《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 9|Honeymoon is on!!!!
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So guys I am back with another update.
I hope you like it.
Plz comment below if you liked it.
*just one information : ali will reach one day after avneil due to some issue.*
So here we go
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Neil and Avni were in the car , kamirpur is about 5hr away from there home.
Avni:"Neil hum kahan ja rahe hai"
Neil:"woh hum kamirpur ja rahe hai"
Avni:"okay"
Neil:"Avni tumhe koyi problem nahi hai"
Avni:"nahi Neil mujhe place se mutlab nahi hai , tum ho nah bus sab accha hai"
Neil:(to himself)"Avni tum itni acchi ho , suabah mein tumhare saath he bitaonga raat mein bus meeting kar ke wopas tumhare pas pakka..."
Avni:"Neil I am sorry"
Neil:"sorry? kyun"
Avni:"woh tumhe kaam tha and you came here for me, woh mummy ji ne force kiya ki tumhe manao and I couldn't tell her no sorry"
Neil:(stopped the car in a corner )"Avni don't say sorry, maine bhi tumhe nahi pucha or honeymoon ke liya mana kar diya I am sorry "(he said holding her hands)
Avni:"tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho?"
Neil:(to himself)"avni I am sorry "
Avni:"Neil!!! kahan koh gaye"
Neil:"kuch nahi chalo "
Avni:"Neil when you leave my hand than only you will drive the car"(and started laughing)
Neil:(pulling her close)"why should I leave, you are my wify"(starts going close to kiss her just than she pushes away )
Avni:"Mr.Neil Khanna ye aap ka bedroom nahi hai ye ek car hai jo abhi public place me parked hai and if we have to reach before sunset then we have to go now"
Neil:"Mrs.Avni Neil Khanna public ho yah bedroom I have all right to romance you"(with a wink)
Avni:"Neil chalo car drive karo"
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Neil:"haan "
1 hr later.
Neil was driving while Avni was getting bored.
Avni:"Neil woh main..."
Neil:"tum bore ho rahi ho"
Avni:(shocked)"how do you know?"
Neil:"meri wify ko problem ho or mujhe nahi pata "
Avni:"haan haan ,toh mein bore ho rahi hoon "
Neil:"main radio chalata hoon"(Avni nodded)
Radio:"naamaste bhano or bhaio, if you are with your love partner on a ride than this song is the best song for you. enjoy !
Neil:"accha hain song na"
Avni:" haan"
At destination. Hotel.
Receptionist:" Hello sir how may I help you?"
Neil:"there should be a room booked for Mr.and Mrs.Neil Khanna?"
Receptionist:"yes sir , can you plz fill the form"
Neil:"yes.(goes to avni) lo tum fill kardo ab tumhi to mujhe yahan le ke aayi ho"
Avni:"tum hi karo warna lagega ki tum joru ke gulam ho"
Neil:"tumhare liye toh woh be ban sakta hoon"
Avni:"waah neil Khanna joru ka gulam(they both laugh)chalo form baro"
Neil fills the from up and they go to there room.
Avni:"omg ,Neil it is too much decorated right"
Neil:"haan kuch jyaada hi hai"
They make the room a little better , Neil found a heart shaped pillow(just as in the pic above)
Neil:(giving the pillow to avni)"yeh lo avni my heart for my wify"
Avni:(taking the heart )"thanks neil, ab chalo change karlo"
They both change there clothes when Neil gets a call from dd.
Neil:(on call)"haan dd "
dd:"sir main neeche hoon "
Neil:"ok"(cuts the call)
Neil:"Avni me aata hoon"
Avni:"ok "
Neil went down stairs, Avni was in her room on her phone when she sees something from the window.
Avni:(to herself)"Neil ke bacche ab tum dekho"
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Neil met dd outside the hotel
dd:"sir "(saluting him)
Neil:"haan , toh kuch information mili"
dd:"haan sir aaj raat meeting main discuss karenge"
Neil:"haan"(neil left , dd saw avni standing folding her arms)
Neil was on phone when he cuts the call he sees avni
Avni:"neil tumhe koyi right nahi hai mere emotion ke saath khelane ka (he starts to say some but avni shows her hand saying) koyi jaruraat nahi hai"
Neil:"Avni woh sorry (avni started leaving)Avni !!, Avni yaar mari baat toh suno"(Neil heard a splash and than..)
Avni:(yelling from pool)"NEIL!!!!"
Neil run to the pool yelling avni avni, he saw there was a dupata in the pool and that dupata is avni's.
Neil:(jumps in the pool to find Avni)"Avni kahan ho tum , I am sorry yaar"(than he hears laughing and turns around)
He sees dd and avni laughing and showing thumbs up to each other.
Flashback...
Neil:"haan"(Neil left , dd saw Avni standing folding her arms)
dd:"bhabhi woh actually Neil sir ne kahan tha,plz bhabhi aap jo bologi main karonga"
Avni:"kuch bhi?"
dd:"haan bhabhi"
Avni told dd the plan and they high fied(*well you guys know the plan ,acting to make neil jump in pool)
Flashback ends...
Neil:(in anger)"Avni ab tum decko"(getting out of the pool)
Avni and dd started heading back.dd ran away leaving Avni with Neil.
Avni:(going back while Neil followes her with a suspicious smile)"Neil plz nahi Neil , I am sorry woh"
Neil:(took the dupata and wrapped it around Avni's waist and pulles her close)"ab dekho"
Avni:"Neil I am getting wet leave me(Neil flicks his head so all water in his hair goes on Avni)Neil I am getting wet plz"
Neil:"puri gili ho gao"(Neil made them both fall in pool, than they had a eyelock in pool )
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So guys I hope you liked it
Plz comment if you liked it.
I will update soon.
Precap: "neil care for avni, ali plan to separate avneil"
keep reading to know more.
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