《Naamkaran ✔️》Avni's identity is out
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Note..
Many of them were asking me is there is some changes or it will be same like NK.. So.. there a major changes in the storyline.. In my story there will no Saisha KK marriage, Child trafficking, Neil's and Mitali sitting for marriage, Avni in danger, Sukoon Ghar in danger.. this all the scene are not there..
There will be something new.. but yes as I said there are some scene and some dialogue which are amazing that I am not gonna cut..
From today's part major changes will be seen...
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tum thik ho na..
They nodded yess..
or tu thik kaha.. kesi bach ke aaye tum log..
Vo mai isse ghar drop karne aa raha tha.. lekin bich mai gaadi kharab ho gayi.. to hamne dekha vaha ek cottage jesa hai.. hum vaha gaye to kuch goons ne attack kar diya...
All shocked..
kyaa.. saisha tum thik hona.. or tum vaha se aaye kese..
because of her..
All frown..
Yess.. She fought so bravely.. saisha ne hi sabse fight ki..
whatt.. tumne.. fight.. I mean tumhe aata hai..
Yess.. Jaandidi ne sikhaya tha..
yeh Jaandidi kon hai..
ye log jaha rehte hai.. vo sab manage Jaandidi karti hai.. kon vo to nahi pata..
Sunheri scared..
ab.. AA.. KK tumne kya kiya toh..
Apni skin ko bacha raha tha 😏
Kyaa.. kya matalb..
Saisha narrated everything.. all palm their face 🤦
heyy vo sab chodo.. where is Neil..
Vo to Kashid mai hi hai.. kal aayega..
ohh .. lekin mai usse call karke bol to du ki hum safe.. varna vo muje dudhta hi rahega..
Ek min.. Neil tumhe dundhga.. kese..
vo vaha thoda network aaya tha to maine Neil ko msg kiya tha..
Kahi Neil Avni ko dekh na le.. hey bhagwan sab sahi karna..
They all stay at Khanna house..
O
or kitna time lagega.. Khanna house mai.. abhi tak unka call bhi nahi aaya.. pata nahi KK kesa hoga..
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Mam.. 2 baj rahe hai.. hame morning ke 10 to baj hi jaayege..
(Kamini has gone somewhere for some work far from Mumbai)
thoda jaldi karo (angry tone)
Neil who has gone angrily out of the room has slept on couch outside the room... And Avni she also slept crying..
Later Neil gets up and saw calls from home..
He called again and bebe picks the phone..
Hello kon..
Bebe.. mai Neil.. kal mai thoda busy tha or so phone kab aaya pata nahi chala..
Koi nahi Tillu.. vo itni raat ko isislye phone kiya tha.. kyu ki KK or Saisha yaha hai.. dono safely poch gaye hai..
kyaa.. ok koi ni.. mai aaj vapas aa raha hu.. tab baat karte hai..
Thik hai Tillu.. khyal rakhna..
Neil goes to the room .. and see Avni has already wake up..
Neill.. vo hame Saisha or KK ko dudhna hai.. to tum aa rahe.. (scared)
uski koi jarurat nahi hai.. KK or Saisha dono safe hai.. Khanna house mai hai.. bebe ka phone tha.. abh tum bolo.. kya karna hai..
matalb
Matalb.. ki yeh.. bebe or sabse milna hai ki abhi tumhe hum sabke emotions ke sath khelna hai.. Nahi tum toh usme master ho na..
Neil..
He holds her tightly and in angry tone.. Kya Neil ha.. kya.. Tum jaanti bhi ho tumare jaane ke baad sabka kya haal huva hai.. Mom.. hamesa apne aap ko kosti hai ki unhone tumare saath jo kiya uske vagah se tum unhe chod kar chali gayi.. bolo Avni iss baat ka badla le rahi ho.. Tumhe pata hai.. mai roj guilt mai rehta ki mai tumhe protect nahi kar saka.. tum vaha muje bula thi rahi.. NEIL MUJE BACHAVO.. MUJE BAHUT DAR LAG RAGA HAI.. or mai kuch nahi kar saka.. Neela maa ka promise nahi nibha paaya ki mai hamesa tumhe safe rakhuga.. Pata hai..yeh aawaj.. hamesa gunjti rehti mere kaano mai.. lekin tumhe isse kya.. tumhe kya farak padta.. hum log mare ya jiye.. tum to apni hi karogi..
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Avni was having tears..
Neil leaves her..
Samarth or vo sab Mumbai haina.. to Mumbai hi chalugi..
Again hold her.. Tumhe abhi bhi unn logo ki vagah se Mumbai jaana.. humare.. nahi nahi.. meri family ki tumhe koi padi nahi hai.. haa lekin tum to hamesa apna hi soch ti ho.. He leaves her.. Fine.. jo karna hai kro.. chalo abh..
The drive was silent..
Background song was playing..
Roothe roothe se savere
Jaage jaage hain andhere
Roothe roothe se savere
Jaage jaage hain andhere
Leharon ko kinare
Mil jayenge saare
Paas hain jo lagta hai door
Ke maana dil da hi mera hai kasoor
Aise koyi vi na hove majboor
Maana dil da hi mera hai kasoor
Aise koyi vi na hove majboor
Hmmm...
Khoya hai jo woh mil jayega
Toota hai jo woh jud jayega
Khoya hai jo woh mil jayega
Toota hai jo woh jud jayega
Tera mera yeh safar
Jaane le aaya kidhar
Khaab dekhe the jo
Ho gaye hain choor
Ke maana dil da hi mera hai kasoor
Aise koyi vi na hove majboor
Maana dil da hi mera hai kasoor
Aise koyi vi na hove majboor
Avni and Neil reached Khanna house.. it was morning 9:00 am
Neil know the door and Avni was standing behind her.. so front view only Neil can be seen..
Swetha opens the door and as usual started speaking.. 😂
Tillu kaha tha tu.. pata kya kya huva yaha.. vo saisha haina vo bahut brave hai.. lekin ha abh to muje bhi milna hai uski Jaandidi se..
Avni was having tears..
Oo madam madona.. uss ghar ke andar to aane de.. all came their.. except Neav and Neha..
Mom aapko unki Jaandidi se milna hain.. to mil lijye.. vo Jaandidi koi or nahi Avni hai.. 🥺
All were shocked.. avni came out from behind and having tears in her eyes..
Avni.. lekin tu.. vo sab kya tha..
Vo.. vo sab iska plan tha..hum sabko dokha diya hai isne.. hum sabko dokhe mai rakhkar.. nayi Zindagi naya naam.. sab kuch.. or aaj bhi yeh yaha aapse milne nahi.. apne Sukoon ghar ke bacho ko milne aayi hai.. (angry voice)
Avni was crying..
Bebe.. Avni.. humari Avni zinda hai..(with tears in eyes)
All were having tears.. except Saisha and Samarth..
Jaandidi.. yeh sab kya hai.. super man kya bol rahe hai.. Nayi Zindagi, naya naam.. sorry Jaandidi lekin aap humse humari phechan ki baat karte ho.. aapki apni phechan kya.. kon ho aap..
Haan.. batavo..
Avni look all around.. she took a deep breathe..
Haan.. Jaandidi..yeh naam muje tum logo ne diya hai.. Lekin meri asli phechan Avni Ayesha hai.. Avni.. Famous director Aashish Mehta or famous actresses Ayesha Haider ki beti.. Neela Parekh ki adopted daughter.. Vo Avni jiska kabhi naamkaran nahi huva.. jise yeh society ye samaaj illegitimate kheta hai.. Haan mai Neil Khaana ki wife.. Avni Neil Khanna hu.. Haan mai hi vo badnaseeb Avni hu jisse apne Neil se, apni perfect family se dur jaana pada.. lekin mere paas or koi raasta nahi tha.. or isliye maine humesa tumhe ladna or khud ke kaam se apni phechan bana ne ki sikh di hai.. kyu mai koi or Avni Ayesha nahi banne dena chahiti thi.. 😭 Bas yahi mera past hai..
All were having tears..
Sorry Jaandidi.. hume aapse iss tarah baat nahi karni chaiye thi.. really sorry... (tears in eyes)
To tum log naraj nahi ho mujse..
Naraj the.. lekin abh nahi.. Jaandidi mai humesa KK ya koi na koi celebrity ko apna role model maanti thi.. lekin nahi humare asli roke model to aap ho Jaandidi...
Haan.. Jaandidi..
All three hugs each other...
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