《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 22|Plan
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Avni:"Neil I wanted to tell you but your , Amol and neela ma 's life was in danger so I couldn't...sorry"
Neil:"ssshhh..nothing will happened. I am here na ...."
Avni hug Neil tightly and Neil assured her that everthing will be okay. Avni felt so relaxed in his arms.
Neil:"Avni tumhe muhjpe bahrosa hai"
Avni:"khudse bhi jayda "
Neil:"than listen....."
Neil tells Avni something and afterwards they leave for home.
In car...
Neil:(seeing Avni lost in her thought)"oh muhje ice cream khana hai. let's go for desert Avni what say..."
Avni:"Neil mera maan nahi hai tumko khana hai toh chalo....."
They drove in front of a ice cream stall.....
Neil:(getting of the car.. )"tum aa rahi ho ki main jao"
Avni:"tum jao"
Neil went...While eating ice cream few girls come and started flirting with Neil and to make Avni jealous Neil didn't stop them....
girls:"hey handsome "
Neil:"hey beutifull aap log yahan . ..ice cream khane aaye hoge"
girls:"yessss"
Meanwhile back in the car..
Avni:(looking toward Neil and girls)"yeh Neil en ladkio ke saath kya kar raha hai...."
Neil:(seeing Av see him)"so what are ur names"
Avni:(lowering the window and shouting so Neil can here her) "Neil ice cream ho gayi toh ghar chale"
Neil:(ignoring her) "so girls what were you saying "
Avni:(pissed now)"yeh Neil ke bache ko tho main chodongi nahi..."
Avni gets of the car and goes to Neil...
Avni:(going and standing next to Neil)"hi girls.(towards Neil)chale yah yahi tumhe puri raat betani hai...."
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neil:(smiling) "woh actually i was talking to this girls"
Avni:"han haan ab chale"
one of the girls:(to Neil)"yeh kaun hai are you married..."
Neil:"no actually she is my friend......I am single and....ready to mingle..."(as soon as he said those workd he looked at Avni was fuming in anger. He bit his tongue realizing that he messed up big time)
Neil:(to himself) :beta aaj toh to gaya....kya bolne ki jarorat thi....ab avni mera cachumber bana degi ....."
Avni:"Neil i am going if you want to come then come...."(She said with a glare before heading back to the car)
Avni went and sat in the car. While
Neil made an excuse and left from there too.
The whole car ride was total silence.
at home...in avneil's room....
Neil:(entering the room seeing A fix the almari) "Avni let me help you"
Avni:"no need I can do it myself ...aap jayi flirt kijiye...."
Neil:" avni yaar meri baat toh suno ....muhje bolne ka ek muka toh do"
Avni:"kyun .... kyun explain kar rahe ho....tum toh single ready to mingle ho....so you have no need to explain especially to your FRIEND.."
Neil :"Avni yaar muzak bhi nahi jamajathi....tum lardkiya lardko jasi kyun nahi hoti..."(Avni ignored him. Just then A idea clicked him and he smirked )
He starts singing...
They both sang their parts respectively throughout the song.
Neil:"that's it"(he just kissed her on her lips to stop her from talking. Their kiss was very passionate and magical. They broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen while Avni was dumbstruck)
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Will update next part soon..
Precap:"how will Avni react to the kiss. What is Avneil's plan"
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