《Avneil - being with you》avni's punishment !
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so guys I am here with my next update......
plz do comment and vote......
thank you......
here we go....
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avni:"woh muhje ek gun shot sunayi diya so I followed it ...sorry (to herself) if I told you than you Will not involve me in this case and I have to get answers I don't know why my heart says that everything is some how related...meher, rang mahel, pandit, vidut, mishti, and dayavanti "
Neil:(breaking avni thought process )"avni kahan kho gayi"
avni:"kahin nahi, tum batao tumhe kuch mila"
neil:"nahi"
avni:"ok ,so ab kya"
just than they heard few men talking to each other about women coming to miti for morti this week
avni:(in mind)"yeh to wohi hai...jo meher ke saath rehta hai"
neil:"chalo ise pehele woh hume dekh le"
dd:"yes sir"
they all headed home.....neil was still worried about avni's safety where as avni was thinking about meher and her relation with rang mehel....
avneil bedroom......
avni:(mind)"i think mujhe kal rang mehel jaake meher ke bare main pata karna chahiye"
neil:(entering the room)"avni....tum itni tensed kyun ho"
avni:"woh actually main aaj jo hua uske bare main soch rahi thi"
neil:"avni everything will be okay .... but you promise me that you will never make you life in danger and you will always take care of youself"
avni:"neil dont worry ...nothing will happened to me...(trying to divert the topic)waise tumne mere liye punishment soch li"
neil:(pulling avni close)"haan...."
avni:"kya"
neil:"you have to kiss me tomorrow morning while we are having breakfast"
avni:"per neil wahan to sab honge"
neil:"well thats your punishment .....now let me sleep i cant wait for tomorrow ..."
avni:"neil......"
they slept and next morning at breakfast....
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everyone was having breakfast....avni was serving mishti...
sweata:"avni beta ab to bhi bet ja or breakfast kar ..."
neil:"haan haan avni sit and eat and do everything your supposeto do"
bebe:"mutlab"
neil:"are bebe mutlab,avni ko maa ne bola breakfast kar toh woh avni karegi ab agar main avni se kuch bolon toh avni ko woh bhi karna hoga right"
bebe:"neil tu bahut confuse kar raha hain"
neil:"jane do bebe jisko samjna sahiye woh samj gayi "
neil:(whispering to avni) "mera kiss "
avni:(whispering) "wait I am going to complete my mission just relax "
suddenly mishti started crying everyone went to mishti and were asking what happened.....on the other hand jab neil jane wala tha toh avni ne uska haath pakar liya and with out any body seeing she kissed his cheeks and went to mishti.....
avni:"mishti kya hua....."
mishti:"kuch nahi woh ek bad dream yaad aa gaya"
avni:"accha chalo rona band karo and smile..."(mishti smiled and every one continues there breakfast)
after breakfast...in avneil room...
avni:(picking mishti up and spinning her around) "mishti mishti mishti your the best I love you ....apne mera challenge pura karva diya "
neil:(coming in the room)"toh woh rona dona jo mishti be kiya woh fake tha "
avni:"woh actually ..."
flashback starts.....
avni:"mishti aap meri help karo ge plz "
mishti:"haan angle Kya Hua "
avni:"woh actually aapke jo superman hai na unho ne mujhe punishment di hai"
mishti:"accha woh jo aap logo ko ek dosare ko punishment dena tha "
avni:"haan or muhje us punishment ko pura karne ke liye aapki help chahiye aap karoge"
mishti:"haan kya help chahiye "
avni:"tho jab hum kal breakfast Kar rahe hoge then I will signal you and you start crying and when I ask you what happened you will stop crying and say I saw a bad dream okay..."
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mishti:"okay "
flashback ends......
avni:"ab mera punishment puri ho gayi..."
mishti:"aap superman ko kya punishment doge "
avni:"I don't know yet per kuch acchi hi hogi "
neil:(whispering to avni) "waise agar maine jaise diya waise ho toh bahut accha hai"
just than Neil gets a call and he leaves for office where as avni gose to rang mahel disguised....
at rang mehel....
avni:(mind)"chal avni meher ke bare main information dorte hain..."
Avni's point of view starts.....
as I entered rang mehel, I met meher she didn't recognize me we had a talk and from her words it felt like she was very sad and forced to do what she did ......than I heard the head girl talk about selling all the girls here to some Clint.....
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so guys I am here with my next update.....
I hope you like this...
plz do comment and vote.....
and if you have any suggestions for Neil's punishment plz to tell in the comments....
thanks for all the support..
precap:"will avni find about meher and juhi are Same people....how will beik react when he gets to know that avni went to rang mahel..."
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