《Avneil - being with you》holika dahan
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So guys i am here with my next part......
Hope u enjoy it....
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And thanks for so many votes and comment....This time I am increasing to 50 votes and 30 comments....
Let's get started with this part....
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Everyone was buzy in arranging for the night.......while in mishti's room ...
Mishti was playing with her toys when juhi came in....
Juhi:"mishti dekho main aapke liye kya layi hoon(showing a doll)"yeh lo..."
Mishti:"thank you aunty per muhje nahi chahiye...."
Juhi:"mishti baro se ise baat karte hain..."
Mishti:(takes the gift from her)"yeh lo maine le li aap mere liye gift laye or maine leli ab woh mere marzi ki main khelo ya nahi..."
Juhi:(felt hurted)"tum muhjse ese kyun baat kar rahi hoo"
Mishti:"kyunki aap ne angle or superman ko alag karne ki kushis ki maine dekha use din kitchen main...aap bas wahan se ja rahi thi per fir angle or supermen ko dekh ke ruk gayi or woh drama kiya...aap gandi ho...yahan se gao...."(juhi got so angry that she was about to hit mishti when she heard avni coming)
Avni:(entering)"mishti aapka favorite dish...arre juhi tum yahan..."
Juhi:"haan woh main actully"
Avni:"accha hua tum mil gayi muhje tumse ek important baat karni thi...."
Juhi:"haan bolo"
Avni:"woh 2 months tak mishti ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki tum uski maa ho....vidihut chala gaye fir batadenge...."
Juhi:"hmmm okay..."(avni went and stated playing with mishti)
In evening...avneil room.......
Avni sitting in front of the mirror when neil came from behind and hugged her....
Neil:"hi wify kaisi ho
Avni:"neil tum aa gaye chalo muhje jake ready hona hai for tum bhi ho gao...( saying this she got up to go but neil held her hand..).jo pehena hai woh toh leke jao...."(she looked at him confused...he took out a gift from begain him...)
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Avni:(excited) "yeh mere liye..."
Neil:"haan...."(Avni became so excited that she jumped and hugged neil and kissed him on the cheek.....)
Neil:(eyes popped out)"yeh kya tha...."
Avni:"woh woh excitement me kar diya...."
Neil:"muhje yeh bahut accha laga ab har raat gift lana hoga kiss ke liye...."
Avni:(hits neil on his chest)"chalo muhje tayaar hona hai...."
Neil:"main help kardo...."
Avni:"cheee neil jao..."(she pushes neil out and closed the door..)
.after sometime everyone met in hall....and was waiting for avni to come...
Sweata:(seeing avni come down) "haye kissi ki nazar nah lage..."
Neil was list in Avni and kept staring at her which made acni blush....
Everyone said avni was looking beutifull....
Bebe:"chalo ab chale...holi jalani bhi hai...."
Neela:(shaking neil)"neil muhje pata hai avni sundar hai lekin holi jalani hai...baad main use dekh lena..."(with this neil come back to reality... )
They all went out to the garden where every thing was set....
Everyones dresses....
Bebe:
Neela:
Prakash:
Sweata:
Juhi:
Mishti:
Avni:
Neil:
Bebe:"chalo ab suru karte hain...."
All:"hmmmm"
(*sorry guys actully I have not seen a newly wed couple do holika dahan.....plus I always get confused between lori and holika dahan...yeah I know you guys mught thing I am crazy....well sorry but I will skip the rasams for this but for so the other I will surely show don't worry...)
They all do the pooja....and then after pooja everyone is sitting inside on the sofa while avni with help of mishti is making the rangoli.........
Avni:"bus ho gaya...ab ese hi rehene dete hain ok...."
Mishti:"okay angle...mera kaisa bana hai ...."
Avni:"bahut sundar chalo sabko dekhate hain.."
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Mishti:"okay.....(to all)"superman...ider aao.."
Neil:"kya Hua mishti "
Mishti:"ban gaya..."(Everyone came to see this.. )
Avni made:
Mishti made:
Neil:"dono bahut sundar hai...."
Mishti:" main aapne room main ja rahi hoon..."
Everyone:"okay..."
Sweata:"avni beta bahut accha hai..."
Bebe:"haan putter..."
Prakash:"yeh le tera inam.....(giving a gift)
Avni:"nahi main kaise le sakhti hoon..."
Prakash:"aare papa ko mana nahi karte..main aapni beti ke liye laya..."(Avni took the gift and hugged prakash.....)
Avni:"thanks papa ji...."
Prakash:"papa bhi bolti or thanks bhi..."
Avni:"achha okay...."(Everyone was admiring there bond ...while juhi got bored and thought this is a stupid drama so left from there...This didn't go un notice by Neil.....)
Sweata:"chalo so gao sab kal holi bhi kehlni hai....Avni ki peheli holi hai is ghar main..."
Bebe:"madam madona ne peheli baar kuch sahi bola...."(Everyone laughed)
Sweata:"bebe....."
Avni:"accha chalo sone..."
Everyone when to there room....
Avniel room.....
Laying down on the bed cuddling each other......
Avni:"neil kal humhari peheli holi hai...."
Neil:"hmm ..."
Avni:"or main tumpe pehele rang lagaongi..."
Neil:"nahi main......"
Avni:"dekhte hain..."
Neil:"dekh lena...."
Avni:"accha abhi sote hain...bahut raat ho gayi..."
Neil:"hmmm"( he kissed her forehead and then both slept...)
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So guys i hoped u liked it.....
Plz do vote and comment.....
Thanks for support....
Next update after 50votes and 30comments...
Guys I half a very important thing to ask you.....
Precap:"holi of avneil who will put the first color on each other avni ya neil and will juhi be able to put color on neil or something will happen...let's see..."
So remember 50 votes and 30 comments....
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