《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 13| Avneil and Woh
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So guys I am here with my next part....
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After Avneil were done having fun on the beach, they went back to the hotel.
Avni:(entering the room )"aaj bahut maza aaya na"
Neil:"yes"
Avni:(asking like a kid)"where are we going tomorrow? "
Neil:"surprise, I will tell you tomorrow...."
Avni:"Neil batao na"
Neil:"no, know sleep"(Avni makes a sad but doesn't ask further)
Soon sleep takes over them. Next morning came. Avneil got ready to go out.
Avni:"Neil ab toh batao where are we going?"
Neil: "you will see"(and walks out of room)
Avni:"Neil yaar why ,why do you always do this"(she huffs like a kid)
In the car...
Avni:"Neil ab toh batado"
Neil:"tum wait karo na Avni "
Avni:(Folding her arms trying to show anger)"no I can't wait any longer"
Neil:"ok don't wait cause we are here"
Avni:(looked at the sign board)"theme park!! with big rides!!!"( she asked as the smile leaver her face)
Neil:"haan kya hua why does it look like you hate theme parks"
Avni:"no no..nothing like t...that i was just...just surprised an...and yeah "(she said stuttering while Neil looks at her weirdly but then ignores)
Neil:"ok than lets go"
Avneil entered the theme park after all the security check staff.
Neil:"so first we will take that big ride"(point at a 2 loop ride with big twists and turn)
Avni:"wo...wo...woh"
Neil:"haan"
Avni:"nahi I won't ride that , its too dangerous no way"
Neil:"Avni ek minute kya tum rides se darti ho?"
Avni:(trying to ignore question)"woh...Neil restroom , me abhi aayi"
Neil:"ok"(he says as Avni leaves for the Restroom)
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Neil was standing waiting for Avni when suddenly his phone rings. It was from Neela ma.
On Call...
Neil:"hello haan Neela ma"
Neela ma:"Hi Neil. How are you. I called to know if every thing is fine"
Neil:"haan every thing is fine , actually we just came to a theme park"
Neela:"theme park?(started laughing)
Neil:"kya hua aap hass kyun rahi ho?"
Neela:"matlab Avni ne tumhe nahi bataya"
Neil:"Avni? Wait you know something, Avni has been acting really weird since we arrived"
Neela:"haan I know she will act weird for sure because she is scared of big rides from child hood, I tried many times to take her fear away but it didn't work. Why don't you try once"
Neil:"haan ma, I see"(laughing, cuts the call)
Avni comes there.
Avni:"Neil why are you laughing"
Neil:(still laughing)"woh...woh Neela ma ka phone tha she said that you are scared of rides"
Avni:(feeling embarrassed and bad)"haan toh, tum mujhe pe huss rahe ho"
Neil:(laughing)"haan"
Avni:"Neil tum bahut bad ho.."(saying this she starts going from there)
Neil:(stoping her)"hey, hey Avni mari baat toh suno"
Avni:"kya hai"
Neil:"i am sorry"( he said with a cute face which melted Avni)
Avni:"its okay"(they hugged each other)
Neil:(breaking hug)"but I will not make you feel embarrassed in front of anyone from now due to your fear"
Avni:"what do you mean?"
Neil:"we will ride that ride than no one will tease you"
Avni:"ah...ah..me...ride....that...one...no...no way"
Neil:"come on avni you trust me right"( he said looking in her eyes)
Avni:"more then my self"( she said instantly)
Neil:(pulling Avni in the line for the ride)"than come"
Avni:"Neil this is Emotional Blackmailing. You cant do this to me. Plz Neil. Neilll"(she keep saying as he takes he towards the ride.)
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They both sat down on the roller costar. Avni was really scared. Neil was quite amused seeing hsi brave strong Avni this scared.
Avni:"Neil kya main tumhara haath hold kar sakti hoon"
Neil:(smiling at her)"of course"
As soon as the ride started her screams started. She held Neil's hand all throughout the ride and had a lot of fun forgetting her fear.
Neil:(getting out of ride)"was it fun? "
Avni:"yes,"
Neil:"did you feel scared"
Avni:"no because i held your hand"
Avneil had a eye lock while in the background the song starts to play....
Afterwards , they went to lots of rides and enjoyed themselves a lot.
Avni:"Neil main tak gayi hoon, lets go back to the hotel"
Neil:"haan, chalo"(while going back to car they met this little 5 year old angle who got lost )
Avni:(bumping in to that girl)"oh sorry sorry beta aap thik ho?"(seeing tears in her eyes she sits on her knees to talk to her)"kya hua aap ro kyun rahe ho?"
Neil:(coming on his knees)"stop crying beta plz."
Girl:"main kho gayi hoon"
Neil:"aap ka naam kya hai"
Girl:"Mishti"
Mishti:"or app kaun ho?"
Avni:"hum angels hain aur hum aapki help karenge"
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So guys I hope you enjoyed it.
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Will Update next part soon.
Precap: "what twist will Mishti bring in Avneil's life."
Read to find out.
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