of her.hw week avni was wen they met n avni said everything abt her life n now hw she made herself busy so tht she can frget her past life.
A:ok Chalo breakfast karte Hain...
Khanna mansion
Neil was on his bed looking at d wall infront of him which has avni's big photo.
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N:ek aur raat subah ban gayi hai.ab ye din bhi guzar jayegi jaise ye 5 saal guzar gayi thi...kyun gayi thi tum avni???kyun????vada Kiya Tha na ki tum hamesha mere sath rahogi..?tho phir??chod ke gayi kyun?mujhe kyun nahi leke gayi thi tum avni..?
Swetha:Neil!!!!!
N: (wiping his tears)han mom??
S:utho beta tumhe kahi Jana Hai aj bhool gayi???
N:nahi mom mujhe yaad Hai lekin me nahi ja sakti iam sry.
S:Arey wo tera dost Hai!!
N:ne use samja doongi don't worry lekin me yaha se kahin nahi jaoungi...
Swetha was literally annoyed nw actually worried seeing her son's condition..
S(serious n angrily)kab Tak tum aise Zindagi jeeogi?kab Tak isi kamre me khud ko band karogi??bhool Jai use,aur jeelo apni Zindagi
N(with a sarcastic smile):me ye Zindagi jeena nahi jeena chahta me bhi Meri avni ke pass Jana chahta hoon use phirse see meri bahon me dekhna chahta hoon mom asie tasveer nahi.use mere paas rakhna chahta hoon,use gale lagana chahta hoon,uski pyaar me pagal banna chahta hoon par pata nahi kyun jaa nahi pa raha Hoon.shayad avni nahi chahti ki mein uske paas aao.avni ko bhoolna se behtar ye Hai ki me apni sans Lena bhool....he couldn't continue as swetha kept her hand on his mouth..
S:tillu tumhare Zindagi mein sirf avni hi nahi hum bhi Hai!!!
N:ha ma Meri Zindagi me aap sab hi Hai lekin avni......avni khud hi Meri Zindagi hai mom.swetha left d place without speaking anything.this convo was witnessed by every member of khanna family n also mithali..
He gets a call
N:bolo.
P:Kahan ho yr??aj tum aogi na.
N:nahi ram aj me nahi a sakti pls..n it's final pls mujhe request mat karna...
S that person is ram whz wedding planner is avni.
R:ok aj chod raha Hoon lekin shadi ko ajao use skip mat karna
N:Chalo baba ok...
Avni took up d opportunity n she is d wedding planner of Neil's frnd Raj's wedding.
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Days passed but no change in Neil n avni kept herself busy so that she dnt remember Neil but he always resided in her heart n every sec she remembs him.
The day of marriage Neil's sees avni n Mowgli n gets to know tht Mowgli is his son.(same as show Neil strtd hating her)in anger he proposed mithali then n there n nxt minute he filed Mowgli case.avni hated Neil's desicion of marrying mithali
Avni pov
Neil u wanna marry mithali..he could u neil.i know u r angry on me n only u proposed her to take revange.but Neil even though I was away from u I loved u n I love u nw also pls Neil u r always mine pls dnt marry her pls....n Mowgli is our son neil.my son hw could u take him away from me.she was crying literally.
Mithali was double happy bcz Neil wants to marry her even after knowing that avni is alive n seeing avni cry gave her peace(sadist).case was in court n Neil won Mowgli custody.he felt bad fr avni but didn't show.mowgli was sad n didn't want to stay with Neil n khannas but couldn't do anything.mithali asked avni to be their wedding planner.avni was hell irritated n hated Neil fr taking Mowgli away from her(nt actually hate but angry)but accepted her proposal so that she could stay clz to mowgli.neil couldn't do wat he is doing in avni's presence n remembering there all moments..here avni was acting as if nothing is hurting her but in reality she is dying every second seeing Neil clz to other girl...Neil n mithali were on mandap.swetha was tying there ghatbandan just then police arrived along with DD.
DD:Neil sir ye vidyut ki saaman Hai Court me clearance hogaya Hai tho yaha laye Hai.
N:ok do yahan.while dd is giving to Neil box gets slipped n falls down.avni photo falls down n breaks (showing hw she is breaking inside seeing her husband Getting married to other lady.)n a chip comes out.neil takes d chip n sees it questioningly.avni realizes it as d chip in which d secret was there n runs to him n drags d chip
N:Kya hua???
A:kuch nahi bus Shadi ka muhurat nikal raha Hai aap mandap me betho mithali wait Kar rahi hai.neil gets a doubt seeing her tensed face.
N:no problem wo chip dedo.
A:nahi ye vidyut ka hai...a..au..aur ...du...du....dusro ka saaman c...check..nah...nahi karni... chahiye a...aa..aap jayiye.he comes clz to her n snatches d chip from her hand as he is sure nw that avni is hiding something which is related to tht chip.he took it n went to his room but avni couldn't stop him..after few mins he came back with red n swollen eyes n messy hair,his hand is bleeding badly blood dripping his hand.avni saw dis n rushed to him n strtd doing frst aid but Neil was looking at her with a ocean of love in his eyes
N:kyun???drops falling dwn his tears continuously.
S: Neil Kya hua Hai Kya us chip mein??
Avni signalled him not to say anything pleasingly.
N:kuch nahi mom bus us rakhas ki kuch crimes..a
S:acha Chalo shadi ka muhurat nikal raha Hai ajao.avni n Neel looked at each other with pain in eyes.neel couldn't take it anymore..
N:shadi??meri shadi tho hogayi thi na mom,is ladki see!!
S:tillu.
N:Han mom me samaj chuki Hoon ki me avni ke alava kis aur seepyaar nahi Kar sakti.mithali iam sry pls mujhe maaf kardo.pls avni wapas ajao Meri Zindagi me.me apni promise poori karne keliye tayar Hoon.tumhe perfect family Dena chahti Hoon mein.
Tum hi Mera jaan ho.
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