《Avniel》Part 18
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Morning
N : hi Aunty
Nm : hi Niel waist kal ki baat rhegai na
Niel started blushing like a girl
A : hi Niel good morning mom
Nm : good morning beta Niel adhuri baat puri karlo
A : kaunsi baat
N : ahh .....avni .....wo .....tum Kahan jaa rahi ho
A : haan mogali se Milne
N : main bhi chaloon
A : Thike pair wahi se college
N : okay ( happy )
A : okay bye mom chalo
Nm : bye Niel and Avni take care hmmm
Car
N : Avni tum ab thik ho na
A : han kyun
N : nahi matlab tum aaj rest kar sakti ho main pura college ki class attend karunga aur notes bhi photocopy Karke de dunga ( really in a caring way )
Note : Niel usually don't attend all class because of his match or something and something important that is why he is saying this
A : no Niel I am okay and fine uhh I was thinking that we should go first college and then to sukoon Ghar
N : good idea so college is only two - three minutes away we will soon reach
A : hmmmm
At college
Ali : guys avni will be ok na
Rhea : oh ho duffer she will be awesome ok and by the way yesterday Niel stayed with us ok don't worry why didn't u came with them (tensed)
Rhea : ali you only came that we should go (angry)
Ali : ok baba sorry I forget my mistake hmm
Rhea : hmmm
Ali : see they came ( pointing towards right )
Rhea : where (seeing towards right )
Ali : here ( pointing towards left )
Rhea : whereeeeeeeeee( seeing towards left )
Ali : beauty without brain ( pointing towards her )
Rhea : aliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Amol: di what happened ( putting hands on ears)
R : he said me beauty without brain
Am : so what you are
R : what
Am : no ..no .. uhh .... I mean ...... I am going
Rhea also goes and Ali behind her
Avni and Niel reach college
A : chale
N : haan chalo
A : Niel I
N : yes Avni speak ( hoping to hear the two words more)
A : ( very sturnely )
N : huhhhh ( surprised )
Precap : n : yaar ye mujhse nahi hoga
A : hoga na hoga pakka
R : yes Niel go
Ali : Niel go yaar
Hi guys sorry for late and short update but I will give you a long when I will be free
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