《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 11|Is Neil Jealous?
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So guys I am here with my next update.
Sorry I was sick that's why couldn't post , I am feeling a little better so I thought to write an update.
Thanks for all comment
Here we go..
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Avni was not sleepy that's why Neil and Avni talked till 4 in the morning and than they both fell asleep.
Next Morning ....
Neil:(woke up early. He turns to his right to see Avni sleeping peacefully. Looking at Avni , he spoke..)"Avni yaar tum kitni khoobasurat ho , sote same tum bhaut cute lagti hu"
Suddenly Neil saw Avni getting up and he closes his eyes. Avni tried to get up but Neil put its hand around her waist and acted like he is sleeping.
Avni:(stuck in one potion and doesn't want Neil to wake up)"ab kya kru?"
Then she runs her hands through his hair and tried to move his hand but instead he pulled her closer.
Avni:"Neil you are awake?"
Neil:"yes my wify"(opening his eyes with a naughty smirk )
Avni:"ok leave me I have to go get freshen up its already 9"
Neil:"no ,I won't let you go"(he says pulling her closer )
Avni:"Neil!! jaane do na ,leave me"
Neil:"chorden ke liya nahi pakarad tha , I have all rights. I am your hubby"(they have a quickly small eyelock)
Avni:(breaking the eyelock)"plz leave me na Neil!!"
Neil:"Ok only on one condition"
Avni:"kya?"
Neil:(turning his cheeks towards her and pointing a finger indicating for a kiss)"ek kiss"
Avni:(blushing)"Neil .....woh..."
Neil:"oh ho blushing ,so cute"
Avni:(tries to go but Neil pulls her)"Neil let me go"
Neil:"first kiss"
Avni:"Neil!!"
Neil:"kiss"(Avni finally gave him a kiss on his cheek and than run to restroom)
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Neil:"wah kya din hoga, subhe subhe biwi ki kiss ,aaj toh din hi ban gaya"
After their sweet moments in the morning, they got freshen up and headed down towards the car to go and explore the beautiful places of kamirpur. In the way they met Ali and invited him to join them as well.
Ali:(in his room, to himself)"ab main tum log ka honeymoon ruin karta hoon"(just than he gets a call)
Ali:(picking up the call)"hello,nanno!!"
Nanno:"Ali came back beta, you have a meeting about extending the cafe tomorrow right?"
Ali:"oh shit , yeah"(to himself)"ab main kya karo , Avneil ko yahan akele chod ke jana"
Nanno:"Ali puttar kahan gaya"
Ali:"haan nanno main aa raha hoon abhi nikalta hoon"(cuts the call)
Ali:(to himself)"ok main jata hoon and I will think about Avneil later , and don't worry I will separate you both"
Outside the hotel Avneil waiting for Ali.
Avni:"Ali kahan re gaya?"
Ali:(from back)"I am here"
Neil:"tu aa gaya , ok chal chalte hain"
Ali:"nahi"
Avneil:(comfused)"kyun"
Ali:"actully muhje cafe ke kaam se ghar jana hai tum log gao"
Neil:"per Ali suddenly why"
Ali:"Nanno ka phone aaya kal meeting hain morning me, so guys I have to go , anyways you guys are coming home soon right"
Avni:"theek hain tu ja"
Neil:(hugging Ali)"ok chal bye!"
Ali left and Avneil sat in the car...
Neil:(to Avni while starting the car)"kahan jana hai"
Avni:"beach chale..?"
Neil:"great , I have heard of a good beach over here lets go there..."
Avni:"okay"(Soon they started towards the beach. Avni was going to turn the radio on but was disturbed by Neil)
Neil:"kya kar rahi ho"
Avni:"stove on kar rahi hoon"(sarcastically )
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Neil:"kya!!!"
Avni(laughing):"NEIL!! of course radio chala rahi hoon kuch gaana sona hai"
Neil:"normal bhi toh bol sakti thi,achha leave "
Avni puts the radio on and Avneil get lost in each other listening to the song.
Neil:"Avni we reached"
Avni:"really ,nice."
Neil and Avni park their car and headed to the beach area.
Neil:(accidentally bumping into someone)"sorry sorry"
Someone:"its okay , its okay no problem dude"
Avni:"tum....."
Someone:"avni , tum yahan...."
They hugged each other really tightly while Neil looked on confused and angered
Neil:(to himself looking at there closeness)"why am I feeling uncomfortable when they are close, and why am I not liking when Avni is so happy meeting him, am I JEALOUS!!!"
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I hope you liked the update.
Plz do vote and comment.
I will try to post everyday ,but I am not fully better so if i can't upload i am very sorry.
Precap: Avni is angry at Neil but for what.....?
Comment down below why do you think avni is angry at neil, and if you would want the honeymoon to end or for me to extend this track of Avneil honeymoon a little more.
Thank you!!!
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