《Avneil - being with you》shock.....
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so guys I am here with my next part...
thanks guys for filling in the target....
you guys are great...
now without me talking alot let's get in it...
and it u have anything else u want to see tell me and I Will try to full fill it like I did for juhi seeing avneil kiss so plz tell...
so let's get in story...
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neil was getting ready in front of mirror while avni came out wearing her sari....
avni:(screaming so neil can only hear not others...)"neil.....muhje bukhar lag raha hai..."
neil:(rushing to avni)"fever..avni tum theek toh hona...."
avni:"haan muhje bhukar ho Gaya....pyaar ka bhukar ho gaya....agar tum itne handsome lagoge toh main kya karo...."
neil:"avni....."
Avni:"accha sorry chal chale..."(she starts going....but neil holds her and pulled her back due to which they both fall on the bed avni on neil's lap...)
avni:"kya Kar rahe ho neil...muhje chordo...."
neil:"abhi kuch der pehele kissi ne bola...I look handsome...."
avni:"haan toh lagoge toh main wahi bolongi na...."(her voice died in her mouth as he place his mouth on hers......breaking from the kiss ...he started kissing avni all around her neck and face.....and all she was doing was enjoying and saying his name....suddenly there was a knock on the door...)
sweata:"avni beta...jaldi aa...mishti ka favorite breakfast bana hai tuhje aaj..."
avni:"ji mummy ji aayi...."( she tried to get up but neil pulled her back...)
neil:"kya mummy ji aayi...sab mere pyaar ke dusman hai..kabab main hadi bane aagate hai......."
avni:(laughed at it then kissed neil's cheeks) "awww neil ur too cute...."
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neil:"main or cute abhi bata hoon.....cuteness kya hoti hai..."(before he can hold her she ran out of room and Neil moved his lands through his hair and smiled thinking his and avni moment....)
at breakfast....
all were present except juhi.....
avni made mishti eat and send her to her room so she can talk to the family memeber and juhi about mishti....
avni:"woh humhe aapko bahut bari baat batani hai..."
bebe:"kya Hua beta bol"
neela:"haan bacha bolo na..."
neil:"mom...bebe...dad...neela ma...muhje or avni ko juhi ki beti mil gayi..."
sweata:"kya ...khana..."
avni:" mishti hi neil ki beti hai..."
bebe:"per are u sure..."
avni:"haan bebe ...woh...( she tell them all the things how she did juhi and mishti DNA test and got that mishti is her daughter...)
sweata:"mutlab mishti hi juhi ki beti...or woh vidihut ka yahan aane se koyi fayada nahi..."
neil:"haan per humhe jaldi se use bhej na hoga agar usne mishti ko dekh liya toh..."
prakash:"per jo deal humne sigh ki hai woh 2 months ki hai ...use pehele kuch nahi ho sakta..."
avni:"toh fir 2 months ke liye mishti ko vidihut se chupana hoga"(all nodded)
Juhi:(from back)"kisko kise chopana parega...."
Avni:"woh juhi accha hua tum aagayi...mishti ko chopana parega..."
Juhi:"per kyun..."
Avni:"kyunki mishti tumhari beti hai...who humne DNA test..kiya tha tumhara or mishti ka toh..."
Juhi:(scared and shocked)"DNA ...test...kya results the..."
Avni:"positive...tumhari beti hai......"
Juhi:"wait what...mishti toh tumhari beti hai na..."
Avni:(smiling) "nahi woh tumhari beti hai....actually (she tells juhi how she met mishti and all...)
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Neil:(in head)"yaar...muhje esi kyun feeling ho rahi hai ki juhi kuch chupa rahi hai....or uska reaction DNA test ke upper.... kuch toh hai yaar...(his thoughts were disturbed by bebe)
Bebe:"accha chalo bahut tayari karni hai ...kal holi hai.....aaj holika dahan...toh billu aaj jaldi aana or han kal chuti tum sabki okay..."
Neil:"ji bebe...."
Sweata:"or haan yeh teri or avni ki pehele holi hai toh pata hai na..."
Neil:"haan haan maa...accha chalo main chal sam ko milta hoon..."(saying this neil left and avni and others were plan for tonight)
Juhi:(in mind)"wah... mishti avni or neil ki beti nahi mutlab ab main mishti ka use karke unko alag kar sakti hoon.....or yeh holi holi peheli holi kya lagake rakha hai kal neil ko rang sabse pehele main hi lagaongi koyi ruk sake ph ruk ke dekhaye....or is avni ko toh neil se door karna hi pardega...."
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So guys hope you enjoyed it.....
Plz do vote and comment and tell if u want to see anything in holika dahan or holi function I will surely try to add....
Thanks guys...
Next update after 40votes and 20 comments...
I am sorry for late updates but my session is close to ending so the work load plz other staff makes it hard for me to updated but u will try my best to update as soon as possible....
Precap:"holika dahan and holi...function...who will put the first color on neil juhi ya avni...."
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