《Avneil - being with you》Avneil preparation!
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vidihut:"bas bas...chalo...ab ya tumhe...bathroom main hi rehena hai..."
priya:"muhje bhi esa hi lagta hai bhiaya....."
vivan:"bhai ...priya...."
vidihut:"chalo...chale...."
viya(there couple name vivan +priya =viya):"hmmm chalo"
at a Mumbai house ....(vidihut)
vidihut:"yeh hai humhara ghar ab ke liye..."
priya:"wow bhai kitna beutifull hai...."
vivan:"haan bhai..."
vidihut:"hmm woh tumhara kamare hai priya (pointing towards a room) "
vivan:" bhaiya main uske bagal wala kamara le longa aap bahut takalif hogi us kamare main "
priya giggled and blushed while vidihut understood why vivan wanted that room so he smiled...
vidihut:(holding his laughter) "nahi mare liye teri comforbility most important hai toh tu dosara room lele main yeh lelonga..."(* for information there are 3 rooms 2 next to each other and 1 on the opposite side.....)
vivan:(slowly to himself but it was audible to all)"arre priya ke bagal wale kamare me main sabse jayada comfortable rahonga...samjo na..."
vidihut couldn't holdis laughter anymore and busted out laughing like hell....
vivan:"kyun hass rahe ho bhai..."
vidihut:(still laughing) "tum hari halat pe..."
vivan:"bhai (like a kid he said)
vidihut:"accha baba accha jao....aapne favorite kamare main "( saying this he left for the room that was alone in one end...)
suddenly priya's phone rang.....
priya:"vivan main aayi....."
vivan:"hmmm"
in priya's room...
priya:"haan di ..."
her sis:"puch gayi mumbai..."
priya:"haan...."
sis:"good...or sab acche se liya na...or haan apna khayal rakh na or vivan kaisa hai..."
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priya:"di slow down...kitne sawal....vivan theek hai...main aapna khayal rakhongi....or ab aap batao aap kab aa rahi ho....
sis:"jaldi hi ......."
priya:"pakka...."
sis:"haan baba pakka.... chal ab muhje jana hoga...bye...love u take care..."
priya:"hmmm bye di LOVE you too ...."
at cabin of doctor......
girl:"hi doctor main I come in...."
doctor:"oh hi ...aaye na....."
girl:"doctor woh maine test kar vaye the uske reports aa gaye...."
doctor:"ji haan....reports positive hai..."
girl:"positive sacchi...(she became very excited)
doctor:(smiling) "ji ....per ab muhje lagta hai aapko apne pati ko bata dena chahiye.....ye baat unko Janna zarori hai...."
girl:"ji doctor thank you for help ...."
doctor:"no problem...pleasure is mine....."
in khana house....
neil:(to avni)"avni tumhe pata hai...kal bebe ka bithday hai....."
avni:"hmm muhje pata hai bhodho isi liye toh hum yahan kitchen main mile hai....."
neil:"haan toh uske liye kya socha tumne..."
avni:"hmmmm main socha ki main neela maa or mummy ji ko bol ke une bahar ghomne bhag dekhti hoon...tab thak ghar main preparation karte hai....for jab aayengi toh surprise..."
neil:"nice idea....bahut smart or fast hi gayi ho..."
avni:"main bahut smart or fast phele se hi thu sab cheezo main...."
neil:"sivaye ek...."
avni:"woh kya ...."
neil:"romance (coming close to her..)..."
avni:"neil......"
neil:"shhhhhhh"(he keeps his hands on her wrist and pulls her to which she lands on his chest.......he takes a box of nutella and dips 2 finger in it and rubs some chocolatey nutella on her cheeks....
she shivers due to the closeness......then he rubes his cheeks on her to get the chocolate....on his cheeks too.....
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(sorry I couldn't find any other example so had to choose these pics...plz all think this as avneil.....and ignor kaira.....)
mishti:(from outside)"super man.....angle kahan ho..."(Avneil parted and stood properly as mishti entered kitchen)
mishti:"aaj holi hai Kya..."
neil:"kyun mishti aap esa kyun puch rahe ho ...."
mishti:"toh aap dono ke gal pe ye brown brown kya laga hai...."
avni:"kuch nahi mishti...."
neil:(picking up mishti)"aao mishti angle ko chodo hum kehel te hai chalo...."
mishti and neil started playing in a corner while avni was deep in her thoughts.....and she was smiling looking at neil and mishti bond.....
avni:(in mind)"neil kitna khush hai mishti ke saath or mishti bhi Neil ke saath .....koyi ese kaise na khahe ki ye dono paap beti nahi lagte....per sachayi kisko malom.....main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti ki mishti ke bina neil ka kya hoga....or mera kya hoga....mishti ab meri beti jaisi ho gayi hai......(her thought was disturbed by mishti. )
mishti:"angle aap bhi aao na...."(avni nodded)
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precap:"what will happend when Avneil meet vidihut and who is the girl and what report is she talking about... and bebe' s birthday party full of masti...romance.. and what not .."
comment below who is the girl and the report she is talking about....
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