《Avneil - being with you》surprise
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so guys I here with my next part....
hope you enjoyed it....
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well on this one also same 30 votes or more and 20 comment or more....
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avni:(in mind)"neil kitna khush hai mishti ke saath or mishti bhi Neil ke saath .....koyi ese kaise na khahe ki ye dono paap beti nahi lagte....per sachayi kisko malom.....main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti ki mishti ke bina neil ka kya hoga....or mera kya hoga....mishti ab meri beti jaisi ho gayi hai......(her thought was disturbed by mishti. )
mishti:"angle aap bhi aao na...."(avni nodded)
avni:"waise mishti aap ko pata hai aaj kya hai...."
mishti:"haan.....aaj holi hai na....."
neil and avni:(laughing) "aapse kisne kaha aaj holi hai...."
mishti:"aapne hi toh holi keheli dekho......(she said confused....and avneil touch there cheeks and remember they still have the nutella on them ...avni blushed a little remembering there moment which was noticed by neil.....which made him also blush)
mishti:(seeing this)"aap log tomato ki tara laal kyun ho gaye....."
avni:(trying to change topic)" woh woh kuch nahi toh aaj holi nahi aaj bebe ka bithday hai"
mishti:"kya birthday...bebe ka ...means party yehhhhhhh"
neil:"shhhh secret hai.. plan karna hai...okay..."
mishti:"hmmm shhhh"
they plan for party.....at shopping mall....
bebe:" sweata yaar chal ghar chale...."
sweata:"aare bebe itni jaldi abhi to aaye hai....."
neela:"haan bebe thori der or plz..."
bebe:" okay yaar...chalo....."
at home.....
Avneil and mishti were planing...joking and having fun in the kitchen when juhi was passing by.....
juhi:(to herself)" yeh toh muzze kar rahe hain...neil ko aapni beti ki perva hi nahi hai.....neil ko sirf avni or uski beti ki perva hai....muje kuch karna hoga....kya karon...hmmm yes...ye kaam karega...."
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juhi:(entering kitchen crying and breathing heavily) "neil....neil...."
neil:"kya Hua juhi...."
juhi:(hugging neil....)"woh humhari bacchi.....woh..."(saying this she started sobbing Neil felt uncomfortable so he made her sit in the little kitchen table....while this avni told mishti to go play in her room so she dosent get involved in all this mess...)
avni:"juhi first calm down or batao kya hua...."
juhi:"woh neil maine....sapne main humhari bachi dekhki....or usme woh bol rahi this help me ...help me...."
avni:"tumne 12:00pm noon main sapna dekha...."
juhi:"woh woh...woh..."
neil:"kya woh woh juhi bolo..."
juhi:"neil woh main beheti thi humhari bachi ke bareme sochte hue toh ank lag gayi..or fir dekha....(neil and avni were not satisfied with the awnser and neil's cops sence were saying somthing is wrong but he ignored it.... suddenly avni's phone rang....after the conversations she came back and said)
avni:" neil humhare pass sirf ek ganta hai let's do it fast...."
neil:" okay....juhi I have to go bye..(he left with avni)
juhi:"per neil meri baat toh suno...ahhhhh avni ko toh main nahi chodongi...."
after an hr....
bebe:" tum log muhje ye kapade pehen ke ghar kyun leke ga rahe ho.....or ghar main undera kyun hai...."
neela:" pata nahi jake dekho....."
bebe open the door and wakes in as soon as she entered light when on and flowers fell on her and everyone came in and stared singing ...
everyone:"happy birthday to u happy birthday to u happy birthday dear bebe happy birthday to u......"(clapping)
everyones dress.....
prakash:
sweata:
neela:
avni:
neil:
mishti:
juhi:
bebe:
there were no guests just the family members.....cause bebe didn't like to celebrate her birthday with guest she liked to celebrate with only family....the decorations were very simple...but beautiful....
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bebe:"yeh sab....."
avni:"happy birthday bebe.....(she hugged her)
neil:"chalo chalo cake cut karna hai ..."
mishti:"yehhhhh"
cake:
they cut the cake and bebe make everyone eat.....
then they danced and enjoyed there night ...
bebe:"aaj bahut mazza aaya....ab mere gift(she said like a kid)
mishti gave a card saying ..
and inside having a pic of her popping out....and saying love u...
bebe kissed mishti's cheek and said thanks....like this all gave gift and it was time for neil.....
bebe:"tillu mera gift...."
neil:" bebe woh..actully yeh sab main me bhool gaya per avni ne diya na or avni or main toh ek hi hai na...."
all went awwww...
bebe:"baat toh sahi hai tum or avni do hi ho but....do punishment toh milegi..."
neil:" ok kya karna hai..."
bebe:"ek ganna ga.. "
neil:(shocked)"ganna bebe per.. "
bebe:"no per ver sing ..."
neil:"okay per kiske liye.....
bebe:"ahhh avni avni ke liye...
avni:"per bebe..."(she got cut of)
bebe:"no per ver mera birthday hai...neil u sing ..."
neil:"okay...".......he starts singing.....
he takes her hand and starts dancing with her....romantically...
while this juhi was buring in anger and others where awwww
the song ended but Avneil were still lost in each other....
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